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rank 318
word count 67276
date submitted 04.11.2008
date updated 19.02.2012
genres: Historical Fiction, Crime
classification: universal
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Greenwood Tree

B.Lloyd

Pagan gods don’t walk away just because you stop looking at them. The Gronny Patch sleeps. Perhaps it dreams. Or perhaps not . . .

 

Georgian Lichfield society is enthralled by the arrival of dashing ex-officer Orville; he charms his way into the salons, grand houses and even a great inheritance from extrovert Sir Morton – very unexpectedly.
After making himself unpopular and bankrupt, he ends up dead under mysterious circumstances in the Gronny Patch, an eerie parcel of land on his estate that is associated in local legend with the Green Man.

A hundred years later (in the 1920s), detective writer Julia Warren returns to her home in Lichfield to write her next novel. Initially she hopes to find material from the past and set it in the present. Aunt Isobel, in the middle of making preparations for the annual midsummer ball, has managed to root out an old journal from 1780, which might prove a source of inspiration. Once Julia starts reading her ancestor’s journal she becomes absorbed in solving the mystery surrounding officer Orville and Gronny Patch. Detective fever takes her over, and she moves from reality to legend as the Green Man stalks her dreams; events from the past seem set to re-enact themselves in the present, and she finds herself unravelling more than one mystery.


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Anna Rossi wrote 805 days ago

I would buy this immediately, if I came across it in a bookshop. The writing is superb, the plot brilliant. I've read several chapters and will definitely be coming back for more when I have the time. I love the switching between centuries which works so well and has such an authoritative ring. The descriptions of Regency life brings the period alive, while the sleep walking scene is a brilliant beginning.
Backed with pleasure.
Anna (Black Damask)

Jared wrote 838 days ago

This is an intelligent and thoughtful novel, well researched and written with great style and flair. I can appreciate the depth of your research as the sense of period is very effectively conveyed, both from the Regency period and the 1920s.
I've only had time to read 5 chapters, but this is a novel I would choose for myself. Skilful work and a pleasure to read. Backed with enthusiasm.
Jared.

Louise Galvin wrote 943 days ago

This is rich, noisy and lively; a bright mosaic of colour and pattern and texture. Your voice really appeals to me. There’s an attractively visual quality to your style and an appealing sound to your language too. This feels wonderfully, busily, authentic.

Having just read your first two chapters, were I loitering in Waterstones, I would buy this.

Margaret Anthony wrote 935 days ago

I've looked forward to reading this. I really don't know how I've missed it for so long. My favourite genre and the pitch and plot enticed me. I wasn't disappointed in anything I found. Beautiful mature writing and a story being revealed little by mysterious little. Visual and atmospheric too.
You've clearly researched and it shows. I only comment as a reader, leave the rest to those more competent. I've enjoyed all I read and do wonder why this isn't further ahead than it is.
On my shelf, I hope that helps a little. Margaret.

Pierre Van Rooyen wrote 1099 days ago



Dear B,



Happy to see the Literary genre. And enhanced by Historical too. One has to put research and thought into such a work.

Well Orville didn’t last very long, did he? I thought he was the main character but you killed him off in the fourth line of your synopsis. I got quite a shock. Ah, but now we have detective-writer Julia Warren. Even better. Good concept for a lot of fun.

Highly approve of that prologue. I know about sleepwalking. My brother always opening the front door. Accomplished writing. Lots of experience behind this. Julia come across well. I am going to like her.

1783. Didn’t expect that. Now I am intrigued. This is very good. A real treat. Minor comment that the writing might be tightened here and there but leave it be. That would be fanatical polishing.

Very impressed with the style of writing. The sentence construction. Often non-sentences with no verb. Make no mistake, the style is very effective.

And I detect a mischievous author. Tee-hee.

Curious about the dialogue in script format. Not complaining. Fascinating really and you’re getting away with it, probably because of the period.

And the way you handle the coach luggage scene. Nice work. A lot of thought went into that. Makes me think you don’t write, but you live the scene in order to get it so cinematic.

I’m having a fine time because I am relieved of critiquing. Pleased to meet Orville in the flesh. Scrutinized the dialogue and found it superb. Truncated as it should be.

Occurring to me now that authors of the period wrote their dialogue as you do. Right for the times. Me, slow to wake up to what you are doing.

You paint very good pictures.

Greenwood Tree enthusiastically on my bookshelf.

I have nothing but admiration and not a single suggestion. My wish for you is that an editor trawling the Literary genre picks you up.

All the best and go well with your writing. I struggle and am forever reworking my stuff.

Kind regards,



Pierre.

