Hello, Great job weaving in backstory/all the equestrian info without slowing the story down. Good luck with this! Backed. Rhiannon Worthy of Grace view book

I just read the first chapter, but I was immediately taken with the distinctive voice of your main character. Thumbs up for the tightly written action, too. Backed. Rhiannon Worthy of Grace view book

Hello, While I enjoyed the opening, many warn against beginning a book with a dream. I haven't read through your previous comments, so maybe you're already aware of that common belief :) Watch the italics. It's kind of distracting, sometimes jarring. You have done well to write in a deep pov, ... view book

Hi there, I read the first chapter and will come back for more. Truly fascinating. I do suggest combing for the word "was" and replacing with more active verbs or rephrasing. I saw quite a few of those pesky suckers; "was" is not a writer's friend :) Thanks for sharing, Rhiannon Worthy of Gr... view book

Lovely imagery. I see this is incomplete. Make sure you finish it! You got a great start going here. Backed with pleasure. Rhiannon Worthy of Grace view book