Sealed with a Kiss

Well wriiten, touching and thoroughly enthralling. The very best of luck with this. yours Bea

Hi Rachael
I've just finished reading 'Sealed with a Kiss' and it was like spending an afternoon curled up on the sofa chatting to an old friend. I like Kate which obviously helps as it makes you want to read more about her. I hope there's a happy ending! You're on my watchlist and I've starred the book as well. Once I get space on my bookshelf, I'll back you.
Jane (Jedye)

Have only read one chapter as i'm all read out for the minute, but I'll be back. Fantastic first chapter, love the way they break up

Silvachilla
The Secret Diary

I read the whole thing in one sitting... I am gutted there isn't any more to read. I absoloutely love it and would buy this immediately if I had the chance! Fantastic! I've given you 6*, and backed it! I only ask one thing... please message me when you've added more!!?
Rebecca

This story is soooo good so far! I have only read a few chapters so far, but I am very impressed. Great detail and attention to characters! I can't wait to see what happens in the rest of the book.

I am dying to know what happens with Kate!

-Sara

This story is fabulous! This is the kind of book that just calls to you when its rainy out and you want to curl up and read the day away. I absolutely cannot wait to read the book when it is all finished!!

I think this is one of those books I wish I could run down to the bookstore to buy. I've read a couple chapters and am really ennjoying where it's going. Love your beginning, it's exactly what you want to hook the readers, it will definitely drive them on. Characters are strong, I liked them right away and wonder where I can meet a guy like Roderick. Sure he's a bit surly but he['ll warm up I'm sure of it. I love these kinds of books and all I can say is you're on the right track with this one. It's a wonderful blend of romance and humor and escapism. Nice job on the story. I'll definitely back this in a couple days.

Missy

I love romance novels with a twist of humor . . . silly, sometimes stupid things happening and bringing two people together who might not have noticed each otherwise. I loved the whole falling in the mud puddle and being picked up by Roderick, she thought it clumsy an he thought it probably adorable.

I am so looking forward to more . . . great job.

No writing is perfect, mine is far from it, I am backing because this is something that I would buy and enjoy. Best of luck in your continued writings.

Lisa

PS~ Since you like and write romance, you might enjoy my book "Cheyenne," it's the first in the Timeless Series. It's a YA book with romance and fantasy, fiction laced throughout.

This is another one I'd rather have in hardcopy in order to read at my leisure. This is the kind of story I love to read and Lord knows I haven't done much non-authonomy reading lately. Backed and rated.

Cat
Twisted
Lies & Love

Hi Rachael, so sorry I've taken so long to return your read. I've gotten round to it now and I'm glad I did! You write really well and it promises an excellent read.
Perfect opening! Great first paragraph (the first paragraph is so important!) and great first chapter.
Second chapter starts the intrigue all over again with the line: "You can't just go and live on an island!" It made me think right away: Oh yes you can!
I can tell you've spent a lot of time on this. I'll read on before I decide whether to put it on my shelf. You may need to wait a couple of days anyway, before I have some room.
Becky x

Absolutely LOVED this story! Kate, her break-up, her new job, the quaint island, the charming cottage, the new dog, and a wonderfully colorful cast of characters all make for a well-spun story of newfound independence, love, and adventure. A most engaging chick book--brilliant!

Ahhh! I sat down to read it all in one sitting tonight with only one disappointment- I wanted more! I look forward to reading the rest as the novel continues to unfold. So far it holds true many human encounters that many of us can relate to. One major theme coming to mind is a door being closed for a window to open. As any dog owner knows who began with a puppy, they do get into everything and chew it all up just like you describe so clearly. You took me back to those challenging days of trying to manage a career and a young canine. Your writing makes me feel like your character, Emma, from a place further away wanting to know more of what will happend next in her dear friend's life. I felt very much present on the island with Kate. The emotions of the break-up as well as the uncertainty behind the kiss were described in such real terms that I could put myself in the character's shoes as well as in her head. Let me know when you put more up.
-Alison

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Alison - having trouble putting up more as the site seems a bit sticky - will let you know when I have. R x

Really enjoying this. Great setting, nice pace, character we can empathise with, and plenty of things to read on for, not least the promise of romance. Backed!

