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rank 5445
word count 60693
date submitted 14.10.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Thriller...
classification: adult
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The Corridor

Tim Bragg

Only those with truth and guts to see and face their fear will ever escape; only they will know where and when the corridor ends.

 

The corridor exists - is a metaphor - is a prison - but a prison of the mind. To escape the corridor is to face up to the greatest challenge, the one true fear.

For Christine, a French inmate, it is to be responsible for and to accept the inevitable decay of her body; or to blindly follow her passion for love, life and lust. For the T.V. man ‘the watcher’ it is to be watched...but the T.V. man may only leave the corridor for dark reasons and in dark ways. For Grant, the Catholic American, it is to understand the process of loss of faith; Alexa, his companion; to sin. For the Englishman it is to be strong enough to conquer his obsessive nature.

The boys of the second floor - the prison-guards of the corridor - first become what they most fear - girls - and then their flesh gives way to the feathers and wings of cackling gulls.

It is the corridor of the mind, of all the inmates’ minds, where ideals and cultures clash. It is in the Complex where doctors are the New Priests and where bodies transform or decay; it is an unstable place.

 
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Barry Wenlock wrote 628 days ago

Hi Tim,
I read chapter one and I'm stuck in the corridor and can't escape even if I wanted to, which I don't.
Carlos exorcising Hep with German words, protein by sight and born again chickens convinced me that this is really great writing.

'There is no and yet there is everywhere a system' (Did you mean there is no system?)

Backed with real pleasure. On my list to read more.
Best wishes,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Tim Bragg wrote 622 days ago

Thanks Joanna - the energy folk like yourself put into reading (especially) and critiquing others work is really superb. And helpful and encouraging. (Great to start sentences with "And"!) My energy at the moment is mainly helping a young French translator (she's translating a 300,00 word autobiography!!! and getting paid a pittance). When she's finished this I'm hoping she might translate The Corridor into French - I might have a chance of getting it published! :) Cheers, Tim

Joanna Carter wrote 622 days ago

Hi Tim. This is really interesting; truly original, quirky and well written. Tiny nitpick - the cartoons you refer to were Hanna-Barbera. I'm coming back to read more of this, but putting you on my shelf now.
Joanna
Fossil Farm

Tim Bragg wrote 627 days ago

Hi Barry - re The Corridor - "there is no and there is everywhere a system" means there is a system but it is hidden - from the character's point of view...
Hope I've put Krishna on my watch list - and will put on book shelf...I'm just slow!

Barry Wenlock wrote 628 days ago

Hi Tim,
I read chapter one and I'm stuck in the corridor and can't escape even if I wanted to, which I don't.
Carlos exorcising Hep with German words, protein by sight and born again chickens convinced me that this is really great writing.

'There is no and yet there is everywhere a system' (Did you mean there is no system?)

Backed with real pleasure. On my list to read more.
Best wishes,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Eunice Attwood wrote 641 days ago

Great premise. Well thought out and original. Well done. Backed with pleasure. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

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Eunice Attwood wrote 641 days ago

Congratulations on a well written stoory. Great premise and original idea. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

Burgio wrote 777 days ago

Wow. What an imaginative story. It's hard to tell at points what is real and what is not, but that's okay. It kept me reading to try and figure that out. I like the way you have long strings of dialogue. Sets a fast pace for this. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

Evan Palmer wrote 1102 days ago

Tim, story has great potential. read 3 chapters.. the strong point - the idea of the corridor, the language disconnects between various characters.. sundry feedback: consider more description of characters & surroundings esp. at beginning. we need more about the corridor and who runs it.. at the start would be good.. bits and pieces but more than the current nil. who's in charge? exactly what is the corridor? can't wait too long to spell it out. I'm sure if you expand the best segments and the story will come alive. Good luck.. evan

Tim Bragg wrote 1309 days ago

Fair comment re the amount of characters in the beginning - it does hone in and I admit it to be a gamble but the whole book is about sorting out the confusion and what is REALLY going on. Out of necessity each character gets their turn...Thanks for reading as far as you did. Cheers.

moira wrote 1309 days ago

Hi Tim, I have just read the first chapter of The corrider and I am confused. I think the big problem for me is that there are too many characters for the beginning. You started with Carlos who was quite amusing and then moved on to Grant and Vi and Perdo and others. Charachters need to find their voice and I need to be able to recognise that voice to want to read on. sorry but I can't back this.

Crispin wrote 1311 days ago

Nice one Mr Bragg another triumph!

Tim Bragg wrote 1311 days ago

In the midst of recording more music so I'm unable to participate as much as I would like (at the moment) - depressing to see no comments; so here's the first!

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