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Colin Normanshaw

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I was born in England in 1960 and live with my wife and two children in the Midlands. I work in commercial management, and write novels in my spare time.

The Authonomy site has provided an exciting opportunity to share thoughts with other writers, and I have already revised “Absence Fallacy” as a result of constructive comments I have received.

I will return all reads, and will usually comment when I decide to back someone’s work. Where I do not provide specific comment this means that I generally like what I see, but do not feel there is anything of value that I can add.

I hope you will enjoy "Absence Fallacy" if you get the chance to read it. Enormous thanks to Bradley Wind for the cover design.

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Stanley and the Women - Kingsley Amis
Three men in a Boat - Jerome K Jerome

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Absence Fallacy

Colin Normanshaw

Terry worries about his continued virginity, but will he find romance with an old school acquaintance? A tale of sexual frustration in 1980s England...


Having entered his early twenties, Terry Pickering has become increasingly concerned that he remains a virgin.
The fact that others in his social circle - in particular his best friend John and a younger work colleague, Ralph – enjoy an apparently effortless success with girls only serves to throw this concern into sharper focus.
A chance encounter with Diane, an old school acquaintance, unexpectedly results in a romance of great promise. Following his return from a previously planned holiday in the South-West of England with John, Terry is rewarded with his first complete sexual experience.
Expectations of a long-term relationship are shattered when Diane, with no explanation or warning, ends their relationship. When Terry learns of the reason for this rejection he realises that the relationship had already been doomed once it had been consummated.
Absence Fallacy is a light hearted and witty tale of sexual frustration set in England in the 1980s.

 

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I wrote 289 days ago

This is not my usual genre, but the style is wonderfully relaxing and before I knew it I was well into chapter 3. I wonder if the author is really the Angela character she writes about, as she certainly has the gift of pursuation! This is generally well written, but would benefit from a careful edit... view book

I wrote 368 days ago

This is wonderfully written and intriguing in the extreme. The sequence at the beginning are beautifully crafted, each sentence pulling the reader more and more into the story. Jason's dream-induced suffering is described in searing detail. Backed with pleasure. Colin view book

I wrote 369 days ago

Brad. Superbly written. You mix the intrigue of future lifestyle with the minutae of normal living through the thoughts of your MC and his interaction with Co. This brings your story right to life before the reader's eyes. You make it fel completely real, the true test for this genre. Backed with pl... view book

I wrote 382 days ago

This is an engaging story, with a very interesting premise. The central theme running through is the influence of Telegraph Road. The people it effects deal with it like a person. Great dialogue and a surprisingly good pace that keeps things moving along nicely. Backed. Colin view book

I wrote 383 days ago

Your scene setting is wonderfully vivid, and you bring realistic dialogue to your characters. With a thorough edit this could do really well on here. Watch out for unnecessary commas - your punctuation in general needs some work - and split up how you introduce your MC. Using his name so many times ... view book

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