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rank 5445
word count 12923
date submitted 01.03.2011
date updated 20.12.2011
genres: Fiction, Fantasy
classification: universal
incomplete

Sarasha the Lame

Gordon A. Long

Defeated and beached by the tyrannical Priest-Admiral and his Masterships, the crew of the Sea Eagle struggles to survive in the new, hostile environment ashore.

 

Beached and battleworn, former Priest-Captain Tourn and his crew search for ways to cope with the cataclysmic reshaping of their lives. Local farmers hire a troop of mercenaries to push them back into the ocean. The Masterships will soon return to stamp out the heretics for good. Looming over all is the threat of being unprepared for winter on the windswept prairie.

Sarasha is the Priest-Captain’s Scribe, a strong leader having difficulty getting her followers to think for themselves. She is further hampered by continuous pain from a debilitating injury incurred in the final battle. She vents her frustration through her acerbic wit, which entertains and intimidates her friends as well as her foes.

The sacrifices required to defeat the enemy leave her despondent in the time of victory, questioning the value of continuing the struggle. Only her relentless will and her people’s need spur her on, riding out into a new life in the Ocean of Grass.

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action, adventure, battle, humour, strong female character

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elmo2 wrote 137 days ago

i read the offering here, and it strikes me as "romanatic", in a fictional historical setting, the somewhat florid writing fits, though i did think some of the technical details in the first chapter might put some who are interested more in the advancement of the story off, it asks them to know a bit more about ships, i think we have a story here centered around a heroine, and though strong heros are not my cup of tea i will give any story the right to have them, the dialogue seems to be dramatic in that it is always advancing, sort of a sword play with a deisred end, i believe this wil be a fun and gratfying read, i see the author was clever enough to skp ahead and give us to later chapters so the reader could see some scope, i starred this well, best wishes

Nigel Fields wrote 386 days ago

Gordon,
Oh, what I've read here definitely piques interest. Sarasha the Lame is more than worthy.
Writing: I like how the writing and the action cooperate, neither impeding the other. And you write 'pain' well. Great opening--from Sarasha's high vantage point, then the questioning of her father's tactics, followed by his brilliant maneuver.
Characters: Sarasha, Priest-Captain father, mother and Yong, all immediately real, likeable and sympathetic.
I think my favourite technique in this beginning is the personalizing of the ship. My heart ached when I read: The dying ship responded as she always did . . . There was a sudden, awful stillness. Sarasha could hear the rumble of the recedeing waves and the cry of a gull. She stared at her mast, the mainstay of her life, lying across the bowcastle. sniff. :)
Bravo . . . and six stars.
Cheers!
John B Campbell

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