I've read the first two chapters; whilst I find the excessive use of elipses aesthetically irritating, they work because the character is the way he is (if that makes sense ...). What I meant to say is that I like it a lot and shall be back (hopefully after I've finished my homework); you create pow... view book

I like your writing style - I've only read three chapters, but there's plenty of time to get back to see more. Your protagonist is likable, amusing. I'll be back. Hopefully with more constructive comments. Skye. view book

Hi I've read all of this and although it's not the sort of thing I'm generally into, it's obviously well written, a bit unusual and a decent read. I like the poems - an interesting touch. The pacing is good and the sense of Joy's nature is strong - very nice. Skye. view book

I've now read the first seven chapters and the pace hasn't decreased, which is a good sign. There's good character development and the amusing descriptions haven't ceased. On the watchlist .. maybe onto the shelf. I noticed that you have The God of Small Things as one of your favourites - it's poss... view book

I loved your first sentence. There's a Pratchett-esque charm to some of your writing (having said that, I hope you don't dislike Pratchett's books); amusement always keeps me reading, though it's carefully balanced with seriousness. I shall now read the second chapter. Oh, and what age specifically... view book