I really love the idea of this story! Your writing is very smooth only telling the reader what we need to know without breaking the flow. Wonderful job! Sofia (The Lost Inheritance) . view book

I really love the name of this novel. I think it is intriguing by itself. I also like your writing style, it is easy to read, not too bulky or heavy. You are able to keep the suspense strong and and it made me want to read more and more. Great job! Sofia (The Lost Inheritance) view book

Hi! I really think this story is very interesting. I can't wait to read more :-). I wonder if the prologue is really necessary. I think you do a good enough job of explaining things in the first chapter that you may not need it, but it's completely up to you. I noticed that there is alot of detail... view book

First may i say that love your writing style! I think your prologue/chapter one on authonomy was awesome. I loved seeing the little girls dream of life and then the realistic narrator backing it up, it totally made me smile. I like that your narrator is telling things from the past, i think it makes... view book

Very cute story so far. I like your writing and i think that it has real potential. I'll keep reading! Backed! Sofia (The Lost Inheritance) view book