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date submitted 21.12.2011
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The Girl who was Canada

Rosemary Canavan

She was eighteen when she posed for the Albert Memorial. Ten years later she was living under the walls of the grimmest prison in England.

 

Montreal, 1865. Sleighs wait in the snow-covered street as the colonial elite arrive at the Theatre Royal for a fancy dress ball. Inside, queens, knights templar and pirates wander past, but as the band strikes up a waltz and dancers begin to whirl around the floor one girl stands out.


Blonde, blue-eyed and corseted to within an inch of her life, ‘Nannie’ Price is the toast of the garrison town. The young officers cannot take their eyes off her, and their elderly commander insists on sending her to London to pose for the figure of Canada on the Albert Memorial. To the despair of her mother, she turns down two proposals, and becomes close to the illegitimate son of the Queen's cousin.


Later, faced with the realities of life in Victorian England, she marries. Her husband becomes a prison governor, and as she watches gangs of half-starved prisoners file past her house to dig out the vast Chatham dockyards, Nannie must fight depression and illness to remake her life.


The true story of a Victorian wild child, the men she married – and the man she loved.

 
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Eileen Kardos wrote 133 days ago

The pitch does what it should, and pulls me in. I love a drama based on a true story, so I am part of your target audience all right.

I like the ominous Bluebeard reference, in the very beginning. Things will not be straightforward for this girl. It looks like she’s going to be flung aside like the other props of the artist’s trade, this naïve eighteen year old. Then what will happen to her? This is the question you have set up well in your first chapter.

It’s also a great idea, for all those who have seen the Albert Memorial – it never occurred to me, for all the times I have walked past it, that these figures were based on real women, as silly as that may sound. I assumed they were created out of the artist’s imagination. So that aspect of it was intriguing.

It’s a fine idea. Hr story is well worth telling, and your research looks very thorough. Best of luck with this.

From
Eileen Kardos
The Noodle Trail

AuroraNemesis wrote 142 days ago

An enchanting story, wrote with real feeling and an understanding of your characters.
You are at ease with your storytelling techniques.
The pace flows beautifully and the POV is perfect, and makes the story more captivating.
Your description is enthralling and the dialogue is gripping.
You end each chapter with a riveting hook that makes the reader turn the page wanting more of the feeling you convey in your lines.
I can see your feeling run deep with the writing of this book and it shows in the finished piece.
Well done, I have rated this very highly and would recommend it to others.
xx

Wussyboy wrote 148 days ago

A lot of work has gone into this - I mean, a LOT of work. Your first chapter impresses with just about everything - fine writing, fully-rounded characters, authentic-for-the-period dialogue, and faultless attention to detail. How many months of research did this take you? I'm guessing a fair few! Your style is highly readable - bordering on the addictive, indeed - and 'Nannie' is a very engaging central character - strong (half-Irish!) and surprisingly confident - even when posing naked before a man. Not great characteristics for marriage in those days, shame to say, so I'll be interested to see who she ends up with!

6 stars from me, and I'll be back for more.

Joe Kovacs
Rupee Millionaires

(I see you've got Belle's Pembeley Polluted on your shelf. Yours is like a 'straight' version of it - though with some really amusing drolleries peppered in. I particularly liked 'America' on a bison striding urgently forward! Oh, and 'procure me a fur'!

Dianna Lanser wrote 150 days ago

Rosemary,

I was totally captivated by the strong and brave ancestry that led Nannie Price to take her place in history as The Girl that was Canada. The prologue was such an effective hook to lead into and adventure-filled back story. The beautiful young woman’s heritage is filled with stories of courage and determination in a time when life was anything but easy. I especially found the world travels of John Banner Price’s family amazing. You must be proud of your ancestor’s stamina to endure under such difficult circumstances.

You have a wonderful way of drawing in your audience with clear descriptions and expert knowledge of the life and times of the nineteenth century. Notes of world events: the ever expanding British colonialism, civil war, plagues, royal visits, economic ruin and successes, all work together to give your book a truly educational and entertaining appeal.

I especially enjoyed chapter five, reading about Nannies teen years in Montreal, Prince Albert’s charm on the new world, and the aversion of a possible “world” war. This information was all new to me.

I really liked what I read and would like to read more when you have it posted. Six stars!

Dianna Lanser
Nothing But The Blood

D. S. Hale wrote 149 days ago

Exceptional work, and obvious research! I enjoy reading stories that entwine history and bring them to life. Your story is intriguing, and you draw the reader right in. I couldn't put it down (I think the chili burnt!), and eagerly clicked further into the book. You write well, and edit yourself well, too. I didn't find any errors to speak of. High stars, and looking forward to watching this one climb the ranks.

