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rank 1039
word count 27692
date submitted 04.09.2011
date updated 05.11.2011
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Children's, Youn...
classification: universal
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Smugglers at Whistling Sands

George Chedzoy

Children holidaying at Abersoch North Wales pursue smugglers targeting the remote coast. Their quest leads them to an island, tiny cove and abandoned mine.

 

Smugglers at Whistling Sands is a 45,000-word children's adventure story for age eight and above. Children on holiday at Abersoch on the North Wales coast stumble across the activities of smugglers. Their quest to find out what's going on leads them to a woodland den, an uninhabited island, a deserted cove on a remote stretch of coast, and a long-forgotten manganese mine. Jack is 12 and a little dull; his childish, studious brother David is 11; and meek, timid sister Emily is 10. They are unadventurous types from a comfortable home in Nantwich, Cheshire. We join them as Jack storms off to the beach following a silly row. He bumps into Lou - a girl the same age who is far more self-confident, poised and worldly-wise. After an awkward start, she becomes friends with Jack and the others, who feel safe with a strong, tough character like her. Yet she has a softer, sadder side, and her family life is far from ideal. She has her own battles to fight as well as tackling smugglers. My book owes something to the spirit and sense of adventure of Enid Blyton's novels, which I enjoyed as a child.

 
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, aberdaron, abersoch, action, adventure, children's fiction, mystery, north wales, whistling sands

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viki wrote 201 days ago

Great stuff! and I've only read chapter 1. I laughed quite loudly at the ketchup incident as this is something my 2 daughters would do to each other. I think I'm going to be in for a funny and heartwarming story.

Lj Trafford wrote 201 days ago

My thoughts as I was reading.
I don’t think you need to describe David and Emily in the first chapter the way you do. I think it would be better to wait until we meet them before addressing their characteristics.
Starting to feel sorry for Jack’s Mum if she’s got a 12, 11 and 10 year old. Phew.
Freelance journalist? Would a 12 year old say that? Would they not just say journalist?
The inclusion of a mobile phone does feel a bit odd against this old fashioned story. It jarred me quite a lot in fact.
Do 12 year olds drink tea? I certainly didn’t touch the stuff until I was at sixth form at least.
I’ve read the first three chapters and I have to say I really enjoyed it. I loved Enid Blyton as a child and this is very much in that style, though as noted I found the sudden inclusion of the modern took me out of the story a bit – though this is probably just due to my familiarity of the Blyton world.
Really charming, well written, sweet, a nice adventure with great kid characters I do actually like. Poor David with his learning Welsh book 

mapleyther wrote 261 days ago

I was pleased to come across this book because I am fan of both Enid Blyton and this beautiful part of North Wales. As such, I was hoping for great things and I wasn't disappointed.

The text clearly pays homage to Blyton in the overall premise and the way the book is structured - for example the three children befriending the "wild child" whilst away from their natural location during the school holidays. But I never felt that the story was simply derivative in nature and it stands on its own merits.

The story doesn't try to be too clever and is straightforward enough for most children aged roughly 8-10 to master by themselves as well as read with mum or dad. Infact I can see many parents enjoying reading this book from a nostalgic viewpoint and will find it very suitable for children who are not ready to grapple with the likes of Rowling and Pullman - this is much gentler, more wholesome fare.

There are a few passages which would benefit from a bit of polish, but nothing that would detract from the overall impression you get.

The pacing of the story is good and keeps the pages turning - infact there is probably potential to add 5 or 10,000 words to the story to add in more detail - there were a couple of places where the text passed over certain things quite quickly. Still, I suppose it is good to leave people wanting more. The story is certainly more plot focused than character focused, but I suppose that probably reflects the young target reading age.

The text is successful in painting a vivid picture of the local landscape and I suspect the local tourist board will want to make use of it as publicity material! 5 Stars and will be a hot contender for the next space on my bookshelf!

MP Jones (They Shoot Birds Don't They)

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