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I like pie. And sometimes...delicious cake.

It'd be nice that if I give you an in-depth review, you could return the favor. Like beyond the first chapter. Please. I'm not looking for praise or even making it to the top five. (Not that I'd reject any of that mind you.) I'm looking for con-crit and suggestions so I can tighten up my writing.

-S.

favourite books

The Story of Your Life and Others - Ted Chiang
Dead Girls, Dead Boys, Dead Things - Richard Calder
This Immortal - Roger Zelazny
Magic Bites (Kate Daniels series) - Ilona Andrews
American Gods - Neil Gaiman
Between Silk and Cyanide - Leo Marks
Holidays in Hell - P.J. O'Rourke

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The Devouring Mother

Swallow Wang

Magic. Mayhem. Mob-bosses. Mandarin. Claire Gile's past is the last thing she needs to catch up on - or is that vice-versa...?


Welcome to Ilium; where behind the strip malls and suburban sprawl, the inhuman things that stalk the night eke out a tranquil life of comparative normality.

Enter Claire Giles; Eurasian assistant to the city's occult-detective extraordinaire and new to the esoteric underbelly of alchemical mob-bosses, werewolf law enforcement and alimony-stained sorcerers. She's learning that if she squints right, she can just about make out what lurks beneath their shiny glamours and subtle magics. We mentioned 'magic,' right? That's good; because Ilium's a tinderbox, and somebody just lit the match.

Today someone killed one of the city's crime bosses. Somebody dangerous. Somebody bad. And that somebody wants to know Claire intimately. It's a bad time to be in Ilium...

 

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I wrote 1136 days ago

Wonderfully written. It wasn't my cup of tea, but I read the whole thing wishing I had a print version to read to my younger siblings. Doing the voices and being grotesque would be fun. I can't give much con-crit on a children's book. I liked it and I'm pretty sure my younger brothers would love... view book

I wrote 1142 days ago

Thank you! I'm up in the air about the disparate nature of the first three chapters. The "first chapter" is technically a prologue, but the "2nd chapter" is where the story begins. I might move the prologue, but the trouble with that is it is that is chronologically before everything else. -_... view book

I wrote 1142 days ago

Lol. The prologue actually was an afterthought, but not a quick one. My boyfriend and I have been sending it back and forth editing it in every way but mechanics. So my excuse is half the typos are his. =P view book

I wrote 1142 days ago

Thank you. I'm terrible at editing things on a computer screen: typos, etc just get missed. I'm going to print everything out and re-edit. It's just getting to that point... view book

I wrote 1142 days ago

A few people are seeing this, and I think I need to edit or perhaps move the Prologue (chapter one on authonomy) to a different part of the book. Maybe. I will work on this. I'm hoping the other chapters flow OK. view book

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