The Little Girl in the Fig Tree

patio wrote 27 days ago

Greenwood Tree is simple magnificent.

Su Dan wrote 160 days ago

this has a great feel and complete...good narrative and clever style...very good book...
backed...
read SEASONS...

Wanttobeawriter wrote 167 days ago

GREENWOOD TREE
This is an interesting story. I like the way you shift from the past to the present. I think the conversation between Mrs. Rawnsley and Mrs. Glass, written as if it was a script for a play is innovative; a great way to supply back story without it bogging down the pace of things. I’m adding this to my shelf. Wannabeawriter: Who Killed the President?

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 183 days ago

Here there lies, languishing this three years past, a book project that any self-respecting author, or indeed aspiring amateur would feel constrained to act upon expeditiously.

Why has it lain thus, abandoned and unloved? Within its pages there is much to be pleased about, though at times a confusion of tenses and dates cannot have eased your readers' minds. Yet such trifles as these, even such strangeness as a dialogue more suited to a play than a novel, are so easily mended, that they beg your attention.

Is it lack of time or interest that constrains you thus far to do nothing? Or is it the oxygen of publicity that is needed, to fan the flames of your enthusiasm? Pray do tell, author and put me out of my misery.

With fond regards, and hopes for the eventual revival of this appealing tale.

Fran Macilvey, "Trapped"

penelopeann wrote 208 days ago

Loved the pastiche of folklore, eighteen century manners and detective fiction.

RichardBard wrote 280 days ago

Hi B.Lloyd!

It wouldn't let me send you a message so I hope it’s okay that I’m sending this through your book comment:

I’d like to thank you for backing BRAINRUSH (a Thriller) last year. Because of you it hit the Authonomy Number-1 slot, attracted an agent, and landed a film option. Now that’s a brain-rush! The formal book launch is September 1st and the sequel will be released in December. None of this would have been possible without your help. So, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!

Sincerely,
Richard Bard, BRAINRUSH

PS. If you want a good laugh, check out the temporary book-trailer video on the BRAINRUSH website. It’s there as a placeholder for the upcoming professional video. The current one features children and it’s guaranteed to make you smile! And yes, the younger kid on the screen is really me. You can see the video at www.RichardBard.com. The link is also on my Authonomy profile page. While you’re there, check out the “Feel the Rush” promotion that will get you BRAINRUSH plus 2 FREE thrillers from the Kindle Top-20 PAID Bestseller list – yes, really!

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 369 days ago

B. Lloyd,
The phrasing is exquisite and the way you structure the dialogue both novel and effective. All in all, "Greenwood Tree" stands out as a superb accomplishment you must be proud of. I got caught up in Julia's dilemma as a detective trying to solve a case one hundred years prior and shared in the endorphin rush she must have felt with each discovery. Thank you so much for the entertaining read.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

Eponymous Rox wrote 370 days ago

Superb writing in a classic form. This is an excellent mystery for a wide audience and told in a language that is intelligent and inspiring. You've written a simply gorgeous narrative here. I'll be adding 'Greenwood Tree' to my bookshelf today and to my website shortly, along with your bio.

*Just an observation: The pitch doesn''t do this book justice and may be causing potential readers to wrongly overlook it.

Best of luck with this very fine manuscript.

CHEERS--
E.R.

Dedalus wrote 390 days ago

I read the first three chapters and you really drew me in with the brilliant descriptions - the copse of trees was a particularly dark section engulfing the dark deeds of those two figures. However, I found the whole structure of what I've read a little confusing. It seemed to jump about and I got lost several times along the way - perhaps not the best way to start a novel? But my god you can write well and capture settings and moods.

writingbear wrote 401 days ago

B. Lloyd,

I backed your excellent book this morning. If you could please take a look at either of my two novels, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND, for a possible backing your help would be appreciated. Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

writingbear wrote 401 days ago

B. Lloyd,

I backed your excellent book this morning. If you could please take a look at either of my two novels, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND, for a possible backing your help would be appreciated. Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

Vall wrote 422 days ago

I love this. I like the switching back and forth in time, and the different writing styles you use for each era ie the 'screenplay' style, if that is the correct term. I think it works really well. You vividly evoke the atmosphere of each time and have obviously researched your material thoroughly. I wish you every success, Vall

yesthis year wrote 423 days ago

Fabulous beautifully crafted writing and a story pulsing with vitality and coloured by an imagination in full fight. marvellous stuff. .

B.Lloyd wrote 446 days ago

What a lovely suprise, only just discovered this ! Thank you !