Sincerely,
D. S. Hale
Jessup and the Teleporter

Investigator wrote 57 days ago

Rosemary, I stumbled upon your online book last night whilst searching for information about John Banner Price. He is my Great Great Grandfather. I can't tell you how excited I am about finding your book. It answered so many questions, and made the family so real. I absolutely love it and am so admiring of the incredible research you have done. My line is from Edward Thomas Price, my Great Grandfather, and brother to Mary Ann, the hero of your book. My grandfather was his son Edward Graham Price who came out to Kalgoorlie in 1889, at the age of 17. He had a short life dying at 37, however he made a huge mark during that time. My father, Walter Fuller Price was born in Kalgoorlie in 1902. My main research has been about him. Would love to meet you. Pamela.

giggy wrote 63 days ago

Rosemary-Yes the pitch and prologue draws one in. I am not a critic or writer, just a reader who knows what I enjoy. This is it! It flows very well and I'm giving it six stars and it will probably go on my shelf. I appreciate the story even more since this was your great-grandmother. I also love Ireland! I've been there several times.

I think this book will certainly be published.

Sharon Giggy

ClaireLyman wrote 64 days ago

I'm not much of a historical fiction reader but your pitch pulls me in. So does the title, actually - I like it. And forbidden love and unrequited love - all good themes to pique my interest!
The prologue pulled me in too. The way it starts is great - I can picture the scene, and I like that it tells me a bit about why you've chosen the title you have. You work the backstory in well, and it's engaging. I like the dialogue too - "Trussed from throat to hip like a rolled loin of lamb" - that's great. There's something about the voice that I really like, I can't quite put my finger on it. I like the present tense too, makes it more immediate. The voice and style seem to change after the prologue, though, and that's a shame. You give us a lot of backstory straight up when the prologue has shown us how skille dyou are at weaving it into narrative... Would love to see more of that.

strachan gordon wrote 64 days ago

Hello , you have created a most convincing milieu , which clearly reflects a high standard of reasearch , which is what all historical novelists ought to achieve but many don't. Watchlisted and starred. Would you be able to look at the first chapter of my novel 'A Buccaneer' which is szet amongst Pirates in the 17th century , with best wishes from Strachan Gordon

Paul Burrard wrote 79 days ago

Hi Rose
I read a few pages of your book whilst I was browsing and really liked it. You have a beautiful writing style - very precise and insightful. It draws you into the page. I could really feel the sculpting of Nannie. I'm not surprised that you have already been published.
Paul
"Dead Moon Rising"

katemb wrote 85 days ago

I have just finished the first chapter and found it highly engaging! The character of John Bell is particularly well handled. His dialogue is really well done. You've a lot of information here (which I enjoyed and found interesting) and it comes out very naturally as part of the scene. I loved the mother sitting watching and letting her daughter take off her corsets.

Is it finished or a work in progess? I see it's not all up on the site.
Thanks,
Kate

jlbwye wrote 87 days ago

The Girl who was Canada. A great title, and a riveting, excellent pitch. I cant wait to read on.

ch.1. Prologue. A brilliant, atmospheric opening in the London studio. And the present tense is perfect. I dont think you need the pluperfect - plain past tense for the back-story would do, to my mind.
I almost excuse you for switching viewpoints with paragraphs - you write so well.
Love that idea 'imagine a fur, and procure me a sheepskin.'
Brief glimpses of the pathos of life,beautifully told.
And that's only the Prologue -

Ch.2. I would be inclined to suggest you open the chapter with Mary-Anne, or even Nannie - and allow the back-story to feed in drips later on. As it stands, that's an awful lot of history to swallow in one fell swoop - especially after that amazing Prologue.

ch.3. Surprisingly, you now adopt an authorial viewpoint, which directly addresses the reader. I'm not sure that this works ... but it is only my opinion.
I'd rather identify more closely with Mary Price, the Emigrant.

Your descriptions are rich, with their depth of detail and the extent of your research is evident. The account of the sea journey is dramatic - but could be even more so if you engaged the reader by seeing it through the eyes of a traveller.

In one chapter you say the driver 'would have pointed out the Commissariat offices...' and in the next, you say 'As the carriage rattled through the streets the Price children stared...'
Perhaps you need to decide on aq single viewpoint, and stick with it?

