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rank 2699
word count 10376
date submitted 10.04.2011
date updated 15.03.2012
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Crime
classification: universal
incomplete

The Weight of Paper

Liz Hoban

People aren’t always who they seem. When your own child is in question, how far would you go to find answers?

 

My name is Dr. Matthew Germaine and I am what is known as a profiler. I look at a dead body and figure out who, why, what, when, and where. In addition to my career, I’ve been singlehandedly raising my daughter, Jane, for the past two years after her mother, Sophia, left home one day and never came back.


When Sophia’s decomposed body washes up on Star Lake Central, some two years after she’d supposedly left town, my world takes a turn I couldn’t have predicted if my life depended on it. Unfortunately, now my life with Jane’s does depend on it. Jane thinks we’re on an adventure of a lifetime but we are on the run for answers. I wonder if the old adage is true: be careful what you look for, you may find it. At this point, the only thing I know for certain, I will fight to the death. I’m not giving Jane back!


This is a story that challenges the human spirit, and questions whether love itself is enough to survive and be happy. Told predominately in the first person, The Weight of Paper is complete at 86,000.

 
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Harehound wrote 22 days ago

Liz,
I am not really the right person to crit this genre but you were kind enough to take an interest in "Conclusive" so I have read (very swiftly) all the chapters that you have uploaded. The pace is fast and the scene-changes equally so. I think that is right for this genre - although I did find the quick changes from description to action and back in the first chapter a bit disorientating.

I imagine that it is written for the reader who likes fast-paced action-packed crime-thriller stuff, with a decent about of mystery thrown in - in which case i think you are writing this very well and I imagine that your readers will stay with the book. It is one hell of a sight better than the vast majority of crime stuff that is around so I really hope - and think - that you will find a publisher for it.
Harehound (for Belia) - 'Conclusive"

Monica Pride wrote 100 days ago

Hey there,
I just checked out the first couple chpts. after looking at your page, and this is a really great read! But actually, I was going to ask you to check out my book, Words God Gave Me, because I saw you are a top talent spotter, then got to reading yours. Love the title, thats what drew me in. I like it so much, I put it on my watch list. You don't have to do the same unless you actually enjoy my book. I am looking for constructive criticism, feed-back, and advice, especially since you have written considerably more than I. I have started three others, but they may take a while to finish.
Words is some auto-biographical, some tesitmonial, and fully poetic. It's a true-life story.
I thank you in advance for reading and commenting on it,
Monica Pride

Su Dan wrote 185 days ago

you writing style is original; it had a type of rythym that gives your book character and great feel...
l shall back...
read SEASONS...

writerwithacause wrote 212 days ago

Hello,
This is a really good book. I stopped reading at chapter 5 because I didn't want to get to 8 and have to wait. I do have a question at the beginning in one of the first few chapters I thought you said that Matt was there when Jane was born and now you are saying he wasn't there. The story is easy to read and very believable. I'm shelving. Lisa

Hermione wrote 213 days ago

Not sure I'm reading this right... you've been on the site for more than two years,you have three books, all unfinished, all apparently excellent, but you have a book with an editor. Is that one finished? I'll happily give you six stars, but I need endings, otherwise what's the point?

Iceman61 wrote 294 days ago

Liz,you've got to post more of this, it's so good. Chapter 8 needs some editing for misspellings, nothing too severe, though.

Are you aware that you do a double space between all your sentences? I noticed it because it's something I used to do until an editor pointed it out.

If this is complete, you should be submitting this to agents. As with your other works you can tell a story in a professional manner. You could so easily find yourself with a publishing deal. Keep going for it.

Gary Sweeney Some Time In New York.

strachan gordon wrote 337 days ago

dear liz,thankyou so much for backing 'A Buccaneer' over the next few days I will try to access some of your work and give you some feedback,Strachan

Jen Small wrote 337 days ago

the scenes are set very well in this, which is good for a person like me, who likes loads of description in which to place the characters. i like the way the tension builds,too.
one to watch
jen

Mildred Colvin wrote 344 days ago

This is written in a way that keeps the reader reading. Very good job!
Mildred

DreamWalking wrote 355 days ago

This is my favourite of the three books you have on here. You are a natural story teller and I like the way you build the plot. Your characters are very believable and three dimensional. I have learned a lot from reading some of each of your books.
I look forward to seeing the finished products.
all the best
Aka

pilot/writer wrote 379 days ago

Excellent writing and a book I hope gets fully posted because I want to read more. Who is Jane?

HS
Priority Gal

dee farrell wrote 388 days ago

Chapter 1-3

This is a strong story from the opening paragraph. The plot develops easily, and I like the way we are introduced to the main character in small doses rather all the info in one paragraph. We have time to reflect and absorb his character, etc., instead of being inundated with details.
But it is in the details that the author sets up the conflict, pairing the absurdity of a man smoking outside a cancer center with a "mother" without a uterus. The author is skillfully leading us into the mystery, and bingo, we're hooked.
Nicely done.
Dee Farrell
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