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rank 4167
word count 10416
date submitted 12.11.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Romance, History, Harper T...
classification: moderate
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In Love and War

Jill Harris

A true story of love and war unfolds in the letters written by a young fighter pilot to the woman he adored and betrayed.

 

Four years before the outbreak of WWII, Ross was an introverted Flying Officer with the RAF and Alison a vibrant socialite. They met aboard a ship sailing from Africa to Southampton. Soon afterwards, they began to write to each other and by 1937 they were married. His letters chart an extraordinary love story damaged by a war that began in Europe but took hold of their lives in ways that could never be undone. After Alison died in 2007, Ross's letters were found and handed to his granddaughter. They reveal a man quite different from the one she thought she knew. Here was someone of great depth and intelligence, wrestling with his personal demons. His joy of flying is gradually eroded by his pacifist ideals as the war progresses. In 1942 he was Wing Commander of the 'forgotten squadron', 227, stationed in Malta. After an intense inner stuggle, he made a mistake that cost him the one thing he treasured above all else. This is not just their story told in a blend of fiction, essay and authentic letters, it is also a map of the human heart set against a backdrop of courage, lust and death.

 
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AMW wrote 219 days ago

Jill,

Came across this when I did a search on Africa. I love your premise. WWII is a favorite setting. I think the best parts of this, in what I've read to date, are the letters from Ross. Not sure from your description of the book whether you are quoting from actual letters, or you are the writer. Either way, the voice is authentic and extremely attractive and I'm sorry to see you haven't had more comments.

The biggest difficulty you face with this is the order in which you present the material and the brief nature of some of the segues. So far, in the first few chapters, I was able to follow the time jumps, but some readers may find them difficult to follow. And they do give the novel a bit of a choppy feel.

Have you read The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society? It's all letters, notes and diary entries, and it's wonderful. If you haven't looked at it, do. It may provide additional inspiration and insight on how best to organize your material.

I like your writing, both the modern voice as well as Ross's.

Good work!

Ann Warner - Absence of Grace

poohbear42994 wrote 711 days ago

Goodness gracious, the opening chapter is amazing. I love WWII and romance, so the story that you are sharing with the world seems to be my cup of tea. I can not wait to finish writing this comment to you so I can go back and read more!

LawsonBlacklock wrote 1035 days ago

Your opening chapter is brilliant. Don't change any of it. But drop the Mash quote... completely out of place and very distracting. You set up a brilliant hook but then the pace drops a little... I lost track of the story amongst the letters and changes of tone and place and time. I would scrap the letters and tell the story as a fictional novel, even though it may be based on truth. This would make it more coherent and enticing. I am shelving this on the basis of the wonderful story... just the kind of story I would buy. L.x

Talex wrote 1258 days ago

Jill, what you have here is intriguing but it may be a personal prejudice of mine: I've never much cared for reading letters in fiction or non-fiction form (unless they're written to me, of course!). Good luck with it, but I just need something more to hang onto at the outset of a novel.
AM

Nadia Williams wrote 1282 days ago

Hi, Jill. Thanks for backing FT. I came to have a look at what you had up, quite apprehensive as I have no intention of backing anything I don't believe in. Well, I was impressed and touched by 'In Love and War'. My backing is by no means a tit-for-tat, I really like it.

Nadia.

Jack Fist wrote 1288 days ago

Hi Jill. Read some of this over my lunch hour at work. It's nicely put together. I like the blend of past, present, narrative, letters, quotes and some factual history. I couldn't find much at all to criticise - I'm definitely not the best to comment on someone else's grammer or punctuation but a couple of things at the start of chapter 2 - para 1 "In truth his perfect vowels and correct pronunciation was (were?) probably due more to..." and para 2 "....line of gentlefolk rather given to painting to (and?) singing". I enjoyed this, so I have put you on my bookshelf for a day or two to give this a vote (I will change in a couple of days so I can support others as well, so don't be disheartened if your bookshelf count drops - the vote still counts even after the book is removed). By the way - personal opinion, but I think you need something else on your cover as well as that plane - a title and name of author, or a bit of scenery of some description, a cloud even.
Regards................................Jack.

eleanor stoneham wrote 1289 days ago

Oh and PS - I love Dorset - do all my writing there in a quiet hideaway!

eleanor stoneham wrote 1289 days ago

Hi Jill welcome to our world!!

I do like how this starts - promising. Watchlisted until have time to read more!

Richard P-S wrote 1289 days ago

Dear Jill, thanks for shelving BB. Although it strictly speaking doesn't need it, as it made the EdDesk last month, it's still a good feeling that new people like it enough to shelve it. Am watchlisting In Love and War to read when I have more time. R

Ali Cooper wrote 1289 days ago

Hi Jill, this is lovely writing and you are very brave to take the letters of someone close to you as a basis for your work. I've read the beginning and I feel I need to read more of it before it goes on my bookshelf (tho I suspect it will). if you've written more then please will you post it? At the moment I'm feeling that the scenes jump about between people, places and times before I get chance to feel an empathy with the characters but it is possible that you are easing the reader in and will gradually lengthen the encounters in subsequent chapters.
please take a look at my book, The Girl on the Swing and I think you will also like Sgt Pepper by Siobhan Walls. Ali.

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