Hi Esme, I wasn't sure I was enjoying the story, but I kept reading, so it was compelling enough to keep my interest. I have a couple of things for you: 1) when the bear attacks Pippiko, the bow and arrows drop to the "floor." This really bothers me - forest floor - yes, ground - yes, floor - ... view book

Carrie, Fascinating story. I'm 11 chapters in and still have no idea where this is headed and I really want to find out. Good job. Give this a good proofread or better yet, give it to someone else to proofread, because you are probably too close to notice the small errors. Rearrange some wording... view book

Wow! Fast paced, enjoyable story. Nice. view book

Intriguing first sentence and the story was great from there on. Let me know when the audio book is ready, because my father would love this book, but can't see well anymore. You have one major time line flaw. When you introduced Ramone, he was the older brother, but in present day, he's younger.... view book

I thought the prologue was going to make me stop reading. I really don't like long prologues, especially when they are all explanation. I finally made it through and I'm glad I did. The story was really good. I only wish there were a little more posted. I actually love this genre and I think you hav... view book