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word count 38537
date submitted 05.11.2008
date updated 30.06.2009
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Don't Forget Your Lucky Pants

Katrina Twitchett

Armed with integrity, wit and a pair of lucky pants, Molly battles bravely through her hilarious teenage existence. Then her mother dies. Life seems impossible.

 

Life for a teenager with gigantic boobs, stumpy legs and crazy hair is tough, but add an incessant deluge of vomit-inducing love poems from a geek, classroom witches, detentions, unrequited love and an internal monologue that will not shut up, it can be excruciating.

Molly copes with this embarrassing existence by deploying her overactive imagination and laughing at her every ridiculous predicament, along with the support of a brilliant best friend and a pair of lucky pants. She copes pretty well, that is until the untimely death of her mother. Her world is shattered.

Life doesn’t stop, even if it should, and coping now requires a whole new set of skills.

 
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Dribbly-nosed Leaky-eyed Snotfest Girl

Green Coat

Flea Ridden Seat In Front Of Me

Blackborough Town Bus

 

Dear Dribbly,

 

     Two Saturdays ago I was on my way to Tesco (to get some unmentionable items for my Nan) and overheard you talking … well, the loud bits between sobs anyway.  I didn’t mean to listen, but I was trying to ignore the boy across the aisle showing me his bogie collection.

      Your crisis appeared to involve a disposable camera, a packet of Bourbons and a bloke called Harry? Clearly this was none of my business, as long as Harry doesn’t work at our local bakery, but I really wish I’d been able to talk to you. 

     You see, just lately I’ve had some pretty major problems to deal with, and although I have no specialised knowledge relating to men and their biscuits, I really think I could help.

     Knowing my Nan’s bladder control, I’ll be on the same bus again this week.  In case you’re interested, I’ll keep the seat beside me free.

 

Yours truly,

Molly x

 

 

     “Well, it might work.”  I told my bedroom mirror. 

 

     I pictured how the letter delivery might go. I would place it on… no, pass it to … no, poke it between the headrests, yes … apologise for startling her  … and for the paper cuts to her eyeball… and stalking her … and eavesdropping on a private, yet pervy, conversation … I would accept the restraining order with good humour … the punch in the face seemed a tad unnecessary, and the forcible Bourbon insertion made my eyes water.

      I chucked the letter in the bin.  A hairy wax strip caught it and swung round to introduce it to some toenail clippings.  I shuddered, not at the social gathering in my bin, but at the thought of brown biscuit crumbs.

     What a failure!  Dribbly might have dissolved completely by now, and my ‘help’ lay crumpled in the bin, where no one in their right mind would delve, certainly not me.

       No!  I couldn’t give up this easily.  I needed to do this.  I’d started, and like an over-baked poo, I couldn’t stop now.  Even if Dribbly, who was probably just a puddle of salty snot by now anyway, had got away, maybe I could help others?  Maybe it was fate?  Maybe Dribbly and I were destined to almost meet?  Maybe fate had a hand in my Nan’s pants situation, if you’ll pardon the grossness of that image, or possibly just an unnatural obsession with Bourbons?  Well, whatever, fate needed a plan. 

  

The Plan - Write a book detailing my funny-tragic and sad-tragic life and how I learned to cope with it, give it a thigh-slappingly witty title and an eye-wateringly colourful jacket, so it can’t be ignored, sneak it into the library, so anyone in the ‘Self Help’ section would see it, read it and feel better.  Oh … I’d need extra copies for the ‘Idiots Guide To Being An Idiot’ section, the ‘Prat Survival’ section and of course, unfortunately, the ‘Coping With Grief’ section. 

     My stomach dipped at the last section, but that’s OK, the thought of helping someone cheered me up.  The face in the mirror smiled back at me – mainly ‘cos she knew I would have to do all the work, she’d just watch, as usual, lazy cow.

 

 

 

*****

 

 

     I was christened Molly Ringlord, but I answer to anything really.  ‘Ringlord’ is a ‘kick-me sticker’ of a name.  Mum once said ‘it could be worse, you could’ve been called Englebert Humperdink’ (a mouldy old singer, apparently).  Englebert Humperdink Ringlord?  I still have the number for Childline in my bedside cabinet. 

    Loads of names are weird though.  And words.  I mean, I love words, but they are stupid.  If you say them over and over again, they go all mental and meaningless, like celebrities.  Globule.  Buttocks.  Pamphlet.  Awning.  Effervescence.  Go ahead, pick one, try it … ‘globule, globule, globule, globule, globule, globule, globule’ … See?  You might also see people around you staring, laughing or pointing. 

    But ‘Ringlord’, coupled with a distinct lack of height and hair like a badger’s nest, does lend itself to hobbit comparisons. Just to be clear, I don’t come from middle earth and my surname is not Baggins, it’s Ringlord, like it or lump it.  Lump it, obviously.

    Does your brain get on your nerves? Mine wanders off alone and comes back with random questions.  It’s scary how much I don’t know … who invented laughing? … what’s the point of Wednesdays? …  why do we need toenails?

