With all the style of the best literary novelists, you evoke the both world of present loss and a world that is ripped straight out of the finest of Italian art films - Cinema Paradiso or Il Postino. The prose begs to be read and tasted as poetry: "She was curled up inside his smell"; "ruffled up ... view book

The atmosphere of Sigma is a fascinating juxtaposition of the primeval and the digital. The virtual world is where all the excitement and fate is to be found; the physical world by contrast seems a kind of shanty town of coarse imprecations and humdrum transitions. In other words, it’s a fabulous c... view book

This needs a good editorial eye cast over it and then it will be a tremendously tragic but heartwarming story of the individual spirit overcoming appalling repressions. You've brought alive your plight with a enlivening attention to detail. The descriptions of your home make it all the more appallin... view book

This is superbly written and promises to be a cracking story. I read the first two chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them. Great imagination at work. view book

Can I audition for Melissa if you ever put this on in London? This is fab. I love how it travels – how it reaches out from interiors into the wide world and then returns time and time again. Oooh, I think I’m a bit jealous of this. Beautiful writing with lots of archaeology in it and a resonating vo... view book