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Seven Seconds is now complete, but it's not all posted on here, so you won't get to find out how it ends... ;)

The first and earlier chapters have been critiqued a fair bit already, so feel free to jump in to later chapters, where new characters are introduced and the narrative starts to pick up etc.

Later chapters have a female character, sex scenes and romantic entanglements, all of which could do with constructive criticism to let me know if they are broken at all.

My short story, Unfamiliar Country, is available at smashwords.com and is available on amazon on kindle.

If you send me unsolicited 'please read/back my book' messages I will give you an automatic 1 star rating.

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Unfamiliar Country

T S Sharp

A contract killer's work is complicated by an unwelcome visitation from his most recent job.


Boyd's task was simple. Kill the man and bury the body. That was the easy part. Conversations with the dead man's ghost drive him to extreme measures deep in the Welsh countryside.

**The full story is not published here - the complete work is available via kindle ebooks at amazon.
There's placeholder text in latin at the end of the story, simply to make the 10k word count up - please ignore**

 

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I wrote 366 days ago

Hey Tonia, This is the best book I've read here. I'm reading and enjoying this at the moment. I notice the handsome guy is called Tom. Good name ;) I'll be back when I've read some more... xx view book

I wrote 764 days ago

Hey Ken, I read the first 5 chapters and I loved this. Really easy to read (I find myself getting bored by a lot of what I read here, to be honest!) and has a good mix of sex and style to maintain a good balance. The characterisation is good, which is often difficult from a first person perspecti... view book

I wrote 772 days ago

Marija, This is the first play I've read on authonomy, and it's a good one. I think the last time I read a play script was while I was at school studying Theatre Studies. Your dialogue is great and you maintain it through out from what I have read on here. Good work, Tom. view book

I wrote 777 days ago

Hi David, I really like the feel of your work, it flows really well and sucks the reader in. I'm a football fan, and novels about sport are often unimaginatively written, but in this instance. Good work and good luck. Tom - Seven Seconds. view book

I wrote 805 days ago

Hi Barry, Like you suggested in your profile, I'll comment on chapter 2. With Authonomy, I find it useful to grab random chapters of people's work and read it through to get a feeling of the work, as let's face it, no one is going to sit down and read all 100k+ words of a novel from a computer sc... view book

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