The great fruit bats hanging like witches' bundles in the trees. Wonderful imagery.

This account with its quotations reminds me somewhat of a history essay, or paper. Very well written, full and knowledgeable, but is it right for a historical novel?

I must stop here, but am enchanted and enthralled by the promise of your writing, and you're going onto my w/list.
There's editing to be done, but we all have to do it, and your book is especially worth it.

Jane (Breath of Africa).

Tom Bye wrote 89 days ago

Hello Rosemary'
book- The girl who was Canada-

I like reading non fiction books steeped in history- and this one, I found after reading the first four chapaters;
on one of the better ones on site-
You have paid great attention to detail in relating this story of yours Found it t be an excellent story as we move form the setting in London and back to Canada, the story picking up at a nice pace all- of the time;
i rate this book very highly and can see it going to the top soon-
tom bye
Book-from hugs to kisses'
oblige please and read my true life story based in Dublin, in the 40s- thank you Rosemary

magog wrote 93 days ago

An abundance of detail in this book, a joy to read. A great insight into the era, due, I would guess to your painstaking and meticulous research.
The harrowing journey to Mauritius comes alive due to excellent writing throughout.

How wonderful to be able to tell your Great Grandmother's story for future generations.

Best of luck
Carole Pitt

Adeel wrote 93 days ago

Dear Rose so far i have found your book very amusing. I have rated it as a 6 star book and is now in my watch list and will give it place in my shelf soon.

Jane Catherine wrote 94 days ago

Your skill in using time-appropriate terms and dialogue is quite amazing and draws the reader into that historical world well. From the pitch, I was prepared for the story of a woman's life, materializing against a harsh Canadian early life. I felt chapter 2 bogged down into historical fact of the family and the momentum in fleshing out the main character was lost. Would it be possible to weave this into the plot little by little as you go along? Your impressive research and settings give the feeling that we've opened a dusty old leather diary...which makes it very interesting.

Definitely you're a seasoned writer, I'd love your expertise and suggests for mine. "The Celestial Proposal"

Joy Eastman wrote 94 days ago

Your understanding and heart wrenching description make this book truly unique. You make one feel the journey through time actually real with your vivid protrayal of not only characters but scenery painting which is extraordinary. This book has highest stars from me and I will keep on my watchlist until I can move up to my shelf
Blessings joy

nenno wrote 95 days ago

Wonderful writing. You leave the reader richer. All the best.

Rose C wrote 98 days ago

Hi Writer in Red,

Thanks for your thoughtful comments, which I really appreciated. I just wanted to mention that that first chapter was intended as a prologue, to set the scene. I did intend the tense change, as the first paragraph shows us Nannie posing, and the rest of the chapter tells us how she came to be there.

And thanks for reading on...

Rosemary

Good start, but lacks to capture my attention. I enjoy your imagery; found it beautifully written and poetic. A few comments: for the intense background story of Nannie in this opening chapter, I fail to see much of her personality break forth. The first paragraph is written in the present tense while the rest of the chapter appears in the past tense. I found this troubling and odd. It caused me to back track in my mind and a slight moment of confusion. Not sure if this tense change was intentional but it is bothersome. I like how you capture the feel of the age you are writing in, very well done. My biggest concern is the lack of plot development in this first chapter. Although this is my opinion and others may like it, I find it off-putting that little of the story moves forward. I will read more.

Best of luck

Writer in Red wrote 102 days ago

Good start, but lacks to capture my attention. I enjoy your imagery; found it beautifully written and poetic. A few comments: for the intense background story of Nannie in this opening chapter, I fail to see much of her personality break forth. The first paragraph is written in the present tense while the rest of the chapter appears in the past tense. I found this troubling and odd. It caused me to back track in my mind and a slight moment of confusion. Not sure if this tense change was intentional but it is bothersome. I like how you capture the feel of the age you are writing in, very well done. My biggest concern is the lack of plot development in this first chapter. Although this is my opinion and others may like it, I find it off-putting that little of the story moves forward. I will read more.

Best of luck

Michael Geddes wrote 103 days ago

Clean and involving prose. Convincing dialogue that adds good energy to the scenes(I esp liked the tag-free conversational exchanges) Good sense of time and place. Engaging blend of what appears to be both fiction and fact. Highly starred/shelved. Best of luck with this. Thanks.

J. A. S. Gorsky wrote 106 days ago

Well, done. Chapter One has me wanting more. Your details are fantastic. I will be back for more!

