pure passion in the beginning and then it began to sound like a creeps weekly article in the "Bloody Times." so many questions. i cant tell whether ur writin about the klller or if you are the killer telling his story. view book

ch. 2 passionless, i dont hear tears, i dont c the words vibrate in accordance 2 ur heart a bit. ur words r bromidic, my friend, i want to feel how you feel... view book

dont tell me that i should look past the first chapter and to evade the desire to pluck it away from me before i get to the second, i think not, insecure writing. i would hope that this second novel would show some command of the art dear friend. Where does it take place, where are the beautiful wo... view book

gurffrind you can tell a story, but dear dahling im having trouble with ur voice. Its sounds like a kiwi writer interpreting a kiwi story to an american audience. secure the damn thing, with love my dear. view book

i like the way you write. you have wonderful rhythm. It pissed me off when you called ruths plait a miracle, it was overkill, your sentences mystifying enough. best of luck my writing friend!! view book