Ghenni And the Djinni

Thank you.

To answer your questions, since I'm implying these things rather than spell them out:

I am curious why you capitalized "The Day" and "The Growl". I presume that becomes apparant as the story moves on. [/quote]

Didn't you do that as a child? I know I did it: mentally capitalize some terms to which I ascribes special significance.

[quote]There must be a reason why Ghenni's mom was so upset about her even jesting about sacrificing Lejani. The fact that heir god growls when he is angry only adds to the interest of the story.[/quote]

Well, Mom is deeply religious. :) And yes, the growling does have significance, it has a major impact on the final chapters.

[quote]I look forward to continuing on this adventure. Habbassin has an interesting back story that promises to be thrilling.[/quote]

I think so too, re: Habbassin's backstory. :) I hope you will still think so once you've read it.

Jens,
This is a very interesting story. I like the way the reader is immediatly thrown into the story. The action is compelling and the characters well formed. I have only read the first chapter and look forward to reading more to see what happens with Ghenni and the rest of the kids at the hands of Habbassin.

I am curious why you capitalized "The Day" and "The Growl". I presume that becomes apparant as the story moves on.

The theology is interesting. There must be a reason why Ghenni's mom was so upset about her even jesting about sacrificing Lejani. The fact that heir god growls when he is angry only adds to the interest of the story.
I look forward to continuing on this adventure. Habbassin has an interesting back story that promises to be thrilling.

I wish you the very best of luck with your book,

Sharon Van Orman

Admirable imagination. I will happily shelve your book for 24 h spin, as soon as there is free space.
Best wishes, M
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- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

You have a gifted imagination and the talent for putting it to words! One of my weekly favorites so Im shelving this for 24 hours! Backed 100%

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Thank you.

You have a gifted imagination and the talent for putting it to words! One of my weekly favorites so Im shelving this for 24 hours! Backed 100%

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

I really like how you start your book with dialogue, it is well written and realistic, which propels the reader into the story immediately and keeps the pace flowing well. You have created a most memorable main character in Ghenni and all of this does ensure that your work will appeal to to the Young Adult audience. I have given you a high star rating.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

You are totally fantastic, Jens! :) How can I ever thank you enough for backing my memoirs book? :)
God bless you. :) Love, Susie :) p.s. I just looked to see if I had ******-rated your book & I had :) - could you ****** mine, too? :) I want to ask you if you could please keep my book on your bookshelf as long as possible because I'm 12 from the editor's desk & need to be in the top 5 by the end of November :) - I had a mini-stroke last Wednesday with slurred speech for an hour & numbness of tongue still & 4 smaller ones since & I"d sure like to cross the finish line of the editor's desk after 9 months trying on authonomy. :) Thank you from the bottom of my heart :) - every ******-ing & backing moves our books closer to the editor's desk. :) Thank you from the bottom of my heart for helping me. :) I have lost 3 sisters to strokes & my last sister, Mary had 2 heart attacks earlier this year, so I'm trying to keep on & to cross the finish line of the editor's desk. :)

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