Hi Tim, Reading the opening chapter brought back memories of travelling on the tube myself. You have a very good way with dialogue and it makes the story seem real and alive. I like fantasy which is set and based around modern life and this is well-written and interesting. This goes on my bookshe... view book

Your opening chapter certainly carries an impact. At first I found it difficult with the first person narrative but a few paragraphs in I could see why you did this. I enjoyed this and it makes me want to carry on reading and find out more. Wayne (Prester John) view book

Hi Jame, As my own novel (Prester John) involves a lot of travel in Thailand and Laos this caught my eye and I think you have the makings of a good work here. the dialogue in the first chapter is very convincing and creates a good feeling of Tokyo's seedier side. You are on my bookshelf as I thin... view book

Hi William, Having taken the name Saladin for my own name following a muslim ceremony in Indonesia I am always keen to see anything involving my name-sake ha, ha. This has the makings of an intelligent thriller and I like how the first chapters develop, although like Rob says be careful with word... view book

Hi Jason, The opening of this is very entertaining and I like the idea of a cowardly or incompetent wizard. I used to be into role-playing myself as a teenager and know exactly where you are coming from. I have added you to my bookshelf and will be back to continue reading. Wayne view book