     Sorry, back to the facts ... Molly Ringlord … nearly fifteen … a hundred and forty eight and a half centimetres short … I am, in the style of a weatherman, ‘fair to middling’ (I’ll never be drop dead gorgeous, but I don’t scare small children in the street, which is encouraging) ‘with a couple of large fronts moving in’ (uncontrollable boobs), ‘and freak thunderstorms’ (my life in general)… and I love laughing.

     Laughter, whoever invented it, is priceless.  It stops me going bonkers, just keeps me going, a bit like bran flakes.  Life without it would be grim, as mind-numbingly boring as a never-ending history lesson with Mr Finlay.

     Laughing at myself is easy - I just join in with everyone else, from one disaster to the next.  I was born embarrassing.  I attract stupid.  Aunty Trudy calls it my aura.  My best mate Jessica says I’m a victim of my own sense of humour, I think she meant to say prat.  She’s very polite. 

     Whinging about my life is not so easy. My Nan, full of crap sayings, won’t let me moan about anything, she always says ‘No one ever hurt their eyes by looking on the bright side’.  I looked on the bright side of putting her in a rest home - true, my eyes were fine, but she nearly broke two of my ribs. 

          But, getting to the point, you know those days that really suck - eyebrow loss; acne rash; bra on backwards; skirt-tucked-in-your-pants type days – they’re survivable.  Failed exams, friends ignoring you, parent problems – don’t give up.  I’ll show you how I do it.  So, even though you may not be Dribbly off the bus (if you are, I’d love a Bourbon update), I hope my story might help with whatever bothers you.

     On a safety note (please read this in the style of cinema voice-over man) - this book contains no strobe lighting effects (don’t flick the pages in front of a lamp); has been prepared in a fairly nut-free environment (except where ‘nut’ is referring to idiot); and (as long as you don’t ram it down someone’s throat) is not a choking hazard. 

     This book is best served at room temperature with chocolates, fizzy drink and if you’re a big blouse like me, a box of tissues. 

     Welcome to my world.

 

 

 

 

* * * * *

 

 

 

Chapter 1

 

     School, as it is, should be banned, and I will continue mooding off about it until the following cruelty factors are illegalised -

 

1.  Being made to get up at stupid o’clock every morning.

2.  Being forced to wear a manky uniform, catch a stinky bus and trudge through the ‘gates of hell’ every day.

     I’m sure when Lucifer was designing his newest fiery furnace home, he made a call to his devil architect and said, “I’m thinking ‘foul and putrid’ for the front door, so take your inspiration from Blackborough School gates, look at the misery they bestow on all who enter.” - Obviously there would have been some evil laughing to accompany this.  

  1. Having to sniff school stench – pine disinfectant, farts, fusty books, sweaty socks, failed science experiments and burnt cooking.
  2. Having to conquer mountains of homework, from teachers who have better things to do with their lives than spout the same old rubbish year in, year out to ‘disrespectful lazy children’, who definitely have much better things to do with their lives than listen to it.
  3. Having to grow a hunchback.  My book bag weighs more than I do.  Hunchbacks are not sexy.

     When I’m twenty and too old and deformed to be attractive, I‘ll probably keep rats and go insane. I’ll be known as the ‘mad bent-over dwarf who lives on rat droppings’. Big kids will point, laugh and throw things at me.  Little ones will cry and run away. I might chant ‘beware the books’ for added effect. 

And lastly, 6.  Having to cope with friendship issues with no manual, guarantee or warranty.

     New girls are especially tricky.

     The third week in September, Alicia Thompson happened. She appeared half way through registration (the fanfare may have just been in my head) wearing a skin-tight ‘designer’ uniform, more make-up than the counter at Boots, and blonde hair ‘coiffed’ to within an inch of its life.  It was like Lady Supermodelrichcelebrityprettystick coming to visit the poor, ugly, deformed children from the bogs. I felt like a potato. I looked around, all the girls were stunned vegetables (Lucy Drew looked like a carrot, but that was due to a mix up with self tan spray), and judging by the monosyllabic grunts and general drooling, the boys were quite impressed by her too.

     Pretty soon after that, three of my mates, Leanne, Katie and Heather decided that they were going to be her bestest-estest ever friends, and morphed into Alicia clones. This was a relatively painless transformation for Leanne and Katie, as they were already fairly pretty sticks, they just gave up sleeping to pluck, polish and paint themselves every morning.  Heather, bless her, struggled to get up to the ‘plain’ level.  Don’t get me wrong, a lovely girl - friendly, kind and very clever, but in the looks department, her acne, thick glasses and weight problem were her good points.  She tried ever so hard.  But I think watching ‘60 Minute Makeover’ was a mistake. She proudly wore her foundationed and powdered face, with chin tidemark, every morning.  By every afternoon, it took on the appearance of gloss pink paint, thanks to acne-powered grease making a bid for freedom. But despite these renovation failures, Heather was granted a place in Alicia’s gang.

     I first suspected Alicia was a witch when she called Heather ‘my pretty’. I think she was after her warts.

     Jessica and I scummed in as ‘part-time’ members, mainly because we didn’t suck-up, and we had a spine each.  Alicia controlled the mood of the gang, like Head Witch of a coven, one day we were in; next we were out – a bit like the Hokey Cokey. She was about as genuine as her fake fat lips. 

