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date submitted 02.12.2011
date updated 15.02.2012
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THE BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT WAS NEVER TOLD

Joe Adu-Gyamfi

THE BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT WAS NEVER TOLD--It is just a poem of one stanza. Read it and cry.

 

This collection is the author’s first work in poetry. The poems bring to mind the poignant moments of life from the writer's childhood to today. The tones of the poems are set in high emotional level--emotions that are inspired by love, nature, grief, injustice, mystery, beauty, remorse, loss and admiration.

In all, the collection contains 39-poems categorized into;
Narratives--The Beautiful Story That Was Never Told/ The Stranger
Elegies --It Tears Me Down, I Told You I Was Sick, Etc
Writers’ poems--Challenges of a Writer
Figurative--The Eyes of Dora
Political/historical--Don’t Trust Risky
Motivational--What Do You See
Society-- The Arrow, Racism, Etc
Ode--Ghana’s Favourite Hometown

In-the-poem the ‘Stranger’, Joe Adu-Gyamfi strives to solve the complexity of the difference between poetry and prose, but unlike T.S. Eliot, Robert Frost,Ben Jonson and-Paul Valéry, he didn't add to the mystery but walks the talk by authoring one piece in both poetry and prose to allow the independent-minded-reader to judge.

In "Challenges of a Writer", he sums up in few words the numerous challenges writers face. He goes further to motivate writers in another piece--titled: 'A-Great-Writer--Who-is-He' and complement it with 'A Poet's Last Poem'.


 
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Davidmauriceware wrote 89 days ago

Hey Joe, You definitely have something different here, I personally couldn't really get into it. When it comes to poetry, personally I guess I'm just use to the traditional style. You need to go back over each one and read them outloud slowly so that you can correct the gramattical errors. I found several which also took away from what you were trying to express. Don't let my constuctive criticism discourage you. Allow it to fuel you to go fine tune your work , which will only make it better. People on here will tell you what sounds good to get you to support there work and actually hurt you more than help.I personally prefer true and honest critique. Stay motivated.

JOE ADU-GYAMFI wrote 13 days ago

i have said it time and again that i love constructive criticisms because it makes my work better and stronger so i very much appreciate David's comments but I'm afraid i do not approve of your comments:"People here will tell you what sounds good to get you to support their work." that to me was beyond the pale because most of the critics who have supported my work here have done so genuinely and sincerely . If you had taken a little trouble to check those backing this work, you'd have notice that it has been on their shelves for so many months.And these are people I dont know personally--they live in different continents from mine and some of them feel peeved.also some of their comments have helped me more because they have constructively pointed to particular errors which I'm yet to edit. i think you could ve done same than making a general assumption. the stark truth is that some of the poems here have been reviewed by university press in south africa and in hawaii, you wouldnt say they're all wrong.

Davidmauriceware wrote 89 days ago

Hey Joe, You definitely have something different here, I personally couldn't really get into it. When it comes to poetry, personally I guess I'm just use to the traditional style. You need to go back over each one and read them outloud slowly so that you can correct the gramattical errors. I found several which also took away from what you were trying to express. Don't let my constuctive criticism discourage you. Allow it to fuel you to go fine tune your work , which will only make it better. People on here will tell you what sounds good to get you to support there work and actually hurt you more than help.I personally prefer true and honest critique. Stay motivated.

ReconPilot wrote 100 days ago

Joe,

Fantastic story...the two lovers. Quarcoe is amazing...I was reminded a bit of Edgar Allen Poe. I've watchlisted and will shelve. Rated 6 stars.

One thing: check your spelling of corpse; you spell in copse sometimes. Copse is a word that will make it through a spellcheck just fine...so be careful. Minor detail, chilling story. Well done!

mcgroarty7 wrote 109 days ago

Hey Joe,

I'm not really into poetry, maybe school just ruined it for me, which is why I am happily surprised that this is brilliant. I've never written poetry, it seems like a very difficult and personal process, but from what I read, it's impossible not to emote with each story. Which is the best of things. I will back this 100%.

Michael

miss patricia wrote 155 days ago

Joe
I really love poems and you have very promising and enchanting one.I really enjoyed reading those complex poems. In fact if I place side by side your age and your work I am tempted to think there is man behind the boy. But don’t take offence anyway for that really shows how impressed I am after reading over twenty of your poems. You have some poems at chapter 9 which are really beautiful pieces. I wish you could have uploaded those ones in the earlier chapters. I really don’t know why I am suggesting this but I think they really appeal more to me. I really love to have insight into other people’s lives and it seems to me that exactly a lot more of that in that poems. There are some editing issues also. Like defile instead of defy in your electrifying poem: the stranger, I say electrifying because there is some power in that. You also have piece instead of peace in your hometown poem and turkeys instead of turkey in in think racism. In all I think your strongest poem is ‘the great writer’. i think that’s an award wining poem. Send it any literary award and you are going to walk away a winner it’s so powerful and inspirational however, I would advise you fish out about 3 stanzas—they didn’t appeal to me in away. But the rest 17 or19 stanzas are great. Take that with a grain of salt Joe.
Mrs. Patricia
Book agent/writer

Connie King wrote 156 days ago

Hebivore City
Joe, this was an enchanting read, children will adore this. I sat down earlier to read the first couple of pages; an hour later, i was still there, book in hand transfixed. A compelling good - natured affectionate tale you write so graceful with a wonderful imagination. Well done!
High stars.
Connie King x

Shelvis wrote 156 days ago

All I had time to read today was the first chapter, but what I got to experience made my heart pound. Your imagery is rich, truly poetic, using few colors to paint an enormous scene. I don't know why...but your writing style reminds me of Basquiat, if his work was poetry. (I don't even know if that makes sense, but there it is.) I found myself wanting to hide my eyes sometimes. I give this five stars and adding it to my WL so I can enjoy it when I have even more time.

