Very good. Alexander is a likable character, and you're writing in the sort of genre that publishers know will make money. Good luck with this. view book

Good stuff. I've read your pitch and your first three chapters, and it's impressive, funny and I like the characters. I haven't read enough to form a real opinion yet, but I'll read more soon. view book

I like your pitch, and I've read the first two chapters. It's not something I'd read personally, but it's well written and your characters are well-developed. I read a couple of the comments below. I think either 'sitting' or 'sat' works... it reads fine as it is to me. I'll read more when I can. view book

This is excellent. 'Both Chapter 5s'. I hereby declare that all books should have two chapter 5s! Consider yourself backed. If this doesn't get published, the rest of us have no hope... view book

I've read the first two chapters. It's excellent... the idea reminds me a little of 'Beetlejuice'. Your style drew me in immediately. I find the thought of the afterlife as a place of offices both hilarious and depressing. I haven't read enough to judge it properly, but I certainly enjoyed what I've... view book