Good organization. By the way thanks for the backing. view book

I love the descriptions in your first chapter. They immediately transport me into your book. view book

So far I like the first chapter. Your descriptions are good. The only objection that I have is where you said the boys were at least twenty-feet away, or close to it, and you heard them whisper, "She's a witch." It sounds almost too far away to have heard them whisper. I backed it. view book

This sounds like someplace where I would want to live! I like your vivid setting; I can see it in my mind. My only critizm so far would be at the begining, "The birds were chirping merrily." I have read that phrase or discription in other books; it is very generic. view book

I would like to back your book, but my shelf is full. Since I am new here, I don't know if removing one book to replace it with another will lower that books ranking. How does it work? view book