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rank 4753
word count 13640
date submitted 24.12.2011
date updated 13.01.2012
genres: Romance, Young Adult
classification: universal
incomplete

Raggle Taggle Gypsy

AJK

Love across boundaries is always risky especially where dark blood is involved.

(please note edit required chapter 3 onwards :)

 

The gypsy way of life is set in stone and traditions must be adhered to. Yet when Laurie meets Tom Piper, a gaje, a series of events unravels as dark blood meets pale blood. Can anyone tame a gypsy?

 
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forbidden love, gypsy, magic, mystery, romance, teen

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Brian G Chambers wrote 121 days ago

Thanks for the backing AJK I have rated yours and put it on my WL for now. Hope to get back to it soon.
Brian.

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sheila cooper wrote 134 days ago

I am a sucker for love stories and I love your concept, perhaps a little look at your editing by a good critique would be helpful to perfect your work, really enjoyed the read and have starred it well. :)

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Lainie wrote 136 days ago

Hi AJK,
I've just read your book and really like your ideas although I think it could do with editing. One thing that confused me was Jonas/Jake. Are they the same person or two different people?
Once it's edited and uploaded I think you'll find it's popularity will grow immensely.
I look forward to reading the finished draft.

Lainie :)

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roundrobin1 wrote 138 days ago

Hi AJK,
I really enjoyed your opening chapter. It sets the scene very well. I am sure that M & B will like it. Just a small point to make if you don't mind. Paragraph 5 has a sentence that says ' adversity to travel' I think that this should be ' aversion to travel'. Best of luck with it. Lots of stars and a place on my bookshelf-Carole

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