Just uploaded the first ten chapters of my new book "Lost Time". I'd really appreciate any feedback I could get on grammar, style and content.
Have you ever went on a drive where you couldn't account for 20-30 minutes? Ever wonder what happened during that time? Bryan Fleming wonders the same thing. During his most recent lost time escapade he can't account for over 90 minutes of his time during a trip up north to collect his inheritance. To make matters worse, he discovers a mysterious gym bag in the back of his truck that he has never seen before. The contents of the bag and what he soon hears on the news, leave him wishing he'd never stepped foot in the state of New York or looked into the bag in the first place.

Posted: 08/02/2012 01:37:18

Hi DW,
A belated welcome to Authonomy! What a great starting point for a book. Why didn't I think of that?! It is worrying when we go into automatic and lose time like that, something like a hypnotic state. Sounds like a gripping story so I've added it to my watch list to take a look later.

Best wishes,
Nick
'Where She Lies'

Posted: 08/02/2012 12:12:00