Thank you! And yes, there is definitely a promise of romance for you in there!

R
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Two chapters in and I'm finding this a most enjoyable and easy read. Just the thing to relax with.

thanks Ariom, that's really lovely to hear! R x

Two chapters in and I'm finding this a most enjoyable and easy read. Just the thing to relax with.

Really enjoying this. Great setting, nice pace, character we can empathise with, and plenty of things to read on for, not least the promise of romance. Backed!

Hi Rachael, I've just read the first few chapters of this, and am engrossed. Your writing, characterisation and story are all spot on. I will read more later, but I am very happy to back this.
Vall (Midwyf)

Ahhh! I sat down to read it all in one sitting tonight with only one disappointment- I wanted more! I look forward to reading the rest as the novel continues to unfold. So far it holds true many human encounters that many of us can relate to. One major theme coming to mind is a door being closed for a window to open. As any dog owner knows who began with a puppy, they do get into everything and chew it all up just like you describe so clearly. You took me back to those challenging days of trying to manage a career and a young canine. Your writing makes me feel like your character, Emma, from a place further away wanting to know more of what will happend next in her dear friend's life. I felt very much present on the island with Kate. The emotions of the break-up as well as the uncertainty behind the kiss were described in such real terms that I could put myself in the character's shoes as well as in her head. Let me know when you put more up.
-Alison

Ha. The comedy comes in a bit later, but it's more humour than slapstick. (Mind you there is a little of that, too!)

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, I really appreciate it. I'm going to have a read of your book now!

Rachael
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Good morning Rachael. I was feeling a little depressed so I thought I'd try a little romance to cheer me up. Read your first chapter this morning. It sounds a lot like real life to me; too much so. I did not get the impression that this is a comedy, which is what I was looking for.

Tour narrative is - very real, very good. I'm still trying to get used to British-style dialogue, but it seems to flow quite naturally as well. I think there's a story here but should probably read a little more to get its full effect. By the way, here in the States, it would have been the guy that leaves the furniture; and he's be lucky to get a nickle.

Anyway, I think you're off to a good start with a light read. If you have an opportunity and want to take a shot back at me, please read a chapter or two of my book, A PLACE IN LIFE, and let me know what you think.

Many thanks.

Old Bob
A PLACE IN LIFE

I love love love this book! Can't wait to read more!

More coming soon! Thank you xxx

I love love love this book! Can't wait to read more!

Good morning Rachael. I was feeling a little depressed so I thought I'd try a little romance to cheer me up. Read your first chapter this morning. It sounds a lot like real life to me; too much so. I did not get the impression that this is a comedy, which is what I was looking for.

Tour narrative is - very real, very good. I'm still trying to get used to British-style dialogue, but it seems to flow quite naturally as well. I think there's a story here but should probably read a little more to get its full effect. By the way, here in the States, it would have been the guy that leaves the furniture; and he's be lucky to get a nickle.

Anyway, I think you're off to a good start with a light read. If you have an opportunity and want to take a shot back at me, please read a chapter or two of my book, A PLACE IN LIFE, and let me know what you think.

Many thanks.

Old Bob
A PLACE IN LIFE

Hello Rachael, This is my kind of story: wonderful writing, well rounded characters. Have read three chapters and would like to read more, so on my watchlist it will go. Starred highly. Will back when room on my shelf.
My stories are: PAPER DREAMS and A PASSING STORM if you feel like reading one of them.
Best wishes.

Phyllis

Hi Phyllis, and thank you so much! I have left you a message on your page - just going to read your book now! Rachael x

I am new to this site and putting the finishing touches to my own submission. Finding my way around I stumbled across your work. Your book isn't of the genre I read or write, but good writing should be commended in whatever form, and having read the first chapter I can see that this is well crafted and would appeal to the romance reading public. There are inevitable tweaks, but every novel in the history of literature could be tweaked a little more, and there is too much good to be focused on to concern yourself with negativity for negativity's sake. Congratulations on being that little further down the road to successful authorship.

