Rescuing Liberty I backed your novel because of the unusual premise and the promise I saw. I offer suggestions based upon the things that worked for me on my road to publication but with the caveat I am but one person and you must take what you want and toss what you will from my thoughts! But, t... view book

Bravo's Veil Michael, thank you for the invite to read Bravo's Veil. I offer critical suggesions with the caveat I am not only one person with one opinion for you to take or toss but hopefully you will find some value in my comments. Ch. 1 - The writing here was very smooth and flowing, althou... view book

Test Pilot's Daughter - Revenge As per your request, I've taken a look through the first few chapters. I offer my thoughts and comments with the caveat that I am just one of many people on Authonomy, and my opinion is of no greater merit than anyone else's, and you must take what you wish and tos... view book

The Huguenot's Destiny Not being a student of straight historical fiction (my taste runs to romantic historical fiction), I am not sure if my suggestions will be of benefit but perhaps you will find some useful. Many of the suggestions I have received for my own work have application across almos... view book

Hey, Mat, I never said I wouldn't take a look, just it is not my normal read! For all it's worth, I've some thoughts for Wrong Place, Wrong Time. Pitch - Perhaps because of my normal comfort zone, this didn't quite work for me. Grand, sweeping statements really did not give me insight into what ... view book