BHCG Hello Bradley, I've just read your first chapter, and I have a few comments that might help (or not). Just so you know, I like sci-fi, but wouldn't say I'm a proper fan... more of a visitor to the genre really, when chick-lit becomes too fluffy. I like the way you write, but I think som... view book

Dear Clair, I chose Fat Bottomed Girls to read after seeing it mentioned on a thread in the forum - I'm a huge Queen fan and the title made me smile. I hope you don't mind, but I made a few notes as I read... Like title Like opening para, then straight to modern day. I wondered though, if ... view book

BHCG Hello! I liked your writing, and I enjoyed reading Ch 1. I like particularly the phrasing you use, and the way you play with ideas (like viewing through the champagne). However, I very nearly didn't read at all. I chose your book because the title appealed to me, but then my brain wouldn... view book

Thank you Al! I appreciate your time and comments. I absolutely know you're right - there are too many characters - but I can't figure out how to fix it. Every one of the characters are involved in plot points, so I can't hoof them off, but you're right, too many, too quick. To be honest, it's... view book

Oh dear. I must be tremendously thick. Reading your work made me feel a little bit like being a waitress at a Tracy Emin first night, surrounded by cognescenti. I just didn't get it. I know other people get it, and I really, really want to get it, but I just don't. As I read I could feel my face mor... view book