     It was an ‘in’ day (left leg) for me and the Hokey Cokey Coven, when we were getting changed for PE one Thursday. Unfortunately, my Mum, who would lose a memory contest with a goldfish, had packed my PE bag with my annoying pain-in-the-butt brother Timothy’s PE kit. I spoke to Miss Taylor, politely explaining the impossibility of doing gym in what amounted to a set of boy’s ‘Power Rangers’ underwear. Apparently, there are spare kits for just such a predicament.  I’m sure these spare kits had come close to being washed, after being used as floor mops, but I think it’s fair to say most tramps would have been insulted if you had offered them, for their dog to sleep on.  I was just pointing out the mould growing in the shorts, when Alicia appeared from nowhere. 

 

     “Can I help?” she said with a sickly sweet smile on her fake fatties.

 

     “Not unless you’ve got some paraffin and a match,” I ventured.

 

     “Er … do you have any spare PE clothes that you could lend to Molly?” Miss Taylor chirped in her usual happy, nothing-can-go-wrong-if-I-smile style.

 

     “Well, they aren’t my best ones, but I always pack a spare set, and what are friends for?” replied Alicia. 

 

     And with a “Well that’s settled then, off you go and get ready for PE,” from Miss Taylor, I was unwittingly on my way to ‘hotel humiliation with no lock on the toilet door.’

     Do you ever have that dream where you’re desperate for a poo, and all the toilets are filthy or broken and no doors lock, and just when you decide to go, or are about to wipe, all your mates hang over the wall and start talking to you? That’s not the only one I get.  Sometimes I’m sitting an exam I haven’t studied for, or I’m going on stage in a show I’ve never heard of but everyone expects me to know my lines, or someone is trying to get into my house and I can’t lock the doors properly.  And then there’s the one where I dream I’m in public totally naked.

      Going to sleep is something of a trauma, so, I borrowed Aunty Trudy’s book of dreams. (Not the Argos catalogue.)  Apparently they’re ‘anxiety dreams’, and I’m a  ‘creative person who puts other people’s needs first and doubt my own abilities.’ As if one of my Am Dram mates will discover my performing crapness. Show time does bring on Poo dreams, so I guess it’s right.  Are everyone’s dreams so freaky?

     I thanked Alicia for the PE kit offer.  I should’ve guessed there was something wrong by the way she tilted her head to one side, smiled and slow blinked, like cows do. 

     Now, although most of my body is on a ‘no-grow’ campaign, certain parts didn’t get the letter - one of which is my violent hair.  It’s on the wrong side of appalling, with pieces of combs and countless hairdressers’ souls lurking in its deeper recesses.  Other non-recipients are my boobs – stick these puppies on any normal girl and she’d be ‘busty’ or ‘well endowed’, but me … I’m ‘the melon smuggling midget’.  If someone shouted down my cleavage, it would take two minutes for the echo to come back.  My bras are breathtaking - industrial rubber and reinforced girders.  No lacy one-hookers for me, just OAP elastic and security locks.

     Regulation PE kit is white t-shirt and navy shorts.  My gargantuan t-shirt helps cover up the embarrassment that is running, although resembling two pigs fighting under a blanket, and clever use of arm movements ensures no bowling boobs disasters.

     Alicia’s kind offer of a spare PE kit was perched on my bag when I got back to the changing room.  Everyone else was changed and waiting outside for the cross-country run that was our delight that day. Only Alicia and I were left to change.  Well, I say change, Alicia was fixing her lipstick while I debated which boob to cover with the spaghetti strapped, blindingly white, skinny sun top she had so generously lent me. 

     It was less of a top, more of an appliqué decoration for my bra - a bra that now barged into view larger, louder and uglier than an oil tanker.  Gruesome, battleship grey bulged out everywhere.  Oh joy, not only freak underwear ‘show and tell’, but also I had to perform ‘Pigs under a Blanket’ without the blanket. Like jelly juggling on a high wire with no safety net, this wasn’t going to end well.

     Sniggers grew to snorts as I appeared like a grubby Netherlands flag (I think) at the gym door - beetroot red face, white-ish middle, and blue bottoms.  Jessica was the only one not laughing her shorts off.  Just the corner of her lip bled, where her teeth clamped down.

     Alicia, Katie and Leanne led the way on the cross-country run, hair flowing in the wind, like a shampoo ad slow-mo.  The only thing flowing in the wind on me was a long string of fuzz from my bra – even it was trying to escape the embarrassment.

    

     “They’ve disappeared already.”  I was relieved and impressed.  “They’ve never been that fast before.”

 

      “Broomsticks probably,” Jess wheezed.

 

      “Yeah.  By the way, how’s your lip? Stopped bleeding yet?”  I hadn’t quite forgiven her.

 

     “Not sure.  Is that blood or dribble running down my neck?”

 

     “Can’t see.”  It was dribble, but I decided to let her panic a bit – I was so clever, getting my own back in such a subtle way.