Beautiful, beautiful writing. I'm trying to hold spaces on my bookshelf for read-swaps since I'm desperately trying to get backings (the horrible side of authonomy, I know...) - and the only reason I'm not immediately backing this is your profile page stating that you are more interested in the site as a showcase. But I had to comment just to say how wonderfully this is written. I won't do you the diservice of sending you the begging letter that brought me to your page. I'll just give you six stars, and wish you luck :-)

A. L. Reynolds wrote 470 days ago

Beautiful, beautiful writing. I'm trying to hold spaces on my bookshelf for read-swaps since I'm desperately trying to get backings (the horrible side of authonomy, I know...) - and the only reason I'm not immediately backing this is your profile page stating that you are more interested in the site as a showcase. But I had to comment just to say how wonderfully this is written. I won't do you the diservice of sending you the begging letter that brought me to your page. I'll just give you six stars, and wish you luck :-)

B.Lloyd wrote 478 days ago

That is great to hear, thank you !

Backed Greenwood Tree. We enjoyed reading your novel. We liked the way you drew the reader in as the mystery began to unravel. Good Luck.
CC Brown

ccb1 wrote 478 days ago

Backed Greenwood Tree. We enjoyed reading your novel. We liked the way you drew the reader in as the mystery began to unravel. Good Luck.
CC Brown

B.Lloyd wrote 494 days ago


Why, thank you ! And do pass on best regards to Johnson and Boswell, next time you pop into the coffee house ! Do hope you continue to enjoy . . .:)

B,
Quite impressed. More literary. The kind of writing I'd like to analyze and then discuss with kindred spirit friends at a coffee house. I began reading Greenwood Tree because of the pitch and the era(s). Now, it's the writing that will keep me coming back for more. Starred and WL'd for now, with intent.
Cheers!
JB Campbell . . . Walk to Paradise Garden

Nigel Fields wrote 494 days ago

B,
Quite impressed. More literary. The kind of writing I'd like to analyze and then discuss with kindred spirit friends at a coffee house. I began reading Greenwood Tree because of the pitch and the era(s). Now, it's the writing that will keep me coming back for more. Starred and WL'd for now, with intent.
Cheers!
JB Campbell . . . Walk to Paradise Garden

Jim Darcy wrote 496 days ago

Thank you!

(had to leave a coment as you don't take mesaages!) :D

B.Lloyd wrote 509 days ago

Thank you very much indeed !
And all good wishes to you in the coming New Year! :)

I wish you a Happy New Year.

Your novel is like a good thriller. You have selected a historical background to narrate this novel. That is appreciable and you have done your role, as a writer in it very well.

Joy J. Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

Kaimaparamban wrote 509 days ago

I wish you a Happy New Year.

Your novel is like a good thriller. You have selected a historical background to narrate this novel. That is appreciable and you have done your role, as a writer in it very well.

Joy J. Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

B.Lloyd wrote 511 days ago

Thank you, hope you enjoy the rest of it, and a Happy New Year to you too !

Hi ,

I am impressed by the pitch of your novel and ****** rated. Now your book is in my w/l.

All the best,

Joy J Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

**** I wish you a Happy New Year ****

Kaimaparamban wrote 511 days ago

Hi ,

I am impressed by the pitch of your novel and ****** rated. Now your book is in my w/l.

All the best,

Joy J Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

**** I wish you a Happy New Year ****

B.Lloyd wrote 522 days ago

Why thank you ! I am glad you kept reading, too ! The dialogue is part of the period voice of some (although by no means all) 18th century novelists - because it appealed to me when I read novels in that style, I dared to attempt emulation . . . ;)

At first, as a reader I was a little surprised by your unique formatting of dialogue. I am glad that I kept reading. What a delightful work. I love the rivalries and the story within a story. Excellent work.

-Judith B. Shields

bookjacket wrote 522 days ago

At first, as a reader I was a little surprised by your unique formatting of dialogue. I am glad that I kept reading. What a delightful work. I love the rivalries and the story within a story. Excellent work.

-Judith B. Shields

B.Lloyd wrote 538 days ago

Why, thank you kindly ! Much appreciated ! :D What a great end to the week !

How fun and atmospheric this is! Your style is pitch perfect, and what a captivating story! I love it! You characters are wonderful, the naming of these is rather Dickensian, isn't it? Which I always appreciate. A great hook, a fun mystery, eerie and beautiful all at once.

ElspethWrites wrote 538 days ago

How fun and atmospheric this is! Your style is pitch perfect, and what a captivating story! I love it! You characters are wonderful, the naming of these is rather Dickensian, isn't it? Which I always appreciate. A great hook, a fun mystery, eerie and beautiful all at once.

Jim Darcy wrote 542 days ago

Happy to *rate your book :)
Please can you rate Firelord too. Thank you!

