Here we are, due to public demand and groaning servers - the second part of the Alliance's grand and verbose adventures !!!

Come all ye Worldbuilders. You are summoned !!!

In recognition to their services to constructive critting, many Worldbuilders have been bestowed with titles:


Dark Lord TRM
Vice Captain and Deputy Cake Officer Sam
Toon Master Mimic
Ice Queen Lisa
Fire Empress Ksalvarria
Spymaster afesmith
Comedy Goon Will / Master of Storms
Cake Lord Andrew B
The Slayer Kenny
Hypnotizer Extraordinaire KA Smith
Corporal Dream Catcher SRWENT
Rose Princess kaysielynn
Earth Countess Rosewall
Sir Transport Dude Bob Pickup
Mistress of the Ages Aiyana
Sergeant Gummie Dragon lindesyp
Lord of the Wyrms JC Rutledge
Thane of Fyrrens Tollam
Aero Imperatrix Juneberry
Minister for Propaganda Mike
Akemitsu Honda, Lord Seraphim of the Valkyries
DragonLady of Raevencliff Castle
Court Jester Winterflood
Lady Midnight Maurauder Kate
Lightening Comtesse Sammy, Keeper of the Keys


Join them!

Posted: 01/09/2011 21:22:38
Last Edit: 05/10/2011 22:35:21 by TRM

Are you going to start another thread just for relevant prickly bits too?

Posted: 01/09/2011 21:26:20

The Alliance of Worldbuilders is a forum for fantasy writers to give each other constructive commentary to help build up and polish those imaginary worlds.

I will give comments to all those that join, although it may take a little time (cursed real world and its demands). All I ask is that all those that join do the same for each other too as I am sure there are much better commentators out there than me. Please post the comments here as well as on the books' pages: we can all learn from somebody else's comments on somebody else's book.

There is a Facebook page for the Alliance: http://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Alliance-of-Worldbuilders/178328745520428

There is also a web page for the Alliance: http://theallianceofworldbuilders.weebly.com/index.html

My own stuff can be found here:

1. Darkened Voices

2. The Ratter’s Tale

Essentially, I just want to figure out which one to finish.

The following list is just my reading list, i.e. everyone I’ve rashly promised a read to. It’s not a syllabus or anything, so take a look at whatever you fancy and do please offer up your crits for general consumption.

I have commented on:

1. Stephen Winterflood - The Last Mask

2. V Crowe - Daimon I now have the paperback of this super book.

3. Jenny Barber - Taurus

4. Laurie A Will - Magistrum's Lair

5. S E Raeburn - Saffire Drake and the Three Keys This one’s an ED’s desk winner by the way.

6. Simon Verde - A Guiding Light

7. Rik Roots - Spin Trap

8. Ray Jones - The Chosen No longer on Authonomy?

9. Sam Dogra - The Binding (Please note the change of book!)

10. Kate Jack - Through the Gloaming (Please note the change of book!)

11. Tom Greenwood - The Light That Never Went Out

12. K A Smith - Blood Sisters

13. Michael Pileggi - Eternium

14. Kay Kauffman - The Lokana Chronicles

15. Ted Cross - The Immortality Game (note the change of book!)

16. Andrew Bartzis - The Gremlin Armageddon Clock No longer on Authonomy?

17. Don Martinez - Dinetah Dragon

18. Debbie Kirts - Dragonslayers (Book 1)

19. Sophie E Tallis - White Mountain, Volume One Of The Darkling Chronicles

20. Richard J Dean Jr - Rebirth – Book 1 of The Phoenix Sorcerer

21. D A Darlington - The Coven

22. Julia Simion - Children of Light

Books sadly withdrawn from Authonomy before I could get to them: Craig Ellis – The Sun and the Saber; DDD Bryenton – Elysium Burning; LL Su – Wonderflies; clara_w – Jade’s Hurricane; B L Milner - The Endless Awakening; Edward Larel - Arawn’s Quest; Mark R Faulkner - The Long Path; Lucy Leid - The Second Prince of Aelwin; Ren Nowaki - Chasing Shadows; Geoff Thorne - Winter of the Wild Hunt; Tricia Drammeh - The First Protector; Monica Torres - Spark (Bk. One of The Iridescence Trilogy); Emily Slusher – Ova; A G R Moore - The Unseen Chronicles of Amelia Black; Ian J Smethurst - E.D.F Chronicles book 2 – E.D.F Resurgent; Kenneth Hill - Into the Dark; Jane Warren – Glimmers / Download; Nicolas Kotar - Raven Son; M M Mancey - The Cripple and the Staff.