 

     She touched the wet line of drool, held her hand up in front of her face for inspection, lost her concentration, lost her balance, danced like a baboon and head butted me. 

       

     “Ow! Focus, Jess, focus.”  I made a mental note to be less subtle next time.

 

Jess and I, and my virtually uncovered pig boobs, plodded on.  We were, as usual, at the back of the pack.  This was vital to minimise embarrassment.  Not only mine.  Jess, true to her baboon impression, is the least co-ordinated person alive. Anyone less co-ordinated simply couldn’t survive – ‘natural selection’.  (I hope that’s in our biology exam.)  She has always found running only slightly easier than dancing, and her dancing is only slightly better than her singing, and her singing is only slightly less offensive to others than my splendid ‘huge bra/tiny t-shirt’ combination.  We belonged together. 

      My bra fuzz was getting worse, it refused to stay tucked in, and its tickling was driving me crazy. I couldn’t change my strategic arm position, or walking would be the only option.  I didn’t want to spend a second longer than necessary in public, risking prosecution for indecent exposure, so I tried to pull it off. 

     Have you ever tried to sever the ‘main artery’ of an alien life form?  A nuclear explosion wouldn’t have shifted my fuzzy bra swinger. If the wind had got up it might have strangled me in a mercy killing. 

     Sawing it off was the only option.  If only I could find something sharp, but all the useful smashed beer bottles were in hiding.  I probed the undergrowth very gingerly. (Why are ginger people such Jessies?)(Why is Jessie so nervous?  Maybe she’s secretly ginger?)  Nothing.  A resigned ‘typical’ flipped off my tongue, but then I spotted a broken park bench.

 

     “Aha!  Just the thing!” I declared. 

 

     So Jess sat down to regroup while I manoeuvred myself, and the bra from hell, into such a position that would allow me to wear-away the offending fuzz.  I figured the worst that could happen would be splinters, friction burns or possible spontaneous combustion of man-made fibres, followed by third degree burns - but still worth the risk. 

     No such luck. I pulled, I pushed, I wiggled and I shimmied.  I tried to intimidate it by shouting at it, but it didn’t help, just added to my deranged hostage look. The fuzz didn’t break.  It wasn’t wearing away.  It wasn’t getting weaker at all.  It was gaining strength.  And then, just as it was about to laugh scornfully at me, it got stuck.  Totally.  On the bench. 

 

     “It won’t budge!”  I shouted at Jess through my legs.

 

     “What are you going to do?”  

 

      I considered my options.  I could remove myself from the offending bra and leave it there for a family of hedgehogs to colonize, whilst flashing back to school one nipple at a time.  Or remaining caught, for the rest of my days, bent over a broken park bench in the most hideous butt-in-the-air position, like a monument to stupidity or handy bike rack.

 

     “I’m thinking.”

 

     “Let me have a go.”

 

     “Oh, I wish I’d gone to the toilet before we left.” 

 

     “Think dry thoughts.”  Jess pulled again, slipped and elbowed me in the bladder.  “Oops, sorry.” 

 

     Suddenly, holding my breath was more important than talking.

 

     Jess looked worried, upside down through my legs. “Your face is really red,” she helpfully pointed out. 

 

     “Oh, is it?”

 

     “Yes.”

 

     “I don’t suppose you have any powder on you, that I could borrow, do you?” 

 

     “No, sorry.”  Sarcasm is wasted on Jess.

 

     Formulating a plan takes longer if your friend wastes time guessing whether your eyes or your bladder will burst first.  But before anything started trickling, Jess focussed, and synchronized her bodily attachments into something resembling a run.  Off she wobbled to the nearest shop where she explained the rather unlikely situation to a rather disbelieving shopkeeper who, ignoring his better judgement, lent her a pair of scissors, on the understanding that I never set foot in his ‘respectable establishment’.

 

     “God, look at the time, we’re going to be murdered.” I shouted across the road.  Jess was happily chatting to her new friend.  I hadn’t realised handing scissors back was such a social affair.  I saw a flash of light as matey took my photo for his ‘Do Not Serve These People’ list.  I don’t think I looked my best.

 

     “He said your legs looked funny.”  Jess turned back to wave at the shopkeeper, “It’s OK, they are,” she shouted. 

 

     “I was trying not to wee on Alicia’s shorts.  I didn’t spot the stinging nettles.” My legs looked like raspberries. 

 

     “He was worried.”

 

     “Oh?”

 

     “Yeah, he thought his camera was playing up.”

 

     “Oh.”

 

     “God! We’d better hurry up, look at the time.  We’re going to be murdered.”  We started to run.  It was murder.  We walked.

 

     We didn’t get murdered, but ‘surprise surprise’ the coven sashayed in behind us.! We certainly hadn’t passed them. And none of them was sweaty, out of breath or sporting a single cheek a shade darker than Alicia’s regulation ‘Rimmel pink’.  Now, I may be a Doubting Thomas, but I’d bet chocolate rations that they raced off at top speed to get out of sight, then hid up the whole time and simply joined back in at the end.  Witches.  I wish I’d thought of that.

