The way you've written this so far is very interesting. The character development works well, and his reaction to seeing himself on screen, apparently three days beforehand, is described perfectly. I also noticed you have a sort of style similar to Douglas Adams. The little comedy twists you throw i... view book

This was interesting. I'm not sure I understand what's going on in the first portion where they refer to Percy as a Hobbit, but maybe that's because I haven't read enough, or I've missed a previous book. Regardless, it's well written. One quick suggestion: Chapter 2, you use "Huge" twice and fairly... view book

Very strange and sort of odd twist in this tale. Entertaining none-the-less. Backed. view book

Definitely a book I will be reading very soon, The short pitch was quite a good hook. Choices, and tough ones at that. Backing this book. view book

This is turning out to be an interesting read so far, it reminds me a bit of stonehenge. Backing this book. Jordan K. Bloodlines, A New Beginning view book