Still to read:

1. Elizabeth Smith - Benjamin's Gift

2. Kelsey Mitsdarffer - Faeyte

3. S Smith - I Had To Fall

4. Nick Poole - The Shattered Mirror

5. A F E Smith - Dawn Rising

6. L L Rook - Gwenhyfar

7. A P Shinners - Craven Isle

8. Stephen Johnson - The Lost Cactus

9. Carl E Wilde - Arcane

10. Colin Smith (I think!) - Prince of Wands: Volume One of This Iron Race

11. Sean M Bazaar - The Fallen Book1: Dark Genesis

12. Ryan Holmes - Age of Resurgence

13. Kristofer Ryan Murray - God of the Slaves Bringer of War

14. Conor Souness - The Hydromancer

15. Mike Kavanagh - Born of the Flame

16. Will Macmillan Jones - Snort and Wobbles Note the change of book!

17. J Nathan - The Second Shadow

18. S C Thompson - Viene la Tormenta

19. Bradley Wind - Bulb

20. Mark Hagen - The Wanderer

21. Sandie Newman - The Crown of Crysaldor

22. W S Sosebee - Haktaw Heart

23. J Lawrence - Verado – the Workers

24. Leah Cowden - The Glass Wing

25. Greg Lionwhyte - The Aria of An Archon’s Rise Note the change of book!

26. [a href="http://www.authonomy.com/writing-community/profile/ab2a820e-0e01-47fe-9b7d-8feadb563c4c/mimic/"]Jeremy Rodden[/a] - [a href="http://www.authonomy.com/books/37030/toonopolis-short-anchihiiroo/"]Toonopolis Short: Anchihiiroo[/a] Note the new book!

27. Damien Dax - Song of Sorrows: Melody of Darkness

28. Kira Morgana - The Angel’s Crown (The Secret of Arking Down: Book One)

29. (spot saved for Lisa L Wiedmeier’s next project)

30. (spot saved for G Normerton when his next project is up)

