Andre Chatvick

Andre Chatvick

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I am a public sector policy analyst based in Wellington, the capital of New Zealand. I am interested in establishing myself as a fiction writer.

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The Hunt for the Blue Orchid T....

Toby Milton

In a city in chaos, two men hunt for a mysterious thief against a background of incipient civil war.


On the world of Hirconia, the principality of Tyria is riven by rivalry between three factions. Civil war is a mere spark away, and the theft of a bright blue orchid from one faction by another provides that spark. The theft initiates not just factional strife, but a determined hunt for Fascio's mystery thieves, whose depredations fuel the rivalry. A drunken ex-Secret Policeman and a Civil Guard interrogator race against a team of ex-Luhni's while the the city around them goes up in a blaze of civil war. What Arno Lupara, the former Secret Policeman doesn't know is that he is linked to the most mysterious of the thieves, the one nicknamed The Shade because, once, long ago, Lupara did something noble, and now it has come back to haunt him.

 

Galaxy Spanner

Toby Milton

In the 24th century, Earth dispatches a ship built inside an asteroid to discover the fate of human colonies established two centuries earlier.


In the 22nd century, in a time of climatic and economic chaos, Earth's mega-corporations funded asteroid colony ships and sent them to distant solar systems to establish new colonies. In the 24th century, after a century and more of global war and recovery, a call for help is heard from one of them, the first news Earth has had since the colony ships left. Earthgov decides to find out what has happened to some of the colonies. The last remaining asteroid ship is fitted out, and sent on a thousand year mission. No one knows what is out there, and the only thing the commander and crew can be certain of is that space is vast, dangerous, and more mysterious than can be imagined.

 

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Andrew Hughes wrote 1 hour ago

Hi Toby, “Informers and blackmailers, phrenologists and dissection....

Casimir Greenfield wrote 3 days ago

Hi Andre - just extending the hand of friendship. I'm still fairly....

Paul Beattie wrote 45 days ago

Rachel, the Harper Collins site administrator, recently chose my book....

A G Chaudhuri wrote 100 days ago

Dear Toby, I welcome you to explore my debut novel, SHINING DAWN. A....

AuroraNemesis wrote 108 days ago

I would be very grateful if you could find the time to check my book ....

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I wrote 316 days ago

You have a number of technical writing issues you need to address so as to support your story telling. Currently they detract from what you are trying to say, and make your work difficult to read. They are: - punctuation is there to support the flow, not impede it. You have punctuation breaks ... view book

I wrote 570 days ago

I am beginning to wonder about the question marks too. I spent quite a bit of time moving them to the end of sentences because they didn't look right at the end of speeches. Now I'll probably have to move them back. The work hasn't been subject to intensive editing, and it is fairly raw as a re... view book

I wrote 572 days ago

Hi there The 'wow' reference is deliberate. There are a lot of other subtle and no-so-subtle jokes woven into the text as well. I want to know what happens on the colony planet too. I haven't figured it out yet. Regards view book

I wrote 586 days ago

Hi Neville My second point is that conversations between people are must reflect the speakers. On that basis I think the conversations need a rework. Children don't speak like adults, and adults don't sound like each other, but are the sum of their separate lives. I therefore suggest you take... view book

I wrote 586 days ago

Hi Neville I have looked through the first 12 chapters of this story. I have a few comments. The first relates to credibility. You're developing a fantasy tale for children, but even that audience likes an effective grounding for the story. I would therefore recommend that you provide a ti... view book

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