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Hi,

I wish to thank all the 2503 people who took the trouble to read and back IMPEDING JUSTICE, and the 1091 people who bothered to write a comment, good or bad without your generosity Lorne and I would never have obtained our GOLD STAR.

To the 573 people who have IMPEDING JUSTICE on their w/l here's a *big fat raspberry* for you!!! Only joking, enjoy the read, when you finally get around to it.

I'd also like to say a very special thank you to CARL ASHMORE who has become a special friend who has supported me and urged me to continue, despite almost throwing in the towel, EVERY single day.

Carl is a special person with a very special book TIME HUNTERS currently number one on the Ed's desk, please support it.

The other friends who have shown me so much support are listed in the acknowledgements in chapter one of my book. Although I would also like to show my gratitude to MARY WOOD who has made all this worthwhile.

And finally to finish alongside two of the best books on the site, MUCKERS and BRAINRUSH has to be the greatest honour of all.
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MARY WOOD's excellent novel AN UNBREAKABLE BOND.

SCORSELO'S experimental lit fiction novel THE COMMUNICATOR.

BARRY WENLOCK'S. excellent novel LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS.

JD REVENE'S erotica novel APPETITES.

BOCRI'S excellent novel THE TUZLA RUN.
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It's now time to get back to some writing and I am currently halfway through the sequel to Impeding Justice.

If I've offered to help anyone please remind me and I look forward to working with you.

Good luck to each and every one of you whether you are chasing that elusive GOLD STAR or not.

Melxxxx

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Impeding Justice

Mel Comley

The Unicorn returns with clear intent ... to make life unbearable for DI Simpkins!


Over the past eight years their game of cat and mouse has been tame compared to the one they're about to embark on. This time, the Unicorn, an underworld criminal, intends on destroying his nemesis, D I Lorne Simpkins. And those surrounding her.

In the process, Lorne puts her career and marriage to the ultimate test.

After being led into a trap in which her partner is killed, Lorne suspects she has a mole on her team, this would account for the Unicorn's ability to stay one step ahead of them for so long.

Revenge fuels the investigation. As she draws ever closer, the Unicorn decides to teach her a lesson by kidnapping Charlie, her teenage daughter.

Devastated by her daughter's plight and with her marriage in tatters, Lorne turns to Pathologist Jacques Arnaud for comfort.

Her state of mind is called into question and the Chief Inspector has no option but to remove her from the case.

Lorne sets out to rescue her daughter and bring the Unicorn to justice ...

 

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scorselo wrote 1 hour ago

I read some of bonalibro's badly titled Highway and though it was bul....

scorselo wrote 1 hour ago

Fine extremely busy

DavidP wrote 20 hours ago

Hi Mel, My most sincere congratulations for earning the gold star.....

scorselo wrote 1 day ago

Interesting, we'll talk

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I wrote 3 days ago

Superb writing from a man that can!! Melxx view book

I wrote 3 days ago

Wonderful writing and what a great premise. Definitely intend reading more of this. Haha, you must be the only person on the site to have cherry picked a Suzi Q comment!! Very best of luck. MElxx view book

I wrote 3 days ago

Thanks Ron, for taking the trouble to read Impeding Justice a second time, I'm thrilled you thought it had improved. As to the points you have raised about the Unicorn escaping, Lorne learns he has escaped in the 2nd to last para of chapter one. And to the other point about her being withdrawn fr... view book

I wrote 5 days ago

Nicely written, a lot of background to begin with that I think could be fed into the story later on. Just my opinion though. Good luck Melxx view book

I wrote 7 days ago

Very atmospheric beginning. Well done and good luck on the site. Melxx view book

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