Your pitch is perfect. I knew I was about to read something intelligent just by reading the summary. Now, I like a book that makes me think. Yours managed to make me pause several times while reading to reflect. I did find some of the dialogues to be stilted. What I mean by this is that your prot... view book

I'm not into fantasy, but I know this is one my cousin would adore. She loves stories like this. Anyway, your writing was a joy to read, your characters were colourful and engaging. Shelved with pleasure, June view book

Your pitch needs a bit of reworking. I was actually thinking NOT to read your story because of it. When you wrote that it was the boss's wife that planned to stop katy from getting into the club, I thought this was going to be a romance between two women. Why'd I think this? Because your story is ca... view book

Wow, this is a very colorful manuscript! haha. Anyway, this isn't the sort of book I usually read, but I liked it anyway. You've created very interesting characters. I especially like Matthew. I was able to immerse myself so quickly into the story because your writing is easy to follow. Shelved w... view book

I swear I wrote a comment for this book a few days ago. But I must have accidentally closed the window before submitting it. Or something. Anyway, I do remember that I wrote something under the lines of: This is a brilliant, intelligent piece of work! The first paragraph was an immediate hook for... view book