Read first three chapters so far. Great premise, beautifully executed. Engaging and economical set up, settings resonant and dialogue flowing, prose style articulate and effective. . Had I bought this, I’d be looking for more form the same author... view book

High risk opening chapter expertly carried off. The single sentence/paragraph structure on C2 establishes rhythm and pace, which really accelerates in c3 from the dialogue and great setup. She was going to something more arousing...A rollercoaster from there. Original and highly engaging. view book

Engaging and well written, strong, well paced narrative. Not sure about the comments be,ow re punctuation, think it adds staccato notes and works well in context. Underlying themes resonant from thousands of miles away. Enjoying it,... view book

Simply excellent, deft, amusing and well constructed. I hope this finds its rightful place on the shelves at Heffers. Love it. view book

Like the opening, puts you right in the action, good use of the senses (not sure about the shriver ran down his spine - would he really feel that given he’s on the surf?), fade to black effective end to c1 and picked up nicely at start to c2 (emerging from black in dream). C2 I think credible and e... view book