JASGorsky

Sue Harries wrote 109 days ago

added to wl will back when spot free. Sue 'It's a Dog's Life'

Iva P. wrote 112 days ago

This is exactly the kind of book I love to read. I ran through all 6 chapters, each of them crammed with interesting historical and social facts. Brilliant. Once it is published, I'll buy it. Six stars and a place on my bookshelf during the next shuffle.

Iva P.
Fame nad Infamy

shep2 wrote 118 days ago

The characters and the atmosphere of the era are starting to come to life. I look forward to reading the completed work.
Very impressive amount of research has gone into this. Hope the level of detail can be sustained.
xxchris

tojo wrote 119 days ago

A quite amazing book, could not stop reading once I started, I will find no fault with it, am sure it will reach the front soon. I am well pleased to have it on my shelf.

Campervan Man wrote 121 days ago

Fascinating insight into a bygone age told with verve. Not a story I was familar with.

Emma.L.H. wrote 121 days ago

So glad I stumbled upon this. I'm a HUGE fan of the Victorian era and this type of book is just my kind of read. I've read a few chapters and am popping you on my watchlist so I can read more when I've got time. Well done.

Eponymous Rox wrote 126 days ago

Hullo there, Rosemary. As promised your gorgeous 'Girl...' is now proudly featured on me webbie in the Nonfiction section. Wishing you great luck AND success with this appealing biography. It's a beauty.

CHEERS--
E.R.


Catwriter1 wrote 130 days ago

A fascinating read and a real insight into the Victorian era. I look forward to finding out more ......

Eponymous Rox wrote 131 days ago

Was just looking at this one again offline and, since I'm quite impressed with it, thought I'd just pop in for a quick minute to shelve 'The Girl That Was Canada' (poignant title, by the way; never change it!) and to post a brief comment:

I overlooked this book before because, firstly, I didn't realise it was Nonfiction and, secondly, there are, peppered within these vital opening paragraphs, typos unworthy of you---e.g. 'the studio has a[n] air of untid[i]ness about it'. So I would consider tweaking ASAP minor defects like those which, when they accumulate in a short space of *time*, can serve to deter readers from an intriguing tale and make them conclude, wrongly, that you aren't a skilled writer.

*Backing it now and will read on with an eye to promoting the work shortly on my website, too. Nice job and very best of luck with it!

E.R.

Angela Rush wrote 131 days ago

Really enjoyed the initial chapters. A fascinating tale and I am intrigued to know more.

Andrew Hughes wrote 132 days ago

Hi Rose,

I loved the writing of the prologue; the details of Bell’s studio seemed so authentic. The idea of framing the story with the Albert Memorial works really well.

The way you narrate the family saga is excellent, particularly in Ch’s 2 and 3 (as far as I’ve got). I’m really impressed with how you’ve captured the sweep and excitement of Victorian empire building, as well as the more painful and repugnant aspects – both in the West Indies and back in London.

It’s really well done. I’m looking forward to reading more of Nannie’s story. Best of luck with it,
Andrew.
The Morning Drop

Kaychristina wrote 133 days ago

Rosemary, what a fascinating, incredible history of this one woman's life and family you have given us! Nannie really is the embodiment of Canada.

The Prologue is colourful, visionary, wrought with a wealth of arts and crafts detail, and the thoughts of Nannie and Mrs Price give it a humanity that's as real as if you experienced it alongside her.

Then we have the history behind the Prices, the military life, the difference between old London (Pimlico - where I used to live!), and the exotica of Mauritius. And we have sad losses, the hard yet privileged life with so many children. Now we have vibrant Montreal, and the coming of the Prince - Bertie! I am up to that point, and another sad loss, with Nannie plunged from the excitement of choosing dresses, lace and ribbons for the Prince's imminent arrival, into mourning black.

Highly starred, and I'll be backing this homage to Canada as soon as I possibly can.

From Kay-Christina
(*Annacara*)

Eileen Kardos wrote 133 days ago

The pitch does what it should, and pulls me in. I love a drama based on a true story, so I am part of your target audience all right.

I like the ominous Bluebeard reference, in the very beginning. Things will not be straightforward for this girl. It looks like she’s going to be flung aside like the other props of the artist’s trade, this naïve eighteen year old. Then what will happen to her? This is the question you have set up well in your first chapter.

It’s also a great idea, for all those who have seen the Albert Memorial – it never occurred to me, for all the times I have walked past it, that these figures were based on real women, as silly as that may sound. I assumed they were created out of the artist’s imagination. So that aspect of it was intriguing.