Keep this up. You have a beautiful voice among thousands.

Hana Bathir
Sea of Jasmine

Chief Chebe wrote 160 days ago

Joe,
I have been scanning through your poems. Very impressive. Your writing is very strong and your painting and depictions are vivid. Keep working hard and harder. There are a few things I am jotting down which I will discuss with you later. Nothing to do with the power of your writing just ideas and stuff. You make me very proud to see a young Ghana on this excellent global forum for bright minded people. Respect and lots of good luck.
Chief Chebe

str8 wrote 163 days ago

Joe-
For the most part, I'm not a fan of poetry, but yours was very good. It's tone and pacing was great, and in all, the poems were very enjoyable. Well done.

Warrick Mayes wrote 164 days ago

Joe,

I read a few of your clever poems. I am very simple in my tastes for poetry, so something that scans easily and rhymes beautifully will always grab me. I'm afraid that much of yours is a little too clever my my simple tastes. However, I found "Casting Pearls Before Swine" - was that the right title? About the dog with the bones. I loved it, and would love to see more like this - witty and observant.

I was a little confused in the second line of "The Stranger" where you write "I had to defile cold and fright" did you really mean "Defile" or should that have been "defy". It's not easy to guess in something like poetry where the author could be playing with the reader, so that is why I had to ask rather than just say you've got it wrong.

Best regards
Warrick

MrKarats wrote 164 days ago

Joe,

here for the return read, as promised. I read
'The Beautiful Story that was never Told', 'The Stranger', 'The Eyes of Dora', 'O! These People!' and a part of The Stranger as a prose.

The first was an entertaining story with a heartbreaking ending, amusing at points -I don't know if that was intentional, probably was. What I noticed is that you switched the lyricism of the writing on and off. It read as a prose at points and then at others you added the tone a poem needs. I think I liked better "O! These People!" both for the theme and the execution. It's not that the rest didn't appeal to me at all, but when it comes to poetry I need the writing to not offer an explanation or reasoning on anything. You have a lot of that in your poems. That's just taste however.

All the best with it :) 6 stars from me.

Yannis

JOE ADU-GYAMFI wrote 164 days ago

Thank you all for y our sincere comments. I just got my poems edited and rearranged. i realized that it was somewhat cumbersome reading over 40 poems in 40 chapters so i decided to categorize my poems. now i have about 40 poem but in just 8 chapters to make it easier to read and to know the types. so for instance narrative chapter contains all narrative poems and elegy, figurative, motivational, ode, etc. also contain just that.

Mademoiselle Nobel wrote 166 days ago

~The Beautiful Story That Was Never Told~

You have a little gem here, Joe! I enjoyed reading the stories contained in each poem.

I wish you all the luck with this!

Iman

Miss Manners: http://www.authonomy.com/books/39355/miss-manners

Diwrite wrote 167 days ago

Poetry's not really my bag, but I think this is great. It's different and challenging and deserves to be seen.

Will be giving it a spin on my shelf.

Good luck!
Diana
Pascual's Birthday

RK Summers wrote 168 days ago

Hi Joe!

I've commented on poetry before, and I've always said it's very difficult to comment since every poem is unique to the poet. I really like The Stranger, there's a sense of urgency and building fear throughout that I really enjoyed.

Good work!

RK Summers
The Albion Pages

JOE ADU-GYAMFI wrote 169 days ago

@ book fan 85--sincere comments!i really appreciate it. But am afraid i don't really get what you describe as religion--figurative perhaps. but i also appreciate that you acknowledged the fact that Ive poured a lot of myself into my work---that excites me because thats exactly what i was aiming when i was writing the poems.i believe poems must be very inspirational n at some points sacred so i think i love what you've said for its somewhat of a mission accomplished sort of thing for me. thanks very much
JOE ADU-GYAMFI

book fan 85 wrote 171 days ago

you have an unique writing style when it comes to your poems, but im afraid there was far to much religion woven within the poems for me to enjoy them. However i can see that you've poured a lot of your self into your work, and once you've found the right audience for them im sure they will flourish, good luck :-)

Shelby Z. wrote 173 days ago

You have a great way of writing your poems.
The poems are very different but full of heart.
Good work!

Shelby Z./Driving Winds

JOE ADU-GYAMFI wrote 173 days ago

I have done my possible best to rid my poems of any trace of vulgarity or offensive language. But a poem is from a man’s heart and in that highest level of emotional state, what is considered normal may sound something else to another. For instance; I wrote a piece here about racism and I was very meticulous about the way I went about it--if it turns out to be that the very person fighting racism is one himself then it gets ironically ugly. So though a poet ought to be stubborn and fearless yet I will welcome in open heart any suggestion that will make this collection better. There may also be few editing issues as these pieces haven’t passed through the hands of a literary critique. I am now counting on the able writers and editors of the greatest writing community--AUTHONOMY. If you should juxtapose my new work and comment with my previous book, you will notice a vast change in the quality of the writing as well as my character. The simple truth is that ever since I registered at Authonomy, I have leant a great deal. This community has really changed my life. All poems here were written between April 2011 and November 2011. God bless you all.

JOE ADU-GYAMFI
THE BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT WAS NEVER TOLD

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