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word count 64307
date submitted 18.06.2011
date updated 22.08.2011
genres: Fiction, Romance, Historical Fictio...
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The Matoke Tree

Michaela Foster Marsh

A fictional saga of passion and grief stretching from Uganda to Scotland. Covering themes such as love, war and ethnic cleansing, religion, adoption, and race.

 

Dembe, a fugitive of Idi Amin’s purges, cannot forget her father’s congregation cremated in the ashes of his church or the discovery of his empty shoes, the day after the soldiers came. Only the hope that she can rescue five orphans propels a perilous escape to Kenya. It is a wrench to flee her village, and not only because it is her home. It is where Dembe’s former Scottish lover, Phil, sends her news of their son, Alfie, born to them during her student days in Glasgow. The Uganda of her youth was no place for an illegitimate child, and neither was her lover’s marriage; Dembe left him in care of the state, with only the hope of an adoption. Phil, a Church of Scotland minister, unable to acknowledge the affair or forsake his son, manipulates his naïve wife Maggie to adopt the orphan boy into their own family. But as the fly-wheel of Uganda’s civil war ejects those without a firm grip on the reins of power, Dembe finds herself on Phil’s doorstep and uneasily begins life with her lover, her child and her unwitting rival. They have never been closer or further from the truth - for now.

 
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Jojober wrote 80 days ago

truly an African set story.makes a good read on narration,vivid description and character formation.need a little editing here and there.i ve read two chapters hope to read the hole book soon.pop in and peep at my Embers of Fate and leave a comment I 'll appreciate
JK

Michael Croucher wrote 282 days ago

Nice cover and vivid descriptions, you do a nice job of putting your reader into a place and creating atmosphere. The story has all kinds of promise; and a careful edit would bring it up a notch. I enjoyed what I read.
Michael Croucher (Bravo's Veil)

jlbwye wrote 304 days ago

The Matoke Tree. A colourful African cover, but I had to read the long pitch twice to get a taste of the story. It's a bit complicated, and might be better broken into paragraphs.

I make notes as I go, and dont pretend to be an expert.
Ch.1. A novel approach - taking the Point of view of a building which somehow mutes the horror of the atrocity.
Dont you mean the only spectators were the trees? And isnt it John the Baptist?
A cremation of fire, followed by a baptism with water. What an evocative beginning.
'Their collective hearts pounded a heavy rhythm...' atmospheric words.
But I found the jump from the baptism to the raid on the village rather sudden, and got a bit muddled.

Your book has taken me back to the Africa I was brought up in. I am amazed to read that you've never been there, because your descriptions contain the lushness and colour of that continent.
I'll definitely be back for more. Meanwhile, a sprinkling of stars.
Jane (Breath of Africa).

jrapilliard wrote 307 days ago

Hi, I've just put your book on my bookshelf. Hope you will do the same for mine, Penrose - Princess of Penrith, and maybe have a look at it. Best wishes, John

Michaela Foster Marsh wrote 307 days ago

hey Katie,
Thanks so much for this lovely feedback - made my day. yes i agree with 'spoke to her father in thought' thank you for that.
cheers and please do keep in touch and if you have any other comments I'd appreciate them! Will put your book on my watchlist. Thanks again, M


katie78 wrote 308 days ago

your pitch is juicy. i'd suggest breaking i\t into shorter paragraphs and including the white space of line breaks.

your opening image is beautiful and the writing is fluid. i feel like i can relax and just read and be entertained. you can write. the dialogue is natural; there's a balance with the physical descriptions. the action moves at a good pace. there's really not much to suggest. i hope this isn't your first draft. ;)

i wonder if you need to say: 'she spoke to her father in her thoughts.' isn't it obvious?

love- empathy forced their own tears to break.

next time i shift my shelf, i'll find you a spot.

Nigel Fields wrote 322 days ago

Chapter 1: Elegant writing. A pleasure to read. The serene opening is just lovely. And then the very unelegant massacre, vivid, well-delivered. How nice to have tidbits that make us smile: what loosely could be described as a truck. :) Nice last paragraph for this chapter's end. I'll pop back for the rest soon.
Impressive.
Cheers!
John

Rony Bridges wrote 324 days ago

By the way I love the characters, but especially Albert. You made a grown man cry when he died. Superbly written.