     Had I not been so desperate to get out of my splendid jogging attire and hide my raspberries, I might have dropped a few well-timed comments to let them know I knew. But I had just spotted Tom Keenan coming in late, and although he was bound to hear all about it, I didn’t want a visual aid burned into his memory.  I headed straight into the changing rooms to salvage what little fuzzy shreds of dignity I had left. 

     Tom Keenan.  You can’t tell, but I’m quivering as I say his name.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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mammydiaries wrote 1157 days ago

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! I absolutely LOVE this book! Why oh Why has it not been published yet?!?!?!? I fully admit to being insanely jealous of your position in the top five but after reading the first bit of your work, I can understand totally how you got there. Thank you so much for writing such a great book and I hope to god that someone at Harper Collins is reading this and writing up a big fat contract for you at this very minute. You deserve it. All the best,
Maria x

Odysseus wrote 1177 days ago

How could anyone not like this gloriously funny book. I can see coach loads of readers wanting to get to buy this. The book sums itself:
“Laughter, whoever invented it, is priceless, it stops me going bonkers - keeps me regular – a bit like bran flakes.”...I’ll show you how I do it....I hope my story might help with whatever bothers you.”
And then we are off on a funfair ride of:
“I first suspected Alicia was a witch when she called Heather ‘my pretty’. I think she was after her warts.”
And
“I’m ‘the melon smuggling midget’. If someone shouted down my cleavage, it would take two minutes for the echo to come back.”
And I found myself saying (with apologies to all Geographers) oh yes to this:
“The subject is at best unbearable, I’d rather eat my own arm than sit through an extra geography lesson”
And laughing out loud to:
“The article said that prunes were good for a healthy complexion. Mum usually had a fair stock of prunes in the pantry and always banged on about how good they were for something or other - ‘complexion’ must have been it.”
And similar juxtapositions:
“we would buy ‘reasonably priced’ tops, customise them ourselves, and be the coolest, dudiest, shabby-chicest, looking chicks at the party! Well, it was a plan of sorts.
We sat in my bedroom, staring at the scabby, cheap tops on the floor.”
This is a stomping teenage romp:
““How about a French plait?”
“Oooh la la, mais ouis, j’aime le fromage!” Character acting comes easy to me, and it’s always worth reminding people that you like cheese.”
It deserves its success and anyone left who has not yet read it should do so forthwith. They will not regret it. Backed.


Heidi Mannan wrote 1175 days ago

Katrina,

This is an important book you've written. I was a little concerned when I read your pitch that the quirky girl ( and she IS adoringly quirky) wouldn't quite fit with the intensity of death. You managed it like a true pro, however. I absolutely LOVE Molly. You had me laughing and near tears. This should be published ASAP. Shelved.

Inkfinger wrote 210 days ago

I've read everything you've posted and I enjoyed it sooo much. I'd back it if you hadn't already reached the desk. I laughed out loud loads, but why did you leave it on such a sad note?! Please let me know if you ever put the rest up.
x

AlexzandraGoode wrote 415 days ago

This is utter perfection! I'm a sixteen year old teenager, I'm 4ft11, I used to wear glasses, have braces and be a little overweight so I am in love with this and absolutely gagging for more! Please please please keep writing, it's funny, sharp, intelligent and utterly addictive. You deserve so much success, it's absolutely glorious and THE next young adult book!

Alex

Suzalex wrote 632 days ago

Too damn funny! Love this. You could have served this on a pile of poo when I was a kid and I'd have still read it. The bra scene was a riot.
Totally inspired here.

Suz

Amanda Phillips wrote 867 days ago

I laughed SO hard reading your story! Thank you so much for writing this. Please tell me you're writing another?

Katharine Schopp wrote 1026 days ago

Wow. This is an amazing book. If it doesn't get published then the editors and publishers need their heads examined (then again, almost all of the popular best selling writers got tons of rejections before getting published...imagine how silly the editors who turned down the first "Harry Potter" must feel?).
This is a beautifully written book...funny yet heart renderingly sad too.
I identified with the character throughout...I was the big boobed clown at my highschool (my Mom once sent me to school wearing two left boots...we both had the same pair of boots and she thought she'd thrown hers out but had inadvertently thrown out the right boot in each pair. Even though I'm now 45 my (old) friends from highschool still talk about the left boot incident).
I am hoping that I won't identify with the last few chapters but as I write this my Mom is fighting stage 4 throat cancer. She has 3 weeks left of 7 weeks treatment to go, and we're all hoping and praying she'll beat it.
As I read the first few chapters, I laughed so hard . My African Grey parrot kept imitating my laughter, which just added to the mirth. Then I started crying as I read the last few chapters and she started yelling "Kathy! Are you OK?" ...which thankfully got me laughing again.
I hope you'll send me a note when you get published so that I can read the rest of your wonderful book. I'm desperately hoping Molly finds her way back to happiness.
Thanks for the wonderful read.
Take care,
Kat
(The REAL Poop)

JD Revene wrote 1030 days ago

Katrina,

I'm reading this because you recently read and commented on The It! Refugees, by the lovely Dania.

I see that Lucky Pants already has a gold star, but that you welcome further comments.

