Well, that was interesting. His name would probably have been Yrjö, or an archaic form, Yrjänä, but neither of these would sound like anything you'd have picked up. Good luck, -h. view book

Sorry to have to tell you this, but you may want to tell your "agent" that spamming actually decreases your book's chances of being read. view book

This is one of those books where the reader must work to keep apace of the events and especially the dialogue. As such, it ranks among the finest I've seen on the site. If there's anything I would change, it'd be to add a few slower moments inside the narrative so as to allow the reader a brief resp... view book

hee hee... popcorn fiction, I like it, I like it... view book

I like your voice, or rather, voices. Subtle nuances in prose, but always a good steady flow. Some explanatory text remains which can easily be edited out, but nothing major to fix. Easy to back. view book