Thank you so much. And yes, tweaking - I spoke to an author friend recently who admitted she often looked at her published books and thought 'noooo, why did I write that?'. I've only recently joined Authonomy too - it's a lovely site. If a little (well, a lot) slow!

I am new to this site and putting the finishing touches to my own submission. Finding my way around I stumbled across your work. Your book isn't of the genre I read or write, but good writing should be commended in whatever form, and having read the first chapter I can see that this is well crafted and would appeal to the romance reading public. There are inevitable tweaks, but every novel in the history of literature could be tweaked a little more, and there is too much good to be focused on to concern yourself with negativity for negativity's sake. Congratulations on being that little further down the road to successful authorship.

Hello Rachael, This is my kind of story: wonderful writing, well rounded characters. Have read three chapters and would like to read more, so on my watchlist it will go. Starred highly. Will back when room on my shelf.
My stories are: PAPER DREAMS and A PASSING STORM if you feel like reading one of them.
Best wishes.

Phyllis

I have spent so far 2 nights after all my kids are tucked in for the night reading. I find myself laughing out loud with that "nervous" laughing feeling over the tiny little details you have included. Can't wait for more!!

I'm not quite done with this yet but Im enraptured. This is lovely. Well written with the exception of some passive voice that can easily be repaired in the editing process. Watch your had beens and was's. They steal your action right out of your story. Instead of saying "had been looking" use "looked" makes for a much more active sentence, wouldn't you agree? Any way well done! I'm going to put this on my bookshelf and keep reading. Your characters are charming and the way you descriibe the island makes me want to visit. I'm American so I'm a little lost on some of the dialogue but it really didn't distract from your story. Good Luck with it.

If you have time, I'd love your opinion on my YA story.
Kelly Abell
The Haunted Mirror

Read in a single sitting - I want to know more! I can tell I'm just going to hate Fiona. Let me know if you paste any extra chapters - please! Sue

Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Leonie / turquoisefloyd on Twitter

Thank you Leonie! I am so pleased you enjoyed it!

Still lovin' this. I really want to know what happens, so if you upload more ,or publish, let me know. I'd buy this book.
Cheers Jacoba

Oh that is just LOVELY to hear. Hooray. Thank you! xxx

Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Leonie / turquoisefloyd on Twitter

Still lovin' this. I really want to know what happens, so if you upload more ,or publish, let me know. I'd buy this book.
Cheers Jacoba

Loved the first 3 chapters!!!! This is my kind of book! I'll read more when family health issues settle, but you have my backing : )

Thank you so much for backing my book, and hope things settle down at home soon.

Rachael x

Finally finished, and I have to agree with many of your comments that this is great chick lit. Just the kind of story thtat absorbs me for hours on end. I’m a bit put out that’s there isn’t any more. I’d love to read on so let me know if you upload more chapters.
The idea of Kate meeting a charming land owner and fitting into this small tight nit community without much of a hitch, warms your heart and makes you fall in love with this charming island. I wish my time in Scotland had mirrored this, instead I was left isolated in a bed and breakfast four miles from anywhere, being asked to work to all hours of the night with hardly any food to eat with no prince charming in sight. ( A very sad tale indeed!!)
This is definitely one for my bookshelf, after I’ve put up some others that have been on my watchlist for a while. 6 star rating for now
Well done!!
Just a couple of little edits you might consider fixing.
Roderick’s hand’s fingers ( I’d just say Roderick’s fingers)
In chapter four you say …Emma was pointing at her ( I think you mean Susan)

Thank you! I worked for a summer on the Isle of Skye and it wasn't quite as warm and welcoming as my fictional island. But as newlyweds we lived on the Island of Bute, and people there were fantastic. If I can ever get the site to work, I'll update - but I am struggling to upload more chapters!

Thank you so much for the six star rating. I am really very touched. It was terrifying putting the book up here, and people have been really kind.