First off, let me say that you have a great pitch. Very polished: I can see my teenaged daughter picking this one up (though I'm not sure she'd wear the pants on your cover).

Look, I've read the first chapter and there's nothing useful I can say, only that if and when your agent places it I shall certainly go out and get a copy for my daughter. This almost feels like a new genre (to me anyway) young-chick-lit.

Great stuff!!

mellie wrote 1043 days ago

Katrina, whilst I have not read all of your book, what I have read was compelling.

Molly is such an inspirational character who both encounters and faces challenges that by standers often choose to ignore.

I have not reached the chapter were her mother dies and to be honest part of me doesn't want to. I know that I will cry with Molly and feel the need to cuddle this fictional character that you heave created so well!

Good luck, hope you don't need it!

Kitty Fantastic wrote 1044 days ago

Katrina, I just spent my entire lunch hour laughing out loud at my desk with all of my colleagues thinking I am a mental patient, all becasue of your hilariously funny and touching book. Thank you (I think).

This is incredible. So many classic lines...too many too mention although, in relation to her brain "mine wandres off and come back with random questions' is the kind iof line I would love to adopt and rop into conversation. Ha!

This reminds me of being a teenager and reading The Diary of Adrian Mole. Anyway...enough gushing...

Any YA reader would love this, it is tightly written, the chatty tone is absolutely perfect for the demographic, it is not only funny, it is touching and there is a real depth of emotion behind the humour.

I see you have been on the ED so you probabaly don't actually need my shelving but I just HAVE to shelve it.

Rachael

I would love it if you could take a look at mine (Falling Through) but no drama if you don't have time. I simply loved reading your book :)

Krista Darrach wrote 1050 days ago

Don't forget your lucky pants---
Katrina-
OMG... this is awesome.
I haven't even read the whole first chapter and you've got me commenting.
THE PLAN.....(your plan in the book)
This is exactly what I said, instead of knee slapping, enter romance with tragedy.

That is what I set out to do with my book... I love YA books that give hope and teach life skills.
I love your book.. I haven't read it... but I'm going to, and I can't wait until you get it published.
I would be honored to have you look my book over and give me your "gold star" opinion. *wink wink*
Of course only if you have time.
Thanks... I'm going to go and read some more now....
~Krista Darrach
-Riley's Gift

Bradpete wrote 1059 days ago

I like the sound of this and I am adding you to my list - on the strength of your wonderful surname alone!

I look forward to reading about your pants.

Pete x

lynn clayton wrote 1072 days ago

Katrina, I have just read your book and feel a complete inadequate amateur. It's one of the loveliest things I've read, and one of the funniest. I noticed the star next to the ranking, so don't know if my backing makes much difference. Nevertheless, wish you all the very best with it, and hope it gets published.
Lynn

Paolito wrote 1108 days ago

Wow! I'm new to Authonomy, but now that I've seen the kind of feedback the HarperCollins editors give to the writers whose novels are chosen for review, I'm sold! I simply must learn how to operate on this site.

Katrina, you have received concrete and constructive criticism (including kudos and pans), and now you have some work to do, but at least you know what needs to be done. Congratulations.

CLStBGD-S wrote 1120 days ago

I feel very late to this party as you seem to have got the recognition you very much deserve. I really enjoyed your book and was very moved at your wonderful writing about grief and loss, I really hope you get published.

I have clearly back your book

Camilla x

smithy92 wrote 1135 days ago

i thought it absolutely brilliant. well worth a read and a good laugh. so glad i read it. i think you have managed to write a brilliant story here

Dan Elliott Jr. wrote 1139 days ago

Fascinating synopsis. I am going to read the book this afternoon.

Dan

John Booth wrote 1139 days ago

This is so funny!

It is no wonder you got the gold star (before my time here or I would have helped)
Brilliantly observed. I thought at first it was going to drown in its own rhetoric, because getting a story inbetween all those great observations seemed impossible. However, you have managed it.

Wonderful

John

Maria Luisa Lang wrote 1143 days ago

Dear Katrina, Although I’ve read only your pitch and first chapter so far, I understand why your book is so popular. It’s original, charming, and quite hilarious. Molly is very special, but I think that any teenage girl could identify with her, as could any woman who hasn’t forgotten her teenage years. I like Molly’s honesty, her take on life, and of course her distinctive imagination. I also like how you bring in one telling detail after another to create your portrait. The reader learns about Molly the way she learns about someone in life, a little at a time, only she gets to know Molly much better and will remember her much longer than most of the people she’s met.

I’d certainly put your book on my shelf if you weren’t beyond needing that. Good luck with the editors. Maria, The Pharaoh’s Cat


tadhgfan wrote 1144 days ago

Today I have been reading most of the day. Trying to catch up on the reading list and looking back at ones I did not read enough of before. You made it to ED's desk and deservidly so! Great book. fingers crossed for you.
Gina

Mardi wrote 1144 days ago

Hi Katrina! I have just read the first 3 chapters of your book. I am new around here and put your book on my WL about 3 weeks ago. When it got to the top of my list, alas, it was already on the ED! But I decided to take a look anyway and I was really glad I did. Although my bookshelf is no longer really needed by you, your book did me a world of good. I really loved it! Can't wait to pick it up at my local bookstore as I'm sure I won't have to wait long. Can't wait to read the WHOLE thing. I hope you are done with it because I think you will be called to submit the entire manuscript very, very soon. And, of course, then there will be the movie!! Congrats on a unique and extremely entertaining read!! You don't need it but I'm bookshelving it anyway!

