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Brian Bandell

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I'm an author and an award-winning professional journalist from Florida. Mute has been selected for publication by Silver Leaf Books.

I am willing to swap reads and provide honest feedback. While I'll seriously look at other novels, I can't promise that I'll back everything that I read. I will always try to offer pointers.

Samples of my books are offered here.

"Mute" is about a police officer who becomes the foster parent of the only witness to a string of bizarre murders around a lagoon. Seeing her parents beheaded has robbed the girl of her speech, but the officer's superior demands that she speak up before the mysterious creatures in the lagoon overwhelm the police force. I posted part of the novel here.

"The Centauri Generation" is about the first generation of kids born on a space ship leaving our solar system. It is posted on this site.



favourite books

Catch 22. Venus (Ben Bova). Ender's Game. Neverwhere. Pet Sematary. Dune.

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Mute

Brian Bandell

A detective’s love for an orphaned girl witness has her turning a blind eye to evidence that could stop a wave of unnatural murders.


Mute follows detective Monique “Moni” Williams, who is recovering from child abuse and feels held back by racial stereotyping on the force. If there’s any hope of stopping the murders along Florida’s Indian River Lagoon, she must coax out Mariella’s account of the gruesome beheadings of her parents. The traumatic attack has rendered the eight-year-old mute. Moni vows to protect her from both the killer and her supervising detective as he demands answers in the case.

The pressure on Moni intensifies when tumor-stricken animals, from gators to deceptively deadly manatees, attack people in the lagoon. Then they pursue Mariella. The girl’s drawings foreshadow several murders, which carve up witnesses and people who pestered the girl. Moni refuses to acknowledge the pattern, even as the toxic changes in the lagoon threaten life along the Space Coast. Can Moni protect the girl? Or is the child the last one who needs saving?

Mute is intended for fans of reality-bending thrillers, such as Dean Koontz novels, with a touch of The X Files and Fringe.

Set for publication with Silver Leaf Books. I posted about two-fifths of it here.

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The Centauri Generation

Brian Bandell

Surviving the teenage years is hard enough without having to do it on a space ship.


As the first member of the Centauri Generation - the children born on a 60-year journey to the nearest solar system - Shelly Evers has lots to learn. But what's the fun in that? Her passions aren't that much different from those of girls on earth, except she'll never hit the malls or beaches of the blue planet unless she can convince the crew to turn the space ship around. With the original explorers slowly dying off, she'll get her chance, but it won't do much good if her generation can't run a space ship.

The elders who started this mission won't go out quietly. They'll make sure Shelly and her generation finds a habitable star, even if they have to break some hearts, and a few skulls.

The novel is completed at about 123,000 words. I posted half of it here.

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Brian - good news about your signing! I've been waiting almost one y....

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This story is coming together nicely. The prologue works well as it tells the reader that something dramatic is about to occur and many lives are in danger. The speeches by Elizabeth and Shannon with the hecklers set up the moral issues and the threats to come. What might add a nice personal touch i... view book

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The story is quite compelling. There's a lot of tension and mystery that kept me reading. You did a good job of withholding enough information to make me curious, such as waiting to find out what Leila's background is. Your descriptions of people and setting are terrific. You certainly paint the... view book

I wrote 18 days ago

This has captured my attention. Fine writing and a great premise with Simon's isolation. His upbringing is a great subject for psychology and sociology. What would it be like to learn talking and reading from a computer? Sex education from a computer does not go well, I see. I would like to see m... view book

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The plot is effective in that it gets the reader emotionally involved in the story and it lays out a big challenge for Georgie. Your description of the culture of the era is good, although some physical descriptions of things and clothes of this time period would help bring it further to life. Be... view book

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I like how you set your priest at odds with the villagers and give her the challenges of saving the reluctant flock. She's a likeable character and your dialog is strong. A few more physical descriptions of character and setting would be helpful to add flavor to the scenes. This is good work. I'l... view book

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