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rank 5466
word count 14464
date submitted 19.11.2010
date updated 13.02.2011
genres: Fiction, Romance
classification: universal
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10 Roses for love

S.Vinay kumar

Love is not just a bond between two hearts but it is something more that lashes them until they leave their hearts.

 

Karthik, a usual bloke who likes fun, friends and a little bit of studies, fell in love with a girl who is gorgeous and handsome in beauty. He is an IITian he know a lot about chips, puzzles, questions and theories but he don’t know how to impress a girl. And of course he failed once. She is very much reserved and never talked to any boy. She loves her dad more than anything and she can do anything for her dad. They met accidentally. She was completely different from him. But he fell in love with her. He never saw a girl like that. They belong to different Castes and she has a kind of feeling that averted her to move freely with him ‘cause he belong to different caste and she was sure that he is not the one for her as he is of different caste. She didn’t want to hurt her dad. In his life he encountered 9 loves stories including his teenage crush who said a big ‘NO’.

 
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curiousturtle wrote 442 days ago

Vinay,

I started reading your Opus and thought I would give you my cent and half:

The first thing that jumps here is the style.

There is a post modern ambition to your writing that is a work in progress.

"the photographic picture of my eyes....."
here we have the camera eye....a post modern device....

"I was confounded....."
the cinematic slow motion

"....and switched to "Tense""
the attempt at disembodiment

"who can understand me me upon seeing my face"
the introduction of a third person perspective in a first person narrative

You obviously have been reading post modernism and trying to develop a style that would accommodate the theory

Is not quite there...but the ambition is what matters my friend....for this takes time

here are some of the post modern masters of authonomy

http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/71866/turtle-s-anthology-the-post-moderns/

my advice is read them, study their technique, re-write the first chapter, then come back and ask me to read it again

David

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Pia wrote 465 days ago

S. Vinay -

10 Roses for Love - I worked a little on your pitch and sent you a message. Thanks for your supopport of CoM, much appreciated. As with The Ark and the Aroma of Peril, you are a great story-teller, so go for it, find a mentor who can support you with polishing the English while maintaining your voice :) Best Success, Pia

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Marija F.Sullivan wrote 468 days ago

'Is she an angel? I am afraid, yes, She lost her way from heaven.'
How lovely! Best wishes for your writing career,
M

- Weekend Chimney Sweep or Happy New Year
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

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Pia wrote 500 days ago

Dear S Vinay, you're not active here, but your vote still counts. Please check my message to you. Thanks, Pia

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