Sheilab wrote 1146 days ago

Laugh out loud funny with a great, distinctive voice. Well done!
I have added you to my shelf although I'm not sure that makes much difference if you're already on the Ed's Desk?
Sheila

tjlang wrote 1149 days ago

Hey Katrina...congratulations on the Editor's Choice ranking. Truly deserved. If it makes it through, I'll be express-mailing you my copy seeking a signature... ;)

Best of luck!

-Taylor

Morven wrote 1149 days ago

Katrina, I am so sorry I have taken so long to discover your fabulous book,. I am in awe of your talent , your book sparkles with life, humour --with everything that makes a pleasurable, life affirming read. This wonderful book should be snapped up by HC before someone else does. Looking forward to seeing it on my real life bookshelf, for this belongs out of the cyberverse and in people's hands. Its appeal goes far beyond its target audience. Only a person with a heart of cold stone could fail to fall in love with the delightful, quirky Molly and her lucky pants. A superlative book.

StirlingEditor wrote 1150 days ago

I've shelved on voice alone. Will continue to read and will send you more detailed comments at some point soon.

Wishing you mucho success. I can hear the good-hearted laughter of your future readers as I write this. You deserve to be published.

~Cheri

Morven wrote 1150 days ago

An absolute joy of a book, a wonderful read from begnning to end. This soooo deserves to be published and enjoyed by not just its target audience but anyone who loves a beautifully crafted, funny,moving and sparkling book. Katrina, I am in total awe of your talent as a writer, there is nothing forced, nothing artificial . It as if you have tapped directly into a teenager's mind and written her every thought verbatum. The rythmn of her speech is just perfection.The warmth, the humour and the observation crackles with vibrant life and authenticity. I loved this book. I am sending out every witchy vibe I possess , it deserves great success.

Morven wrote 1150 days ago

An absolute joy of a book, a wonderful read from begnning to end. This soooo deserves to be published and enjoyed by not just its target audience but anyone who loves a beautifully crafted, funny,moving and sparkling book. Katrina, I am in total awe of your talent as a writer, there is nothing forced, nothing artificial . It as if you have tapped directly into a teenager's mind and written her every thought verbatum. The rythmn of her speech is just perfection.The warmth, the humour and the observation crackles with vibrant life and authenticity. I loved this book. I am sending out every witchy vibe I possess , it deserves great success.

Andrew Foley Jones wrote 1150 days ago

got to say, don t know why i havent read this before. just love everything about it. the quirky lay out, the supreme comedy. the cringing. those moments that every one can identify. bordering on genius... bravo

Hannibal Barca wrote 1150 days ago

A whole lot better than other books in this genre. I'm not naturally a fan of thistype of book, but I'm glad someone recommended it to me.
I thought, for a moment, that the police explaining the death bit was a bit stilted, but I think that that actually adds to the story.

Dania wrote 1150 days ago

Great book. Have fun on the desk!

June Rodgers wrote 1150 days ago

Just looked at your book this morning, and noticed the no star next to it! Expect one soon as it has been chosen in the top 5, I am not suprised I was immersed instantly. I love what I have read so far and can't wait to return to it later. I expect to see it published soon. I also like Daisychains of silence and Sam's Diary (love, life & HRT!) it's a hilarious, girly storyand no.8 today. Good Luck. My book isn't uploaded yet, still trying to reach to golden 10,000 words. June

Holly Stacey wrote 1150 days ago

This is Sooo Much FUN! Have fun on the editor's desk ;)
Holly
(The Faerie Conspiracies)

JasonDiggy wrote 1150 days ago

Well, you certainly don't need me to tell you how great your book is. But I'm going to anyway. :) Well done! You have to make the ED of there's no justice here on Authonomy. Good luck!

Michael
(The Last Coming Out Story)

Ben Bollig wrote 1151 days ago

Hi Katrina,

I'm probably not target audience (?), but there was certainly enough to keep me reading through these chapters. I particularly like the way you deal with tragedy; it's well-handled in that there's enough dramatic tension for it to work as fiction but it's also sensitive and honest with the reader.

Lots of amusing anecdotes and funny characters, and a distinctive narrator both in terms of voice and her character.

I think my complaints are limited to 1) not really getting a sense of the school's setting 2) the format - changing shades in particular - sort of bugged me. Perhaps that's just because I find reading on screen so tricky.

On a merely personal note, I've had the exam and the stage-play dreams - both haunted me through my adolescence and early 20s, but not the toilet one, although I've sat in the adjacent cubicle to my sworn enemy at school when he's been obliged to make the begged request for a paper pass-under. Tee hee...

