Aspie In Psycholand

Though the author has some grammatical issues to deal with, 'Aspie in Psycholand' will at the least remind every reader of the many facets of narrative dealing with idiosyncratic human consciousness. This is Lewis Carroll meets ee cummings meets the John Lennon of 'In His Own Write" at a Goth Ball and makes me wonder if the author was also born onto the wrong planet. A question that provides one reason to check out Aspie.

Tingting,

I had a read of your new book. This looks very promising. I love the names and the ideas that you presented in the first chapter. There are significantly fewer mistakes than you had in your first book, but I still have a few comments. Unfortunately I didn't have enough time to read the whole first chapter.

Early on, "...exactly where the problem lied.." should probably be "...exactly where the problem lay.."

Instead of "God, did Sociopathia wanted a boy." I would suggest either "God, had Sociopathia wanted a boy." or "God, did Sociopathia want a boy."

In "...could be both of them, yes, either of them is getting away with the blame." I would suggest "neither" instead of "either".

Then instead of "Anything, anything but not this." I would say "Anything, anything but this." or a slight change in punctuation: "Anything, anything, but not this."

Finally, instead is "Now buy me all these stuff." should be either "Now buy me all these things." or "Now buy me all this stuff."

I do love the way you write, and I could spend hours helping you, but I also have to push my own book, so good luck.

Best wishes
Warrick

an enjoyable book, and very well witten. great pace, brilliant narrative, and skill---very well done...
backed with six stars******
read SEASONS...