Oh yes, Ignatius would recognize this cruel world that has turned its back on Jona's genius. And we know he's a genius because the dunces are all in a confederacy against him. But what can one expect from people without theology or geometry? Brilliant. Simply brilliant. Julie Farkas Morning ... view book

"There is no great writing, only great re-writing." I can't believe the difference your work on this book has made. There is a more substantive feel. I love the way little tidbits of his past, and his plans for the future and dropped into strings of his hilarious running of the mouth. And his crazy... view book

There might be a good story in here, but it is a small bobbing buoy in an ocean of back story and digression. Julie Farkas Morning Call view book

I really enjoyed reading this. I got inside the mc's head, but it didn't feel claustrophobic. You've got an easy writing style, with enough beautifully written lines (black ball of loneliness and others) that keep it a notch above this genre. I only read a couple of chapters and didn't see much of t... view book

Your beautiful, smooth writing drew me right into the story. Your characters are sympathetic and your plot and writing will let them shine. You've got a publishable work here, and I wish you much luck. Julie Farkas Morning Call view book