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word count 14774
date submitted 13.09.2011
date updated 13.09.2011
genres: Non-fiction
classification: adult
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RIDING THE LINE: Adventures Near the Edge of Calamity

Rex Taylor

Chronicles of riding a dirt bike on the fine line that divides adventure and misadventure, joy and calamity, in the wilderness.

 

For almost thirty years, off and on, I have been exploring the wilderness on dirt bikes. I sought thrills and beauty, and found both in great measure. I knew the basic rules of safety, such as don't go out alone, and always tell someone your itinerary. But this I never did; I rarely had more than a general idea of my route or destination. I travelled solo most of the time and had the most ultimate sense of freedom possible. I played very high stakes, over and over again, for thousands and thousands of miles, and hundreds and hundreds of hours in the saddle. A flat tire or a broken bike part would have been a disaster; a broken body part would have likely meant death. But somehow I managed to get myself back home every time. I'm not sure how many of my nine lives are left.

 
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adventure, dirt biking, exploration, nature, travelogue, true life

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Catherine Edmunds wrote 225 days ago

I'm looking at your book out of sheer curiosity as I don't even know what a 'dirt bike' is. No doubt I will soon find out.

Cover art is good. Very powerful image. Short pitch does the business. Long pitch promises much, so I'll be interested to see if the book delivers.

Chapter one. First thing that strikes me is that although the actual material is good, I'm constantly put off by the dodgy punctuation. There are too many incorrectly used commas, too many run on sentences, and an incorrectly used exclamation mark in the second paragraph. I suspect this is going to be the pattern for the rest of the text, so I'm now going to ignore the punctuation and concentrate on the story.

The blow by blow description of the accident is great. Very vivid. The reader is of course saying, 'You idiot - why no helmet?' and is relieved to find at the end of the chapter that you would never ride without one again. The description of the injuries had me wondering why you didn't see a doctor straight away until the 'no medical insurance' phrase which reminded me you're in a country where you can't simply go and see a doctor just because you need one.

The structure of the episode is strong and you end the chapter on a good hook.

I can see this book being extremely popular with anyone who has any interest in this sort of biking. I'm obviously not your target audience, but I enjoyed the ride through the first chapter. You do need to sort out the punctuation, particularly as regards commas, and also check whether it's standard practice where you are to use capitals for mph when using the expression within a narrative text (it isn't here, so that stuck out for me).

Very best of luck with this one. I think it will prove popular.

Kris Mikelson wrote 226 days ago

Hey Rex,
I read the first chapter - awesome! If this is true and you have photos to go with it this would be an awesome book. My son rides dirt bikes and I know he's got some stories of his own. But if you ever get this published I would definitly buy it for him.
Keep going,
Kris
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Kris Mikelson wrote 226 days ago
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Hope this helps. It's a rough life. My wife put the whole thing together. Regards.

schild wrote 244 days ago

Hey Rex,
I'm a graduate of Utah State in Logan. I like the whole motorcycle scene that you write about. My novel contains sections of flat track racing. I like your narative prose, fun.
David schild( The Next John Elway )

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