31. Dani Tetley - The Chestnut Unicorn (and the Quest for Planet Tara)

32. K.D. Vassall - The Spinners Wheel

33. Katherine Edwards - Strata

34. Lindsey J Parsons - Vortex

35. Gilbert Martin II - The Ten Scrolls – The Journey of Trust

36. R X Yaxley - Fools of a Broken Land

37. Peter T Allen - Mother Knows Best

38. Joe Pace - History

39. Steven J Pemberton - A Wizard’s Daughter

40. David Kitson - Turing Evolved

41. E R McKeon - Down the Wooded Path Note the change of book!

42. Stuart Meczes - The Awakening This is an ED’s desk winner by the way.

43. Paul T Hughes - Telekinesis

44. Katherine Salavarria - The Antitype

45. J B Wilson - The Brotherhood of the Sword: The Call of the One

46. Zee Rose - Skinbane

47. Richard A Wentworth - Aracelis

48. Duane Simolke - Worried: A Science Fiction Adventure

49. Annastacia Simon - Innocent

50. Amy Craig Beasley - The Women Who Fly Kites

51. Paul Freeman - Tribesman

52. J T Bennett - Four Corners

53. Bob Pickup - Troubled Minds Saga: Grace

54. K M E Knight - These Dark Waters and Dusty Attics

55. Cora Bennet - Beasts and Maidens

56. Rose Wall - Leah – Book 1 of the World’s Apart Series

57. Luciana House - Burning Angel

58. Cassadie Rose Drake - The Takeover

59. Missy Fleming - Happily Never After

60. Pam Balsdon - The King’s Blessing

61. Hazel Butler - Chasing Azrael

62. Ryan White - The Return to Avalon

63. Matthew Mallicoat - Alannian and the Sword of Azallyan

64. Brian Newsome - Cynebold and The Son of The Prophecy

65. J C Rutledge - To Slay a Dragon

66. Jack Cerro - The Nymph’s Heart

67. S S Prince - Ymaed Eras

68. Bek Mars - Dark Star

69 . Akemitsu K Honda - Valkyrja Order

70 . Michel Prince - Chrysalis

71 . Jay Amelia - Cast In The Shadows

72. Mike Brooks - Blood Sports

73. Ana Ailemac - Amulet of I’nea

74. Meaghan Baker - Far from Normal, More than Special

75. Mary Enck - A King in Time

76. Luke Johnson - The Grim Company

77. R J Blain - Betrayer’s Truth

78. J N Khoury - The Heiress of Rhiangar

79. Areeq Chowdhury - Cyber

80. Lexx Greshock - Winged

81. Gretchen Steen - Dragon Spawn

82. Mae Tindell - Ignited – A Golden Twins Novel

83. Sean Dougherty - Tanner Spirit – Dawn of Darkness

84. Brittney Herndon - Heart of Stone – Book One

85. Lela Markham - The Willow Branch

86. Olivia Archer - Mythical Creature Crusader

87. P M Daley - Birth of the Warrior

88. Barnard Cullen - A Sheep in Wolf’s Clothing

89. Kevin Sabovitch - When Dragons Stoke Fires

90. Sarah Macklin - Darkening Horizon

91. Samuel Z Jones - Akurite Empire

92. Jasmine Qureshi - Redemption

93. Peggy Saunders - The Untold Stories of the North Pole

94. JackWracker - In The Company of the Damned

95. Rebecca Tester - The War of Poisoned Wombs

96. Richard Crawford - Traitor Blade – Book One

97. M P Fry - The Gnome warriors of Seraphina – The Scourge

98. D M Sharples - The Mark Bearer’s Path: Emergence

99. Yannis Karatsioris - The Book of the Forsaken (First book of “The Game” series)

100. Marjorie F Baldwin - Conditioned Response

101. Charles G Dyer - Troll Wars

102. Jefferson Tester - Bloodlands

103. Diana L Wicker - Ripples of Power

104. Amanda Ashton - To Fight for a Kingdom

105. Alret Pretorius - Everlasting: Love has no limits

106. Orma Moore - Crystal Child

107. Jessica Jade Burton - The Library of Living

108. Mae Tindell - Ignited – A Golden Twins Novel

109. Justis Call - Snow Bound

110. Lindsay Llewellyn - The Darkness Without

111. David Joyce - Faremyd

112. Sylvie Walters - Perihelion

113. H M Goodchild - After the Ruin

114. Ashley Morrison - Maddy Hatfield and the Magic Locket

115. Miles Allen - The Walkers of Legend

116. Sylvie Walters - Perihelion

117. K T Bowman - Adrianna And The Glass Slipper

118. Alret Pretorius - Everlasting.

119. Sammy H K Smith - Chaeli:Scion of Blood

120. David J Muir - Burn, Forest City, Burn

Come on, join in!


Posted: 01/09/2011 21:26:31
Last Edit: 05/10/2011 22:33:13 by TRM

Are you going to start another thread just for relevant prickly bits too?

Let's get this thread to the top of the list as well. The quest is on.

Posted: 01/09/2011 21:29:17

Here we are, due to public demand and groaning servers - the second part of the Alliance's grand and verbose adventures !!!

Come all ye Worldbuilders. You are summoned !!!

Howdy Dark LORD, I guess we broke the other one!!!! Ha HA HA

I'll have to amend the website too. Woohoo!

Posted: 01/09/2011 21:36:41

It wasn't broke.

We are simply expanding our empire.

With official permission no less.

It sound sooooo much better to say we broke it, but we do have permission to create another Mons...scratch that--another fine thread. Let the race begin.