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rank 5456
word count 12047
date submitted 04.02.2012
date updated 21.04.2012
genres: Fiction, Children's, Young Adult
classification: universal
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The Train into Providence

Lee Lee

Are you worthy of acceptance?

 

His happiness lost long ago in the accidental death of his daughter, and his home beneath the bridge of the local train station, Sampson Kallis longs for (what he knows to be impossible) re-accptance from the society that rejects him. And when his life collides with the Hanzles, one of the wealthiest, most well-known families in the small, 1960s state of Rhode Island, Sampson realizes that what he wants might be possible after all.

 
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Labradors and cappuccino wrote 108 days ago

speak with Mrs Regretta. And when the she.......just a small point that you might want to check this bit as it may need editing. The font changes part way through as well.
Quite interesting insight into how an old man views the house.

Freddie Omm wrote 110 days ago

yes, an original and quirky narrative i enjoyed a lot, history giving one a second chance is good.

AbbyLee wrote 110 days ago

I feel bad that you weren't able to grasp my story. It's a shame.

Oh, and I wish I could write as good of pitches as you can. That's also a shame.


no, the pitch is not good, nor has his life, as you suggest, been thrown under the bridge by the local train station.

that the girls freckles made her look nearly omnipotent also seemed farftetched.

but i enjoyed your idiosynccratic vision!


Freddie Omm wrote 110 days ago

I enjoyed your idiosynccratic vision!


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