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rank 5457
word count 32479
date submitted 04.03.2009
date updated 13.12.2009
genres: Non-fiction, Biography, Popular Cul...
classification: universal
incomplete

Too Much Life To Die

John Brown as told to Pamela Brown

From homelessness and crack pipes to prison and lung disease, one musician's quest to be heard becomes a quest to survive.

 

I wanted simple things. A lover of music and nature, I wanted only to play my guitar, sing and write songs. Nestled in the small town of historic Culpeper, Va, my family was one of blue-collar workers with humble roots. School was filled with cruel peers whose goal in life was to make me miserable. Adulthood found me fighting through deadly accidents, a fire, suicide attempt, near drowning, and lung disease along with drugs, homelessness and prison. While in the prison hospital ward for nine months, I watched men die all around me while the staff were dismissive and uncaring. After all, they said, we were only prisoners. Nobody cared if we died. Not only did I not die, I lived to tell the stories of the passionate men on that ward who were ignored. And my own story. A story of a man who had Too Much Life To Die.

 
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Cheri Moffitt wrote 379 days ago

Good stuff, JW! I agree with comments, re: needing to complete the package... but the ingredients are DELICIOUS! I look forward to seeing where this goes. :-)

Cheri Moffitt

Andrew W. wrote 892 days ago

Too Much Life To Die



Hi John,



You have a harrowing and distressing tale here that really makes us sit up and take notice. A courageous and warm act to share this tale, so that others may learn by it. I think all you need to do now is to work on developing the series of vignettes you have so that they become a coherent story with a thread-like narrative running through them.



Best wishes, happy to support your book, it certainly does not deserve a red arrow

Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

TomW wrote 1174 days ago

Ok, I've read two chapters. You start well, showing us the "after" of this man's story. But then you return to a ho-hum linear story. Not ho-hum in the sense it isn't interesting, but ho-hum in that it's a series of vignettes that tell us his history, but don't begin your story.

What I would suggest is you get your story moving and drop those vignettes in along the way, whether it's to explain something that comes up in your plot, or perhaps told in flashback to someone encountered by your protag. Otherwise it's a series of mini-short stories that keep frustrating the reader who wants you to get on with the plot.

Best wishes with this and, if you think my comments aren't helpful, with attracting readers who don't agree with me.

Regards,

TomW

Eggowen wrote 1176 days ago

You're on my watchlist, John and Pamela. It was the pitch that did it. Back soon.

Best wishes,
Martyn :-)

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