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While in an M. A. writing program at the University of Minnesota, I began to write children’s novels. Before that, I worked for a publisher as an editorial assistant and as a suburban newspaper reporter. Now my poetry and short stories are published in many journals, Eclectica, Frigg, Literary Bird Journal, Review Americana, Shadowtrain,The South Dakota Review, and Word Riot to name a few.

The Swan Bonnet somehow formed after reading about Alaskan history and coming across the drastic decreases in the swan migration numbers before they were declared endangered. That led to research about swans which I enjoyed doing since I had written a children's novel about loons.

The comments and suggestions have been much appreciated! And while Authonomite books have opened up my reading beyond fave genres and authors. About time!


The Swan Bonnet is revised!
The comments and suggestions have inspired me to work on the entire manuscript - it's 40,000 words or 44 chapters and completed. Thank you!

I return reads and like the opportunity to swap. From childhood, I was a browser of the New Arrivals rack at the nearest library.

favourite books

The Summer Before the Dark by Doris Lessing, Feast of July by H. E. Bates, Ship of Fools by Katherine Anne Porter, Tender is the Night by F. Scott Fitzgerald, Cold Comfort Farm by Stella Gibbons, Aaron's Rod by D. H. Lawrence, L'Assommoir by Emile Zola, Far from the Madding Crowd by Thomas Hardy, The Princess and the Goblin by George MacDonald, Finn Family Moomintroll by Tove Jansson, Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain, Black Beauty by Anna Sewell ...

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The Swan Bonnet

Katherine L. Holmes

Swans are endangered in 1920s Alaska yet Dawn plans to see the fall migration. In their seaport town, her mother’s hat can decoy poachers.


Unbeknown to the adolescent Dawn, her grandfather has shot an old swan out of mercy – or for money. In the coastal Alaskan harbor town where she lives, her father buys the swan pelt, preventing her Uncle Alex, a fur trader, from selling it for export. Dawn’s father surprises her part-Aleut mother with a hat she helped to make from the pelt and also with an idea to catch possible poachers. Shooting swans has become illegal but Alaska is a territory and Prohibition has occupied the Sheriff. Dawn becomes involved with the suspicious effects of the swan bonnet besides its haunting effect on her mother.

Since Dawn’s grandparents see the swans first when they land, Dawn agrees to secretly watch the migration with the Deputy Sheriff’s son. On the day of the migration though, she encounters a girl from a ship and, finding out about a hunting party, rides to the inlet bay with her mother. A few townspeople are roving the shore too but who is the vigilante and who is the poacher?



 

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mkildor wrote 18 hours ago

Please let me know what happens with your book! Kind regards, ....

lionel25 wrote 20 hours ago

Thanks Ms Holmes. Congrats to you too. Yes, it's been quite a ride....

Suzie Q wrote 20 hours ago

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Peter G wrote 23 hours ago

Dear Katherine, Congratulations with getting to the ED! Peter

mkildor wrote 1 day ago

Congratulations on your selection for review! Kind regards, mkild....

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I wrote 21 hours ago

Hi Arnold, This is a narrator voice that has such continuity with the action that it simply reels along. The deja vu feeling really came through; Timothy's mood reigns throughout the first scenes. Which is what makes him downcast and concerns. Very smooth writing and strong rendering of the Tanya... view book

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Hi John, The sensory detail enhances character and place - the mother's caked cream, the father like a tree and then Paul blending into the bark. It's as if he's a person who is difficult to know and that makes him more alluring. His personal situation traded with the people in the house is ano... view book

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Hi Derryl, This is so involving, the interior of JD as he’s being released and the depiction of the guards, his view of the world at the first encounters. He’s so sure of his innocence and the law so sure of his guilt. Then when he introduces himself and his experiences with the opposite sex, he... view book

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Hi Warren, Looking towards the future where it would seem that the DNA branches of the Anglo-Indians could be discovered was stimulating. I know little about that group of people and the family descriptions along with their placement in India absorbed me. The personal tone alternating with the inf... view book

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Hi Alan, The synopsis page drew me on. Scenes with Robert are very amusing and I can see how the profiles of the family really enhance the boys' stories. Their talk about "normal" families is also interesting and to the age. The texture with the narrator's observations about the age added for me a... view book

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