Interesting and original. While the sentences are sometimes a little awkward and confusing, generally it's really good - both technically and as an entertaining story. view book

While I like this very much, I did notice that there are a lot of elements from Harry Potter in here, from the 'kulons' (which remind me a lot of knuts), to the 19th century vibe of this world... even things like using the peacock feather quill instead of a pen. I don't think you've gone over the li... view book