Hello Kostas - with apologies for the delay in arrival. Good stuff here. Elegant, balanced prose and dialogue that flows nicely. There's a nice 'feel' to your location too, which you communicate well. Here are some other random thoughts: - ""nearly four" [-]sister": delete rogue hyphen; - "My fi... view book

Ding-dong, JD, ding-dong. This was some very sexy writing. Your pitch sets the reader up for an intriguing commentary and handling of a complex modern-day relationship, and as a male reader you pitched the strip club scene just right. Deftly done, sir. Here are my other random thoughts: - in your... view book

Hello, Todd - with apologies for the late arrival. Lovely stuff here. Great pitch (but what is 'sics' as a verb? My OED lets me down...), ad an innovative premise that you seem to handle well in this opening. You have an engaging voice, sardonic and *knowing*. I feel comfortable in your hands. Good ... view book

Hello, Norman - completely agree with what the delectable AnnabelleP says: this is accessible stuff, written in a light manner and with deft touches of subtle humour woven in. A fascinating subject, indeed, and well-crafted. Only thing I'd say is: spell Lewis Carroll's bloody name correctly (two 'l'... view book

Hello, sir - as promised, and with apologies for the delay. As requested, started off late in, chpt 10, I believe. You can write, the prose is solid, and the characters speak as if they mean it. Reminded me a bit of a 'Da Vinci Code' type thing (don't know why, I've never read it), as these characte... view book