Rony Bridges wrote 324 days ago

I was captured from the word go with The Matoke Tree. A thrilling start to a novel. The writer obviously knows Uganda and its people. I want you to publish more on this site, it has left me on a cliffhanger, dying to know what happens next. Have you thought about it as a screenplay, its highly visual. Well done, you should be so proud of your work.

nish_check wrote 336 days ago

Great Plot and Narrrative.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 337 days ago

Michaela,
Thank you for starting off with a rare trip into Amin's Uganda. The descriptives capture local color, speech pattern and native behaviour well. This authentication of Dembe's character certainly sets the stage for the strange dynamic with her former lover Phil, back in Scotland, a married minister who's adopted the product of their secret sin, their love child. You've created a truly rivetting story.

Kenneth Edward LIm
The North Korean

Michaela Foster Marsh wrote 337 days ago

Hi Julius,
Thank you for your comments! It is good to know that you feel I have been to Uganda and lived it! It makes me feel glad that I did so mcuh research! Still I am sure there will be things that only someone living there would know and I am sure there will be some mistakes.
As you know I have not been there yet, but hope to go in the near future. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far. I am sorry I haven't got to your book yet but will. I find it hard to find the time right now to read but I will read your book soon. You were born the same year as my adopted Ugandan brother and Me so I do have an interest in reading you biography. Meanwhile thanks again Julius for your continued support!! It means a lot to me. All the very best Michaela
Michaela

Dear Michaela,

more on CHAPTER TWO:

“By the time the women returned, Albert had built a fire. The sun had dropped below the horizon now. Insects hummed and buzzed as hungry cats and dogs prowled. All were hoping for a feast.” – Very true situation. I can imagine seated by fire and keeping away mosquitoes from biting me.

“Dembe took in Janet’s physique, her long lean legs, elegant neck and velvet black skin. She thought how beautiful she was, like an exquisite race horse, so graceful.” – my say, “Aine ebisya byakacwenyangi”


“Her thoughts were interrupted as Albert jumped up and addressed the boys, “Have you ever shaved a banana tree and made rope?” Both shook their heads negatively. “Ok, Albert is going to show you. Come, follow me.” The boys’ faces lit up with excitement. Albert seemed to know everything. Taking the two apprentices to a large banana tree, he showed them how to skin the tree with his machete without damaging its growth. After some careful instruction, Albert let them try for themselves.” – you (author) must have been there/apprenticeship of caring for a bananas for them to produce much fruits.

Bravo - I will read on.

Julius B [Destined to Triumph]

Juliusb wrote 337 days ago

Dear Michaela,

more on CHAPTER TWO:

“By the time the women returned, Albert had built a fire. The sun had dropped below the horizon now. Insects hummed and buzzed as hungry cats and dogs prowled. All were hoping for a feast.” – Very true situation. I can imagine seated by fire and keeping away mosquitoes from biting me.

“Dembe took in Janet’s physique, her long lean legs, elegant neck and velvet black skin. She thought how beautiful she was, like an exquisite race horse, so graceful.” – my say, “Aine ebisya byakacwenyangi”


“Her thoughts were interrupted as Albert jumped up and addressed the boys, “Have you ever shaved a banana tree and made rope?” Both shook their heads negatively. “Ok, Albert is going to show you. Come, follow me.” The boys’ faces lit up with excitement. Albert seemed to know everything. Taking the two apprentices to a large banana tree, he showed them how to skin the tree with his machete without damaging its growth. After some careful instruction, Albert let them try for themselves.” – you (author) must have been there/apprenticeship of caring for a bananas for them to produce much fruits.

Bravo - I will read on.

Julius B [Destined to Triumph]

Edward42 wrote 337 days ago

Great plot and description.

Juliusb wrote 338 days ago

Chapter 2:

"... No windows remained, only frames hung with broken shutters groaning ghoulishly. There was no furniture; everything had already been looted. Even the carpets were gone, replaced by dust and leaves ..."

For the above text extract quoted from your book, I can see as if you eavesdropped into Destined to Triumph’s Chapter 12(11): My best teacher has always been the book.

Juliusb wrote 338 days ago

Dear Michaela,

CHAPTER ONE

“The church timbers groaned as they were greedily licked by their foe. With one final gasp, it collapsed in on itself.” Yeah, as you cited in this chapter one, Idi Amin’s was martyrdom! Cry, the beloved country as in the name of Alan Paton’s book, “Cry, The Beloved Country” (Charles Scribner's Sons, 1948).

Juliusb [Destined to Triumph]

Juliusb wrote 339 days ago

Dear Michaela,

A Muzungu writing a story and titling it “Matoke Tree”! It must be an enchanting one. I am yet read the book [In Luganda, one of the dominating local languages, Muzungu means Whiteman; and Matoke means Banana]. Bravo.

Juliusb [Destined to Triumph]

Dr Ajay Kansal wrote 339 days ago

Great plot and narrative indeed. Although I have rarely read any fiction, this is different.

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