It’s a fine idea. Hr story is well worth telling, and your research looks very thorough. Best of luck with this.

From
Eileen Kardos
The Noodle Trail

orfhlaith wrote 134 days ago

Love it so far. Great atmosphere, lots of delicious detail.

KenQld wrote 135 days ago

G'day! Rosemary Canavan

What a charming book!

And what a nice change from the usual deluge of novels.

Well done! So well done I'm moved to back you. You deserve it.

May 2012 be kind and successful for you.

Regards,
KEN BLOWERS

An old man in Australia
who happens to write
Short Stories
Drama/Comedy one-act plays
Plus QUOTE ME
A book of 1,000 quotations

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 136 days ago

Dear Rosemary

Reading on, I have just finished chapter two, "The Roaring Forties" and would like to read more. Your mixture of entertaining writing with eye-opening detail is irresistible. A thoroughly researched, well written and fascinating tale. I wish you every success. Your book deserves to do very well indeed. Top rating now. I shall be reading more!

Fran :-)

James Bremner wrote 137 days ago

Dear Ms Canavan,

The Girl that was Canada is strikingly original and beautifully stylish. You capture atmosphere and period detail while keeping a jaunty pace and strong sense of narrative. Having worked in the publishing business in various editorial capacities I think this is a book a publisher would be mad not snap up.

Yours faithfully,
James Bremner

Rose C wrote 139 days ago

I love this. The Albert Memorial was part of my childhood [I grew up in Bayswater] and we often took walks past it; I never thought about who the models for the statues might have been. Is it true that the memorial was built by public subscription, and that there was so much money left over they were able to build the Albert Hall with it? I wish you the very best of luck with this fascinating story, which has so much detail skilfully and lightly incorporated into the narrative.


Hi Frances, I was so pleased to hear that the Albert Memorial had a personal connection for you. As to its building, it was built partly by public subscriptions raised by the Lord Mayor and the Royal Society of Arts, and partly by a Parliamentary grant. The memorial cost more than was expected, so there were not enough funds left to complete the Albert Hall, and money had to be raised by selling 'permanent' seats in the hall - Rosemary

Neville wrote 140 days ago

The Girl that was Canada.
By Rosemary Canavan.


I’m very impressed by your book, there’s such a lot of effort gone into it.
The style of your writing makes for an easy involvement in the storyline, the book flows along nicely.
Your research would have taken some time I’m sure, but you’ve captured the past history of Nannie Price in a wonderful way. Leaving very little of her colourful life out, I should imagine.
I’ve enjoyed this read, against the backdrop of an open fire with a whiskey and tonic.
This is how a good book should be read...yours is no exception to the rule.
Well done!

Kind regards,

Neville Kent. The Secrets of the Forest – The Time Zone.


FrancesK wrote 140 days ago

I love this. The Albert Memorial was part of my childhood [I grew up in Bayswater] and we often took walks past it; I never thought about who the models for the statues might have been. Is it true that the memorial was built by public subscription, and that there was so much money left over they were able to build the Albert Hall with it? I wish you the very best of luck with this fascinating story, which has so much detail skilfully and lightly incorporated into the narrative.

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 140 days ago

Dear Rosemary

I have only read the prologue of your book, "The GIrl That Was Canada" and already I feel quite at home! There is a wealth of detail, a gentle irony that exposes very well the hypocrisies of Victorian values, and super writing. I have this on my list to come back to. Meantime, highly starred and all the best.

Fran Macilvey, "Trapped" :-)

Su Dan wrote 142 days ago

an intriguing read- perfectly. although this is quite involved, it does work and is a treat for the eyes...
l shall back...
read SEASONS...

NMott wrote 142 days ago

Very accomplished, but I think you start the story too early. This book is about Nannie Price, but the first 2 chapters are about her father. The book doesn't start properly until chapter 3.
It's worth putting a note at the end of the pitch to say if it's complete, and, if so, add the total wordcount, rounded up to the nearest 1000 words.
All the best with it.

AuroraNemesis wrote 142 days ago

An enchanting story, wrote with real feeling and an understanding of your characters.
You are at ease with your storytelling techniques.
The pace flows beautifully and the POV is perfect, and makes the story more captivating.
Your description is enthralling and the dialogue is gripping.
You end each chapter with a riveting hook that makes the reader turn the page wanting more of the feeling you convey in your lines.
I can see your feeling run deep with the writing of this book and it shows in the finished piece.
Well done, I have rated this very highly and would recommend it to others.
xx

Cath, AN wrote 147 days ago

Enjoyed it thus far!