Rachael
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Hello - found you here! This is perfect chick lit, and now I might have to dislike you a little bit because it's really rather brilliant. You have nailed this in my humble opinion. I'm sure you'll do well here and with getting an agent. You deserve it! xx

Oooooh. That is so lovely of you! Fingers crossed an agent feels the same way. We'll be doing book signings together at Cybermummy 2012! xx

Finally finished, and I have to agree with many of your comments that this is great chick lit. Just the kind of story thtat absorbs me for hours on end. I’m a bit put out that’s there isn’t any more. I’d love to read on so let me know if you upload more chapters.
The idea of Kate meeting a charming land owner and fitting into this small tight nit community without much of a hitch, warms your heart and makes you fall in love with this charming island. I wish my time in Scotland had mirrored this, instead I was left isolated in a bed and breakfast four miles from anywhere, being asked to work to all hours of the night with hardly any food to eat with no prince charming in sight. ( A very sad tale indeed!!)
This is definitely one for my bookshelf, after I’ve put up some others that have been on my watchlist for a while. 6 star rating for now
Well done!!
Just a couple of little edits you might consider fixing.
Roderick’s hand’s fingers ( I’d just say Roderick’s fingers)
In chapter four you say …Emma was pointing at her ( I think you mean Susan)

Hello - found you here! This is perfect chick lit, and now I might have to dislike you a little bit because it's really rather brilliant. You have nailed this in my humble opinion. I'm sure you'll do well here and with getting an agent. You deserve it! xx

Really enjoying this, will come back to finish off the last two chapters and comment.
Cheers Jacoba

Loved the first 3 chapters!!!! This is my kind of book! I'll read more when family health issues settle, but you have my backing : )

And? And? I want to know what happens next!

as soon as I can get the site to work I'll update it!

And? And? I want to know what happens next!

This is without doubt one of my favourite books that I have read on this site! The opening is very moving, and I love that your protagonist decides to escape to a Scottish island. I think you have a great balance between dialogue and description, so I feel I can picture the scene in my mind. And I LOVE Thor too.. can I have him?! I wish you lots of success with this.. you really deserve it. Best wishes, Emily

Ooh, Emily, thank you SO much. I love Thor too. He's based on someone I knew.

This is without doubt one of my favourite books that I have read on this site! The opening is very moving, and I love that your protagonist decides to escape to a Scottish island. I think you have a great balance between dialogue and description, so I feel I can picture the scene in my mind. And I LOVE Thor too.. can I have him?! I wish you lots of success with this.. you really deserve it. Best wishes, Emily

:) I will comment on your book as soon as I have read it :) - let me know. :) Love, Susie :) p.s. I have gold ******-rated your book because of "Kate falling for someone on the rebound."

Hi Susie,

I'll look forward to hearing what you think! Off to have a look at yours now!

Oh this is ridiculously good chick lit, and really well written for a first draft too!
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Look forward to reading more, let me know if you upload any more. Will pop on my bookshelf, am due a space tomorrow after one gets to the ED, in the meantime I have star rated it.
Jo

Hi Jo! Glad you liked it - although it's not quite a first draft. I've had a (very encouraging) rejection from an agent already, and it's going out to some agents this week once I've done some more fiddling. If I can persuade Authonomy to work I'll upload some more tonight!

Oh this is ridiculously good chick lit, and really well written for a first draft too!
The Girl Friday job bit is similar to a couple of chick lit books I have read, but I think the seals / Scottish theme is enough to make it a bit different. I particularly liked the opening bit at the wedding- at this rate she wouldn't even like him let alone love him- really made me chuckle. A good range of characters so far too.

Look forward to reading more, let me know if you upload any more. Will pop on my bookshelf, am due a space tomorrow after one gets to the ED, in the meantime I have star rated it.
Jo

:) I will comment on your book as soon as I have read it :) - let me know. :) Love, Susie :) p.s. I have gold ******-rated your book because of "Kate falling for someone on the rebound."

Wish I could read more!

your wish is my command!

Wish I could read more!