B.Lloyd wrote 544 days ago

Wahay!!!!! You have made my day (terrible rhyming I know . . . ;) )Thanks tons for this . . . .

It snowed yesterday. So I shut the shutters, stoked the fire and over several pots of tea (alas no cream buns) I finished the last quarter. I had an entirely splendid day, for which I thank you.

I have a weakness for a genteel mystery – and throw in giddy flappers and the green man and I’m a happy gal. I have genuinely enjoyed this journey. I love novels that weave patterns back and forth through time; I’m a mug, I suppose, for the idea of repetition and continuity. I like all of those dark, antique rural legends that reoccur. We had a green man on the house of the door in which I grew up and I’ve always been rather fascinated by this tradition.

You invoke fabulous sense of atmosphere – from the glittery jollity of the gatherings (you manage a large ensemble very well) to the eerie menace of the Gronny Patch. There’s a real pace and excitement too to the last few chapters, which I devoured with rapid page turning whilst my tea got cold.

Good period feel – your 1920s are convincingly 1920s (lovely period lingo) and your 1780s have an enjoyable Georgian fussiness. You played on my senses (there are lots of smells and noises in this novel) and succeeded in making both periods feel immediate. My belief was wholly suspended.

Sensible, clever, Julia is an admirable - and likeable - heroine. I enjoyed her practicality. She’s a bit Flora Poste in places. I also liked the cousins – loyal, pinchable Richard, garrulous Charlie, cool Bunty with her crowd. I’d like to take them all out for tea.

Your writing has oodles of personality and energy. Lovely comedy too. There are smirks aplenty, chuckles and the occasional guffaw.

This book reminded me of lots of slightly sinister and sparkly mysterious things that I loved reading when I was young; it took me back to The Box of Delights, Alan Garner and Green Knowe. It was a pleasure to re-find those sinister, sparkly memories.

Louise Galvin wrote 544 days ago

It snowed yesterday. So I shut the shutters, stoked the fire and over several pots of tea (alas no cream buns) I finished the last quarter. I had an entirely splendid day, for which I thank you.

I have a weakness for a genteel mystery – and throw in giddy flappers and the green man and I’m a happy gal. I have genuinely enjoyed this journey. I love novels that weave patterns back and forth through time; I’m a mug, I suppose, for the idea of repetition and continuity. I like all of those dark, antique rural legends that reoccur. We had a green man on the house of the door in which I grew up and I’ve always been rather fascinated by this tradition.

You invoke fabulous sense of atmosphere – from the glittery jollity of the gatherings (you manage a large ensemble very well) to the eerie menace of the Gronny Patch. There’s a real pace and excitement too to the last few chapters, which I devoured with rapid page turning whilst my tea got cold.

Good period feel – your 1920s are convincingly 1920s (lovely period lingo) and your 1780s have an enjoyable Georgian fussiness. You played on my senses (there are lots of smells and noises in this novel) and succeeded in making both periods feel immediate. My belief was wholly suspended.

Sensible, clever, Julia is an admirable - and likeable - heroine. I enjoyed her practicality. She’s a bit Flora Poste in places. I also liked the cousins – loyal, pinchable Richard, garrulous Charlie, cool Bunty with her crowd. I’d like to take them all out for tea.

Your writing has oodles of personality and energy. Lovely comedy too. There are smirks aplenty, chuckles and the occasional guffaw.

This book reminded me of lots of slightly sinister and sparkly mysterious things that I loved reading when I was young; it took me back to The Box of Delights, Alan Garner and Green Knowe. It was a pleasure to re-find those sinister, sparkly memories.

B.Lloyd wrote 544 days ago

Wow ! Thanks a lot ! :D That's great news !

I like this a lot. Starred. And backed.

Ferret wrote 544 days ago

I like this a lot. Starred. And backed.

B.Lloyd wrote 547 days ago

Thank you for your kind encouragement ! (Blushes galore) :D

Fantastic...i love it....i will buy it for sure...keep up the good work, i have a special interest in the green man...your imagination has strong energy...keep it flowing.....Angie.....x

angie gillett wrote 547 days ago

Fantastic...i love it....i will buy it for sure...keep up the good work, i have a special interest in the green man...your imagination has strong energy...keep it flowing.....Angie.....x

B.Lloyd wrote 552 days ago

Thanks very much !

Hi

First off - the title and the cover are attractive to those of us into such things. the Intro is great and we trust the writer as the images are so specific and authentic ( the herbs and aniseed milk). It is full of vivid characters and period details - great. It is just the kind of book I'd buy and have rated it.

