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rank 5227
word count 10941
date submitted 15.08.2011
date updated 13.05.2012
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Thriller...
classification: moderate
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I Wish I Loved You Less

Celeste Bott

As a mother, a daughter, and an entire community await the aftermath of a political scandal, secrets are revealed and relationships are altered forever.

 

Cassie Rivers understands what it’s like to survive: thanks to a heart transplant, she can finally open herself up to the possibility of a long life. Her future looks bright, with both an admission to a prestigious university and a boy who loves her. Not like Jade Morrison, the wife of the unfaithful governor Scott Morrison, who gave up a career and motherhood for a marriage that could end in fidelity.

But just when Cassie begins to pity the scorned wife, her own life falls to pieces. Her parents announce their separation. Her brother has fallen in love with a woman twice his age. Her father, a police officer, is shot in the line of duty. And then she finds her birth certificate and learns that her biological father is not the man he’s known all her life, but her mother’s best kept and most tragic secret.

A story about about six women—a mother, a daughter, a woman scorned, a career-driven mistress, a widow looking for answers, and a politician's wife—I Wish I Loved You Less is a testament to the enduring, devastating power of choice, and how our choices influence those we love.

 
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Su Dan wrote 11 days ago

good skillful and careful writing. good flow and easy to read...
backed...
read SEASONS...

Tari wrote 155 days ago

What an impressive plot. This is something to surely keep the reader immersed. An all night read.
The story of Cassie is so in-depth with what she has overcome and what is before her with ag tragic train of events.
For a girl to discover the man she has always called Dad is not her father is a catastrophe in itself.
The suitcase of leaves and her mother bringing Autumn to her bedside is so touching. I don’t think I will ever forget that. So original.
The Mum is definitely phenomenal and is a portrait of motherly love that knows no bounds. When she gives the story to Dr. Houghton which of course was to her very sick child, I was immersed. With the father leaving to cry outside you nearly had me in tears.
The second chapter with an enormous word FRIDAY jerks the reader to attention. What can it mean?
The third chapter on Jade and d Elise is so engaging along with Stephen his love of girls is engaging. And the ever dependable Scott. Albeit it is Stephen who would be the good father unlike Scott. This is promising to be such enjoyable and interesting reading with plots twist and turns galore.
I shall be returning to read more chapters of this delightful and sometimes highly sensitive book.

Starred with pleasure.



Ramon wrote 157 days ago

I stumbled onto your story, so I decided to give it a crit. officially it is a review for the crit ninja thread.
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/88310/crit-ninja-/

I like your pitches. I was interested enough to read on.

As you know, the first sentence is rather long. I think after Detroit you can cut there and start a new one. On a side note, you have a few long sentences in the chapter that I don’t think are really needed. Often I think of sentences that run on as a way of conveying fast action or thoughts that need to be read without pauses. Moving on, I am a bit confused about the first paragraph. Her mother came to Detroit to see her daughter or to get leaves before heading back home? After reading further down, I realize that the two of them live in the same state and her mother went to Detroit just to get the leaves. The paragraph could be better worded in a way that hints that her mother found out about the sickness at the same time as her daughter and left the hospital right away.

As you are talking about the mother, who I find very interesting, at times you tell more than show. The part when you are showing her putting up the leaves is a good example of showing the reading how odd but fun she is.

The first chapter has some identify issues. Is it about the mother, who you spend a lot of time talking about? Is it about the leaf, something that gets significance only towards the very end of the chapter? Or is it about the narrator, who I don’t know much about expect that she almost died?

All in all, I find the mother very appealing and would like to know about her.

celestexxmarie wrote 158 days ago

Just to let everyone know now...I RETURN ALL READS AND COMMENTS!

Best,
Celeste

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