Awesome story-telling with a good voice. Your ability to depict human interaction and emotions is good. The story is good. Everything is good about this. The only thing I thought was a little cliche was the fact that the A-Minds had three laws they could not break. I am curious if you came to t... view book

Wonderful description, good flow, excellent storytelling. Writing at its finest. This was a treat to read. view book

Interesting twist. The writing is solid. First person narrative is believable. The beginning starts with action and wants to keep you reading more to find out what happens. Nice opening. Wish you the best. view book

I skipped forward in this work to chapter 13 and kept reading through to chapter 18. In my opinion this was one of the best page turners I've read on this site. The word crafting mastered beautifully, although glints of another form of thinking come out in it, as if English was not the first langu... view book

Good first short story, hooks you right away and makes you want to learn who the woman is who is stalking the protaginist. Good twist at the end when you realize the woman is mentally ill at best, perhaps insane, and the "other" woman she sees is really herself. She has detached herself from that ... view book