You Die; I die - Love Poems

Nikhil, had another read of some poems, so good

Nikhil, someone on Authonomy gave me some good feedback and that was to put paras in my pitch. This keeps people interested instead of them thinking it is a long read. Just a suggestion as I do want you, well everyone to succeed. I personally love poetry always have, so when I saw your book up, it was a given. However poetry for me should not be read and left. I do love to sit with each poem, feeling it like a picture. Yes I agree with you love, immortal love as you put it does tower. You are an open soul Nikhil and have shared and bared your open heart. It is wonderful that no matter how beaten or hurt, we have a capacity to come back and love some more. You capture this in your work. Well crafted and BACKED WITH PLEASURE. A look at 'The Letter' and giving your "comments and "backing " would really be appreciated . BEST OF LUCK
Denise (The Letter) It is about LOVE also, LOVE that transcends time and space

Realy well done, sigh. Good luck. E. Loraine Royal Blood Chronices book one

Dear Nikhi, I love you love poems - my heart melts when I read them - I wish I had someone that loves me that much. :) Your pitch was very well done - enough to set the hook for me to read your book. :) You created interest by each lovely poem, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what you will say next. I'm "backing" your book. :) "When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved"...authonomy quote. :) Please "back" my TWO memoir books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & my completed memoir unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which tells at the end, my illness now & 6th abusive marriage." Thanks, Susie :)
additional authonomy quote: "Every time you place a book on your bookshelf, your recommendation pushes the book up the rankings. And while that book sits on your bookshelf, your reputation as a talent spotter increases depending on how well that book performs." :)

This is quite a good read. Well done,
Barry

wow this is beautifully beautifully written. amazing superb brillant writing here.
-Cara

You Die, I Die

Hi Nikhil, What crystal prose, sharp, difficult to pick up without your fingers slipping and with the promise of a cut, a deep one. You have certainly got a unique turn of phrase, rolling sentences, impressive vocabulary, aching, yearning the poetry is certainly doing that. Gushing in some places, unsure if the phrase miraculously ubiquitous feet works, it is certainly original as I have never seen a sentence with those two words resting against each other before.

Unique and demanding - Andrew W.

I have read the first chapter, and i love it! great repetition.

I think your writing is unique and memorable, but I think it would be even better without all the adverbs.

Perhaps I just don't get poetry but I found these to be a little complicated for my liking. I am, however, very impressed with the range of your vocabulary. Poetry has such a hard time breaking through as it is, I find it strange (if you want to sell widely) that you raise the bar for your audience in this way. There isn't a single piece of imagery that isn't upgraded to it's most pompous in the 5 or 6 that I read, which put me off a little.

However, you've obviously put a lot into them and emotions are always what's important in poetry, and I see from your profile that you've done well with your work, so well done =)