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rank 4438
word count 17565
date submitted 19.08.2011
date updated 12.09.2011
genres: Non-fiction, Biography, Popular Cul...
classification: moderate
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All The Way Up To Eleven, Heathen

Michael Winder

For as God is my Witness. My life was this.
Lilith’s role still confuses me but she is always there and always has been.

 

It was 6 am. Again. I had had enough! Something had to change. Today just had to be different from yesterday and all those yesterdays gone before, passing without variation. Every day was an identical routine and always ended in blood and Sellotape. Sleep only occurred every three days or so. Food was binged but infrequently. And blood was daubed everywhere you looked. Enough surely? Enough.

I took a kitchen knife from the drawer, sheathed it in newspaper and tucked it down inside my shirt. I closed the front door behind me. As usual, she was asleep upstairs.

I walked to Meanwood and stood outside of the gate. The path led up to the Yardie crack dealer’s door. He was open all-hours and would let me in. With a smile, this scary man would let me in, and in doing so, unwittingly let me out. Oh to be out. I pondered future days. Armley jail? Intensive care? Under the soil? There was no knowing the detail. But things were about to change and that was all that really mattered. No more of this. She called my name from behind me.

 
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Gefordson wrote 230 days ago

Michael,
Like Christina, I think this is an honest and worthwhile piece of work.
I think it has real potential but, at the moment, it feels too raw. It's difficult to share a life, in this way, when you've chosen to use your natural voice because. Whilst that voice is immediate and honest, it means a reader, coming to the book for the first time, will carry on reading or put the book down, depending upon whether or not they like you. I felt you were asking me to share emotions and they seemed to be getting in the way of the events.
You have a strong story to tell but at the moment I'm getting your feelings rather than a clear, controlled, reflective sense of the journey you've lived through.
Does that make sense?
I will come back and back this and look forward to seeing the project develop.
Gefordson
Nothing you can do.

Mikeywin wrote 268 days ago

I like it...thanks

Juliusb wrote 268 days ago

Hello Michael,

Starting your book’s pitch with “For as God is my Witness my life was this,” was as wonderful as the Bible’s starting idiom, Genesis 1:1, “In the beginning God …” Thais is what saved that day with ascending with knife to the woeful.

Julius B [Destined to Triumph]


Nabahood23 wrote 274 days ago

I've added you to my watch list. Before you say thank you, you are more than welcome. I will read it but I will leave one comment. Don't like to litter pages with comments when one over all will do. Please be patient and be kind enough to remind me if you do not recieve a review in a few days. I've placed my latest non-fiction here for review feel free to read it. https://www.facebook.com/ReginaldLeviWalker

http://www.authonomy.com/books/36384/are-islam-judaism-and-christianity-just-imitations-of-the-real-thing-/

So, what is the role of imitation in the life of a Muslim, a Jew, a Christian, and those who characterize themselves as the household of God? Did you know Religion and Humanity rhymes with confusion and insanity? You do know that is what we have right now. In today's world, everyone is doing what they want as they want. We believe the conspired imagination of men that we come from nothingness or the God of peace calls for war. Therefore, so that a man think so shall that man be. In our rush to disbelieve in God we have now discovered that without the guiding light that comes from the throne of God, we live in a world lost in confusion and insanity. Moreover, Religion and Humanity can not get mad at nor disown this fruit because they planted the seed. OH, I think I said something there. That is why I am glad I am not a Muslim, a Jew, and Christianity kicked me to the curb. I am just a lowly insignificant outcast and a man chosen by God trying to get home by following the way of Jesus. So, will you please read my book.

Thanking you in advance for your consideration;
Pastor Reginald Levi Walker aka Preacher

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ChristinaN55 wrote 277 days ago

Hi Mike,

I think its very brave that after all you went through with the drugs etc you came through it all and decided to write your story.
It sends out a strong message. I'm sure it even helped you through everything.
Well done and good luck with this.
Rated highly.
Christina
Take a Sick Break

Mikeywin wrote 277 days ago

Great distinctive title. Intriguing short pitch. Long pitch - love the blood and sellotape. Infact I think the whole pitch is very strong and made stronger perhaps by the fact that its a true story. This sounds like a story that deserves to be told. I like how you incorporated the long pitch into the first chapter - just stirkes me as a bit unusual and therefore distinctive. I could only read the first couple of chapters but what I read was compelling, competently written and gave lots of encouragement to read more. 5 Stars.



I really appreciate that . thank you

mapleyther wrote 278 days ago

Great distinctive title. Intriguing short pitch. Long pitch - love the blood and sellotape. Infact I think the whole pitch is very strong and made stronger perhaps by the fact that its a true story. This sounds like a story that deserves to be told. I like how you incorporated the long pitch into the first chapter - just stirkes me as a bit unusual and therefore distinctive. I could only read the first couple of chapters but what I read was compelling, competently written and gave lots of encouragement to read more. 5 Stars.

Mikeywin wrote 279 days ago

Love the start of this, after the opening paragraph which I think holds it back. Otherwise, a brilliant first chapter, I think. (To me, the opening paragraph has a voice but it's dense with explanation, whereas in the next paragraph and right on down, it's all tight, vital and immediate.)

I'll read on, definitely!

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Thank you so mcuh and I'll take that on board - it was a true event and I think I just get a bit overwhelmed by how it was for me then to think about writing better.

AlleJo wrote 279 days ago

Love the start of this, after the opening paragraph which I think holds it back. Otherwise, a brilliant first chapter, I think. (To me, the opening paragraph has a voice but it's dense with explanation, whereas in the next paragraph and right on down, it's all tight, vital and immediate.)

I'll read on, definitely!

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