Colette Marie
Fern Diary

Colette Marie wrote 552 days ago

Hi

First off - the title and the cover are attractive to those of us into such things. the Intro is great and we trust the writer as the images are so specific and authentic ( the herbs and aniseed milk). It is full of vivid characters and period details - great. It is just the kind of book I'd buy and have rated it.

Colette Marie
Fern Diary

B.Lloyd wrote 561 days ago

Thank you !

I have placed your book on my watchlist, having read the opening and dipped into other chapters- lovely writing style and very evokative. Will read more and then rate. Best wishes from fellow historical fiction writer HP (Renewal- set in 17th century)

HPHarling wrote 561 days ago

I have placed your book on my watchlist, having read the opening and dipped into other chapters- lovely writing style and very evokative. Will read more and then rate. Best wishes from fellow historical fiction writer HP (Renewal- set in 17th century)

B.Lloyd wrote 563 days ago

Thank you ! :)

A mysterious premise and an intriguing read. All in all a mighty fine story.

The time shifts are clear and work well. At times I wondered if writing in the style of the times made the prose sound a little strained, but broadly it worked well.

I admit to being taken aback by the dialogue-as-script- sections. I can't make up my mind if this works and adds to the book or doesn't; it's certainly unusual and distinctive.

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

J.S.Watts wrote 563 days ago

A mysterious premise and an intriguing read. All in all a mighty fine story.

The time shifts are clear and work well. At times I wondered if writing in the style of the times made the prose sound a little strained, but broadly it worked well.

I admit to being taken aback by the dialogue-as-script- sections. I can't make up my mind if this works and adds to the book or doesn't; it's certainly unusual and distinctive.

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

B.Lloyd wrote 564 days ago

That's great to hear - thanks a lot !

Read the first four chapters, and will definitely be reading more. I like the balance that you find between two different setting, and how each truly has a unique tone. It's never confusing, and sufficiently haunting. Six stars and on the shelf.

matt.thomas wrote 564 days ago

Read the first four chapters, and will definitely be reading more. I like the balance that you find between two different setting, and how each truly has a unique tone. It's never confusing, and sufficiently haunting. Six stars and on the shelf.

B.Lloyd wrote 566 days ago

Thank you very much !!!! :D

This is absolutely brilliant. I am recommending it to all authonomers.

Magus wrote 566 days ago

This is absolutely brilliant. I am recommending it to all authonomers.

B.Lloyd wrote 573 days ago

thanks very much !

Thank God for the comments! Ploughing through all to see what it was I liked - doing the ratings via the "stars" and as and when I can, will re-back all the books I really enjoyed or which showed promise, in my humble opinion. The Tails of Willie Gusty.

LonnieNonnie wrote 573 days ago

Thank God for the comments! Ploughing through all to see what it was I liked - doing the ratings via the "stars" and as and when I can, will re-back all the books I really enjoyed or which showed promise, in my humble opinion. The Tails of Willie Gusty.

James David Audlin wrote 575 days ago

This novel is typically British in its slow buildup of momentum until it moves at quite a pace indeed. I'm reminded most - not of storyline but in style - of A. S. Byatt. The interweaving of different timelines - something I enjoy doing in my own fiction - is handled very smoothly and to eventually quite telling effect. The characters are believable; indeed, one wonders how much the writer-protagonist is a projection of B. Lloyd.

To be frank, I began reading with some trepidation that it turn out to be yet another brooding horror pastiche in the Thomas Tryon mode, about some haunted whatever. While those elements are there, the "supernatural" aspect is handled, well, naturally. On the whole, I'm delighted with this novel.

--James David Audlin

Eveleen wrote 579 days ago

Greenwood tree
intriguing pitch and a well created story
Backed
Lenny Harry
(Like a dot on the horizon)

B.Lloyd wrote 584 days ago

This oozes atmosphere in every scene. You have created your own style with subtleties of tense and wording that work really well, this sort of thing is so easy to overdo but you have it just right, and along with the mix of settings and characters it makes this an engaging and enjoyable read. You manage to convey so much detail, sliding little hints in that show the world, and providing character backstory but in such a way that the reader is gripped by the unfolding story.

Love 'tarnished silver grassland' that is just a perfect description.

The switch to script like dialogue surprised me, as much for the look of it as anything, but it works very well and adds to the humour of the ladies conversation wonderfully, it also, surprisingly, makes it very easy to imagine the setting and the ladies.

This is richly worded, atmospheric and witty. I wish I was not so short of time to read but I will definitely come back for more. It's so hard not to be able to have the actual books.

Good luck with it!



Thank you very much for such a beautifully worded comment ! Hope you will have time to come back for more ! Thank you again, and the best of luck with yours too!