Wussyboy wrote 148 days ago

A lot of work has gone into this - I mean, a LOT of work. Your first chapter impresses with just about everything - fine writing, fully-rounded characters, authentic-for-the-period dialogue, and faultless attention to detail. How many months of research did this take you? I'm guessing a fair few! Your style is highly readable - bordering on the addictive, indeed - and 'Nannie' is a very engaging central character - strong (half-Irish!) and surprisingly confident - even when posing naked before a man. Not great characteristics for marriage in those days, shame to say, so I'll be interested to see who she ends up with!

6 stars from me, and I'll be back for more.

Joe Kovacs
Rupee Millionaires

(I see you've got Belle's Pembeley Polluted on your shelf. Yours is like a 'straight' version of it - though with some really amusing drolleries peppered in. I particularly liked 'America' on a bison striding urgently forward! Oh, and 'procure me a fur'!

northside salta wrote 148 days ago

Only had time to read the first chapter but greatly enjoyed what I read. A nice attention to detail brings the story alive.

D. S. Hale wrote 149 days ago

Exceptional work, and obvious research! I enjoy reading stories that entwine history and bring them to life. Your story is intriguing, and you draw the reader right in. I couldn't put it down (I think the chili burnt!), and eagerly clicked further into the book. You write well, and edit yourself well, too. I didn't find any errors to speak of. High stars, and looking forward to watching this one climb the ranks.

Sincerely,
D. S. Hale
Jessup and the Teleporter

Dianna Lanser wrote 150 days ago

Rosemary,

I was totally captivated by the strong and brave ancestry that led Nannie Price to take her place in history as The Girl that was Canada. The prologue was such an effective hook to lead into and adventure-filled back story. The beautiful young woman’s heritage is filled with stories of courage and determination in a time when life was anything but easy. I especially found the world travels of John Banner Price’s family amazing. You must be proud of your ancestor’s stamina to endure under such difficult circumstances.

You have a wonderful way of drawing in your audience with clear descriptions and expert knowledge of the life and times of the nineteenth century. Notes of world events: the ever expanding British colonialism, civil war, plagues, royal visits, economic ruin and successes, all work together to give your book a truly educational and entertaining appeal.

I especially enjoyed chapter five, reading about Nannies teen years in Montreal, Prince Albert’s charm on the new world, and the aversion of a possible “world” war. This information was all new to me.

I really liked what I read and would like to read more when you have it posted. Six stars!

Dianna Lanser
Nothing But The Blood

Warrick Mayes wrote 153 days ago

Rosemary,

What a wonderful imagination to dress a story so beautifully in its fine vintage. The language is perhaps not as aged as the root of the story, but probably better for this. The tone of the girl from the streets was none-the-less rich in its own poverty.

You have a way of telling that story that suggets and afinity with the subject.

Highly rated
Warrick

Rose C wrote 154 days ago

Thanks Tammy,
Delighted you enjoyed it. It's a true story: the prologue is fictionalised, the rest as little as possible. I've worked from family papers, and researched wherever I can find information about the period - books, journals, the internet. And yes, yellow fever still exists, mainly in tropical areas of Africa and South America. There's no cure, but there is a vaccine!

Hi Rosemary :-)
I’ve read the prologue and first 4 chapters, and I love that you have written a story about your great-grandmother! Too often our ancestors are black and white pictures in frames, we forget they were people too and I’m always curious as to their thoughts and passions. A wonderful slice of history. Did you have to fictionalise a great deal of this or did you have help from journals etc? Only nitpick is at times it's a lot of historical information all at once, but honestly I can't see which bits you could cut! I'm guessing that people who love reading historical fiction will have no problem with all the detail. Yellow Fever sounds horrible :-( Does it still exist these days?
5 Stars
Tammy Robinson

kiwigirl2011 wrote 155 days ago

Hi Rosemary :-)
I’ve read the prologue and first 4 chapters, and I love that you have written a story about your great-grandmother! Too often our ancestors are black and white pictures in frames, we forget they were people too and I’m always curious as to their thoughts and passions. A wonderful slice of history. Did you have to fictionalise a great deal of this or did you have help from journals etc? Only nitpick is at times it's a lot of historical information all at once, but honestly I can't see which bits you could cut! I'm guessing that people who love reading historical fiction will have no problem with all the detail. Yellow Fever sounds horrible :-( Does it still exist these days?
5 Stars
Tammy Robinson

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