Best of luck with this, you deserve your high ranking,

Ben (History...)

lucktron wrote 1152 days ago

Totally out of my element with this, but I started it out of curiosity and was swept away. Molly is delightful! Good luck with the book!

JamesConrad wrote 1153 days ago

This is good. It reminds me very vividly of Judy Blume. I love the frantic tone of the prose that makes it all the more accessible. I'm only up to Chapter 3, but I will be reading more.

I'm backing this, too. It deserves to be published. It's a boss novel and it must sell!!!

Vigorio wrote 1154 days ago

This is hilarious! My husband wanted to know what I was laughing at. I couldn't stop - the imagery is awesome and perfect. This is a winner for sure. Shelved by goodness.
Rebecca

JOsborne wrote 1154 days ago

I honestly didn't know how I was going to feel about this book because its not my usual cup of tea but I loved it. Its funny, a little loopy but a great read the whole way around. Thanks for writing such a great book :) wish you the best.

JOsborne wrote 1154 days ago

I honestly didn't know how I was going to feel about this book because its not my usual cup of tea but I loved it. Its funny, a little loopy but a great read the whole way around. Thanks for writing such a great book :) wish you the best.

JOsborne wrote 1154 days ago

I honestly didn't know how I was going to feel about this book because its not my usual cup of tea but I loved it. Its funny, a little loopy but a great read the whole way around. Thanks for writing such a great book :) wish you the best.

Name failed moderation wrote 1154 days ago

I loved this book. Despite the uncomfortable position at my stupid computer I just wanted to read on. Molly was a captivating protagonist. I'm pretty certain the students I work with (around Molly's age) would relate to her predicaments and her personality. First thing I've read on Authonomy - the title got me - and I love it. Best of luck with getting it published.

kyronae wrote 1155 days ago

Katrina,

I would love to read more, but it's late and I can't resist commenting. This is such an amazing story! Both light-hearted and serious, comedic and tragic, you do an excellent job of capturing the essence of adolesence. I love the voice you've given your main character... full of strength and humor and down-to-earth realism. I feel like she could be one of my students.

I had a hard time getting into the story at the beginning, before the actual first chapter. I liked the letter she tried to write, but the exposition afterwards seemed almost stilted. It didn't have the natural flow that the actual story seemed to capture... I think because there wasn't enough background to sink into the meat of the story. Without the actual plot to cling to, the mental tangents were distracting.

Then I reached the actual beginning, and it was perfect. I would happily buy this book, without a second thought. I wish you luck. I hope this goes far (it certainly deserves to) and I will be putting it on my bookshelf for sure.

berwickberri wrote 1155 days ago

Although I wasn't sure about the premise of the book it very quickly won me over. For better or worse it transported me back to my high school days complete with all the painful teenage embarassment and desire to belong. The death of a parent is a difficult subject to tackle, but the mixture of comedy and honesty about how these things make you feel is highly readable. Definitely deserves to be published - I'll reserve a weekend as undoubtedly this book is one that would be read from cover to cover in one sitting!

kellymarie wrote 1155 days ago

You don't really need to go on any more bookshelves as this will defo get published at some point! It is helping me get inspired to varry on with my own work. You can take a look at my book, currently unfinished Sam's Diary (Love, life & HRT!). xxxx GOOD LUCK

Lord Biro wrote 1155 days ago

Hi Katrina, this is a terrific read with some great lines - at last a female answer to Nigel Molesworth and with big boobs too - how can it fail? So i'll be flying those lucky pants on my shelf as a rallying call to all middle aged teenagers

best of luck, Kevin

tadhgfan wrote 1155 days ago

This is seriously cute! The pitch alone is hilarious. Definitely deserves shelf space.

~Gina

Nicky Jones wrote 1155 days ago

Great stuff, Katrina. Great humour with many laugh-out-loud moments. What more can a reader want?! Love all the nasty, usually unmentionable bits. Please take a peek at my humble offereing if you get a mo. Nicky x

evepaludan wrote 1155 days ago

Congrats. I see that you are up to number two!!

SKD wrote 1155 days ago

From the prologue, mine were the forget to wear a bra days. And that wasn't ever something I should've forgotten in high school or junior high for that matter.
Okay, this is amazing. No wonder you're in the top 5. LMAO! Great!

ML Hamilton wrote 1155 days ago

Katrina,

Oh, I so sympathize with Molly. I think I was Molly in school. The situation with the bench would be something that would happen to me now. I couldn't help but laugh.

There were a few sentences that made me read a few times over, they were maybe a touch overwritten, but all in all it was such a funny, enjoyable read. You deserve to be on the editors' desk.

You're on my bookshelf.

ML

Red20881 wrote 1155 days ago

Your story is well written and hilarious! I have been laughing so hard my kids think I'm nuts. Who sits and laughs uncontrollably at their computer for hours? If you don't get this published I'm going to personally break down the doors at Harper Collins and demand to know why! Well, maybe I won't do that...but I'll really want to!

When this does get published, I will definitely buy it!

Helene
A Time in Eternity - Two Worlds Collide

EdenTyler wrote 1155 days ago

This book is great and NEEDS to stay on the ed's desk!!!

SO publishable!
Great work!!!!

eden*