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rank 5456
word count 41941
date submitted 08.04.2009
date updated 08.04.2009
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Chick Li...
classification: moderate
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ALL THESE ARE MEMORIES OF MY VOYAGE

DAVID BRETT

A story of sisterly rivalry, mathematics, medicine, fashion, art and unrequited loves ending in death. O.K.?

 

As for Talavera Street and all the other streets named upon battles. "What! you live there? Bloody Poles and Irish. Which is worse; you tell me?" Of the two Ryan girls, dark Serena decides she is a Polish, but Little Jen, with her pale skin and red hair, has to be an Irish. Thrown together as children, they grow up sharing everything. This was all very well when they were little, but harder to manage as they grew older. It became a disaster for the men who were carried along in their lives. The result is a miniature epic of complicity, comedy and obsessions lit up by glints from the giant, glittering mirror-scaled serpent of madness. Only Jennifer's self sacrifice makes some space for the others to live completed lives.

 
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EltopiaAuthor wrote 660 days ago

This is a good story start. Very vivid images of this family taking in the young cousin. Backed.

F, Ellsworth Lockwood
"The Final Cruise"

EltopiaAuthor wrote 660 days ago

This is a good story start. Very vivid images of this family taking in the young cousin. Backed.

F, Ellsworth Lockwood
"The Final Cruise"

david brett wrote 1038 days ago

THIS IS AN OUT OF DATE VERSION THAT I WOULD LIKE TO GET RID OF AND THOUGHT I HAD. WHY IS THE BLOODY THING STILL HANGING AROUND. PLEASE GO TO THE LATER UP-DATED VERSION WITH THE STYLISH COVER!

m clement hall wrote 1111 days ago

ALL THESE ARE MEMORIES OF MY VOYAGE (David Brett)
The author describes this submission, (complete at 42K words) as part of a "vast work in progress." There is little personal information, but it is also described as "chicklit" unusual for a male author, and in the first chapter, as far as I got, it is a description of young girls at school.
It is disjointed, which may very well give it interest, but reading on a computer screen, one is rather lost.
The writing is competent, the style is different.
Backed with good wishes for it.
mch
http://mclementhall.com

david brett wrote 1127 days ago

This and its companion piece BY THE LAKE SHORE (posted April 24th) are two parts of a vast work-in-progress that has been growing up these past 40 years, and has appeared as plays, radio scripts, short stories and longer prose fictions such as these. More are to come. They all originated around a set of short plays performable by four actors and performable in any order- six plays made a complete evening. The idea was to have 6x6 plays, but they gave 37,000 years playing time, which was insane, and utterly exhausting. Nevertheless, some of it was performed quite widely. The original idea is still in there somewhere - the same basic cast of characters, recurrent images and incidents, but multiple endings. A million words, and building.....

david brett wrote 1131 days ago

quote from barnes and noble web site: a zany and original piece of work, very funny and very sad by turns...some vivid characters and strong situations make for a `can't put it down' read...a crisp, no-nonsense style of narrative, sparky, terse and lyrical.'
ALSO
I really enjoyed this novel. It's the story of how four characters and their relationships entwine in different ways throughout their lives..the narrative style is beguiling in its simplicity and the characters are drawn with both emotion and humour. I recommend this novel to anyone looking for an intelligent, warm and witty read.

david brett wrote 1131 days ago

quote garnered from Amazon web-site `The story spreads over three decades and several countries and over the life of science and the life of art. It includes heart-break, film, computing and sex. ALLTHESE ARE MEMORIES OF MY VOYAGE is the culmination of a long series of short stories, plays and radio scripts which have appeared in different guises and under different titles in the last 40 years, Of one section `The Scotsman' wrote that they were `deep and intelligent as well as nifty'. ....Well, not the culmination, but merely a stage on a way of a million words, with another novel being prepared for this site, and a series of screen plays in progress. Like an archipelago it all connects below the surface. DB

david brett wrote 1131 days ago

quote garnered from Amazon web-site `The story spreads over three decades and several countries and over the life of science and the life of art. It includes heart-break, film, computing and sex. ALLTHESE ARE MEMORIES OF MY VOYAGE is the culmination of a long series of short stories, plays and radio scripts which have appeared in different guises and under different titles in the last 40 years, Of one section `The Scotsman' wrote that they were `deep and intelligent as well as nifty'. ....Well, not the culmination, but merely a stage on a way of a million words, with another novel being prepared for this site, and a series of screen plays in progress. Like an archipelago it all connects below the surface.

zed474 wrote 1140 days ago

I'm not really sure what's going on, but you've gotten me hooked all the same. I'll definitely watchlist this one, maybe shelve it as well.

One thing made me laugh though: when the girls are trading supplies in class with Martin, you mention that one gave him a "rubber." I know you're British, but rubber is American slang for a condom. I had a good laugh.

Andrew Foley Jones wrote 1142 days ago

hey, read the first couple of pages and really like the style and the pace, jut wanted to say i ll be reading more as soon as i can. in meantime, best of luck.

snug wrote 1143 days ago
snug wrote 1143 days ago

No sign of the cover yet!

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